Wizard Lord: in the Middle Ages, He Keeps Recruiting Younger Brothers

I'm so good at playing cards that I only learned about dark wizards during the three years of time travel?! Damn it, brother, did your family get it from Oli? Even if you don't want to see anyone, you can go to the Seven Wizarding Church, right? ! The most awesome thing is that missionaries in wizard skins, wizards must believe in gods to use witchcraft... 999 Is really 6 times over. There is no logical balance in this worldview structure. Just add whatever comes to mind. The poisonous points are not limited to these. The black wizard and the white wizard are opposites, right? Under what circumstances did the protagonist deceive those white wizards?! You haven't even deceived the black wizards, let alone the opposing white wizards? ! Is it possible that it's another supporting role's trick to reduce the intelligence?!

You were able to persuade 90% of people to retreat in the first two chapters. Are you slaves who can run away whenever you want? Are nobles able to betray if they want to? The family behind him hasn't arrived yet? And you are a wizard, why did you hide for three years? Do you want the only person left to love you? The writing is really disgusting! I advise you to change it! If some slaves don't affect anything, can't we just start the game normally? You insist on disgusting people!

I've tried poison for you. Let's go. You can't resist it. Have you ever seen a wizard who believes in gods and gains power? This is what he wrote.

Written by a primary school student, everyone can understand it

This book is pretty well written. The first page told me what it was that made me run. It didn't waste my time at all. It really made me cry to death.

The first two chapters alone are enough to kill people. On the one hand, the feudal medieval background is emphasized, and the differences between noble status and class are engraved in the bones to make the knights fear him. On the other hand, the slaves ignore the protagonist and the family behind him and run away whenever they want.

The first chapter talks about various issues, not to mention that the servants have run away, all the knights under him are preparing to rebel, and where are their families... The families of these knights are still in the territory. It is too game-like and does not consider rationality. Details determine success or failure. Come on, author,

After all, he is still the eldest son of the lord. Who would dare to cause trouble for him? That slave dares to run away without permission? Just like your son is a loser, but who dares to hit your son, will you hit him?

After reading Chapter 23 of this book, I felt a bit unreadable. A few suggestions for the author: 1. In the medieval background, the lower-class serfs were stupid and even the lowest-level management was very short-sighted. The author should pay attention to this aspect. 2. Class level: When a noble faced a witch and was not as powerful as him, he bit his lips viciously. This picture is so beautiful that I can't even imagine it! Make the class hierarchy more obvious and be careful in describing emotions. If you can't do that, it will turn into psychological activities! 3. The timeline can be weakened but cannot be eliminated. Are you so anxious after having a pet? Just blow on it to make it grow? There are many places where there is water, but you just don't have water! 4. Check for typos more often. Fortunately, there are too many typos in the first few chapters and later chapters. If you really don't know how to write, you can read some writing methods in "The King" which are worth learning from. In addition, read more medieval books. Serfs are just tools in the eyes of nobles, even inferior to some big animals. Small people can have the wisdom, and noble thinking must also keep up! I wish the author good luck in subscribing

The protagonist used his aura to frighten the tax collector of the Wizards Union so much that he even refunded the normal tip and tipped money back. How big is the protagonist's face? Are they elementary school students? You, a supernatural wizard, shouldn't be afraid to show your face. Can't they sense it? Since you can't sense the protagonist's place where a bird doesn't poop, why should you reveal your identity and inherit the family property?

I've only read half of the first chapter, and I'm sure it's a bad book.

He didn't get off to a good start. If he had such strength, he would still be kicked out of the family as the eldest son. Why did you start a rebellion? If you hate it, you will be given the space to do it! If someone found out he was a wizard, would he be hanged and burned to death?

Shen Nong is dead, so he has to burn paper. In the first two chapters, he was poisoned and died. The servant can run away at will, and the knight can suddenly turn into a gangster and jump back. The protagonist's family is papery and has such weak control over its subordinates.

So why do wizards believe in gods? Aren't wizards true believers? For them, gods are research materials, and the difference is whether they can beat them or not.

At the beginning of Goodfellas, it is described that wizards believe in gods. Wizards and gods are mortal enemies, and wizards believe in truth.

Wizards actually believe in gods? Withdrawn

This second one of yours is a bit poisonous. If you do it, you have to check it after you finish it. Words like aura should not appear in the future. It is incompatible with the Western world where the protagonist lives. You can use spirituality.

No one reads this good book. Is it because of the name?

It's very well written, good luck to the author