Hunting Game: I Have a Pair of Invisible Eyes

It's not bad. It's a mindless and cool novel, but there's basically no problem with the logic. I hope there won't be a female protagonist.

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Are you writing a stream-of-consciousness novel? The writing style is a bit abstract and neurotic. Many sentences, paragraphs, and plots are jumpy.

Looks good, I hope there won't be any women, and I'll be more decisive in killing.

The plot is okay, a bit mindless and enjoyable. I hope some additional settings will be added later.

The content is too straightforward, it's a bit conspiratorial. I can guess the plot from the front and back 🤔

You are so fast

Not enough

Narration, genre, live streaming, leisure, you can read it when you relax. The writing is pretty good, but some parts are not handled well. For example, only the number is displayed at the beginning of the game. Those bosses can use props to find the exact name and place. It would be better to change it to a rough area. Then, the killer behind, why he came, who he is is not explained clearly, it will be better with a slight modification.

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Let me ask you about the heroine. Is this book without a heroine? If yes, is there much xo? Are there many female supporting characters? If there is a female protagonist, is it a single female protagonist?