Konoha: Starting Hashirama Template, I Choose the Ancestor

This book has many flaws. It always speaks in the third person, which is like watching a monkey show, and it also likes to explain everything. These are the two biggest flaws.

The protagonist keeps nagging and nagging, and the protagonist has to say three sentences to the other person to feel happy, and he still smiles arrogantly? And said some embarrassing things

Do you want to listen to what you wrote? What are you writing about?

I feel like the author was mentally unstable when he wrote the book.

The big tank is okay, but the writing is poor.

I really don't know how to describe it. I say that I want to be my ancestors, but in fact, I am restricted in every way. I obviously can't beat myself, so I have to let them jump in front of me like flies? Even if it is risky to fight the third generation, if you don't kill a little bug like Mizuki, you still have to keep it alive. Even if she begs you not to let her go, you won't agree on the surface, and then send someone to kill her behind the scenes, saying she died on a mission?

Kaguya

What is written here? Didn't understand. And the dialogue, it feels so retro

Main Palace

This book is disgusting for three generations. If you can't accept it, please leave early🙌

If the dialogue is sophisticated, you should go to the Three Kingdoms

Author, you are just a street writer who writes online articles. What do you know about politics?

If you don't have the writing style and want to write in a literate manner, painting a tiger will not turn you into a dog.

After looking at it, in one word, it was really embarrassing.

Is Luo Liba's number in the water? The plot is moving slowly

I don't know what I'm writing…

I can't stand the relationship between the characters anymore, the settings have been changed in a mess, and the characters are untenable.

It's so embarrassing to watch. Can't this conversation be more normal? It seems like I am watching the Three Kingdoms

The author writes that it is impossible to beat the Six Paths Immortal. Dingtian is a beginner of the Six Paths. Fighting against a Six Paths Peak is a matter of one hand. If you want to beat me, it is very simple. Just don't use your brain.

Can you write more realistically? You could also learn from Nikko Konoha. What is the essence? Just be more realistic.

The development of the wooden shield is a bit rough

The cover looks like a Ninja Turtle. . .