I Became a Trainee God

God Simulator has not been out for a long time, and it is already following the trend. It is indeed the starting point.

"God Simulator"?

I would like to seek your opinions. The next step is to directly cut off the scenes between the main world and Chen Yu, and focus on writing the development of the pixel world, and write a story that evolves due to different interpretations of God. This is the story of Chen Yu continuing to use his remaining energy to interfere with the pixel world and thereby promote the development of the world. The reason I want to ask you guys is that the details of these two methods are different. Of course, for me, I can't write down the details. The main core of both methods is the same, which is the change of civilization, from tribes to slave kingdoms to feudal dynasties, followed by a period of great development, and then the interstellar era. When I first started writing this article, I wanted to write a story about Chen Yu changing the world and promoting the change of civilization. The protagonist is not so much a god, but in my position he is more of a tool man. But because I am a novice, I didn't handle it well when writing about the city. Chen Yu's starting point was too high (I didn't want Chen Yu to run around for various resources when he first started, which was too hasty. It would actually be much easier to write the protagonist with a lower starting point), so the writing was very toxic. From now on, I want to cut it across the board, reduce Chen Yu's role and directly write about the development of the pixel world. After doing this, I also realized that if Chen Yu's role is reduced, the sense of immersion will actually be much worse, and the stickiness will be reduced. In addition, the title and introduction of the book are deceptive, and the direct description of the pixel world later is very abrupt, and it actually looks very uncomfortable. After all, I have written less and have many problems, but I will try my best to deal with them.

The writing is so messy that I can't understand what you are writing. This kind of point of view is the development of civilization and the process of history, and you can't even grasp this point of view. The author can't even understand the god simulator so he wrote the article. Your protagonist is no better than the protagonist of the diaosi simulator. At least that diaosi can farm. Let's put it this way! If you don't know how to farm when writing about this kind of subject, then your book will definitely not be popular.

I feel like I can't understand the back part. The front part is the protagonist and the protagonist's tribe. What followed was a complete dynasty change. The protagonist's tribe and the protagonist are missing

Isn't this the same model as "God Simulator"?

The God Simulator is well written, okay, just move it. Is it necessary to add any extraneous details? Can't you put the finishing touch?

I usually take a look at the introduction and book circle. This introduction alone reminds me of a book from ten years ago...

Give up on the protagonist completely? Not a good decision

The book is quite good, but you probably have too many typos.

After reading about ten chapters, the transition was too bad. In Chapter 11, the two people who were looking for the boss of the protagonist got off the car in the first part, and chatted with the protagonist in the next part. After beating the Wolf God, they suddenly found the extraordinary organization.

Hey guys, please be kind. I am also aware of the "God Simulator" you are discussing, and I have indeed seen it. The protagonist's golden finger is indeed taken from "God Simulator". The idea of ​​"God Simulator" is great, but I didn't write the essence of this cheat. The first three chapters were written overnight after I finished watching "God Simulator". Looking back, the style of the writing is indeed very similar. It is easy to be questioned. I will not refute this point. It is indeed easy to cause suspicion. But I coded this book word by word. The style of the content behind it is different from that of "God Simulator", and the plot is not similar. So readers, please don't get into arguments. Reading is for relaxation. Arguing can easily ruin your mood.

I feel like there are a lot of things that haven't been written. For example, where did the ants come from? Have you worn armor yet? There is no described process for these

What the hell happened later? It turned into a story about Li Yunfei leading the system to cultivate immortality. What the hell?

Let me complain, in the real world, we always forget or ignore the previous ones, and we have to go forward. Sometimes there will be something missing, but we will explain and fill in the gaps later. But the writing is still very good

There is absolutely no progress in writing the introduction

The overall feeling is that the writing is good, but there are many places that are not described, especially the reality, and it still feels stiff when watching it. Big cheers for the author! Will be better