All the Members of the Game Ten Thousand Realms Are Myself

It feels like the writing is a bit messy, and if you don't know these games or movies, you won't be able to get the author's ideas. And now the main plot is not promoted, the protagonist is not outstanding enough.

Write it carefully and don't want eunuchs! ,. . . The other book I'm following is similar to yours, but it's inexplicably Eunuch. . . . . Come on, hold on

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On how the protagonist of ordinary people rises in the chat group: 1. Upload your own concepts of death and aging through the chat group store function. After all, there is a curse of immortality. The concept of death can offset the curse, and some people who are tired of living just want to experience death and aging, which can be used as commodities. 2. Since there is no concept of death and aging, you will automatically have an immortal body. Through the crazy exercise of the immortal body, the human body will be pushed to the limit in a short period of time, and then the extreme power will be uploaded to the red envelope but not sent out. After the human body is pushed to the limit again, the red envelope will be canceled to regain the original power, allowing the human body that has reached the limit to break through the limit. ps: Due to repeated operations, the human body continues to break through the limits, and the upper limit will also be increased. Therefore, the strength gained after each exercise to the limit will also increase accordingly. As long as you keep exercising, upload and download, you can strengthen yourself infinitely.

The chat group can make its own power into red envelopes, and at the same time, it will lose this power. This function is very powerful. As long as you use this function to block the bug, you can easily break through the limit. Even an ordinary person can upload his comprehensive ability after training by blocking this bug, and then re-train to the previous level. After that, he can get double the ability by downloading the previously uploaded comprehensive ability. He can easily break through the limit that he could not break through before, and this operation can be repeated.

My evaluation is: not as good as "Traveling Through 99 Worlds Simultaneously"

I really want to complain, how come every fan who writes about pirates thinks that pirates are the source of chaos? Your theory is similar to the change of dynasties in the past dynasties. It was because banditry was rampant in the last years of the dynasty and people rebelled, so dynasties changed. It is not because banditry was rampant and people rebelled because the court was corrupt and the people were in dire straits.

The game world in the book includes but is not limited to stand-alone, network, PC, mobile phone, console, etc. As long as it is a game, it may appear in the book. If there is a movie or TV show about the game, the author's settings will be the main ones. For example, Tomb Raider and Resident Evil have both games and movies, and there are many games with complicated settings, so the settings in the author's book will be the main ones. For example, big IPs, such as Pokémon, Marvel, and DC, not only have games, but also comics, animations, and movies. They are still mainly set by the author and are not necessarily limited to a single game. If it is a comic-adapted game, such as Dragon Ball, Naruto, Bleach, One Piece, One Punch Man, JOJO, Under One Person, Fox Demon Matchmaker, etc., They all have original comic books, so the world will be dominated by the original work. After all, these types of games are basically fighting games, and there is no storyline. Even if there is a plot, it is based on the original work. If there is a world you want to see, you can leave a message below. I may write about it after learning about it. After all, I haven't played many games. Although I am writing about the game world, I am not actually a plot person who pays close attention to the plot . I prefer action games to plot games. It can be seen from the first few worlds in the book that they are basically action games, so if there are plot errors or setting errors, please forgive me.

It's boring. Why is the author able to avoid all the cool points perfectly? He has some strength.

The author has read "Traveling Ninety-Nine Worlds Simultaneously", right? It's too similar.

Games such as Restaurant Dungeon and Vitality Knight that are too entertaining and lack a complete plot are not suitable for dungeons. Just like the Law of Talos in Clash of Clans, it can be used as an Easter egg background board. Occasionally, it can be mentioned as a special product to support the plot progress to show its presence. If there's another copy like this, you'll pounce. I suggest you choose a popular or classic IP for the next dimension. Such as World of Warcraft, Halo, and Medieval Warhammer. Or dig deeper into the dungeons that have already appeared, such as Three Unlucky Souls or Guigu Bahuang. How about a wolf?

The author likes writing about Sakura so much that he might as well write a separate book. Is there any difference between this kind of writing and a collection of short stories?

What can I say? I have read some of this book. Although it is not poisonous, it is also not very exciting. The writing is too bland and it feels like reading a text. The plot basically follows the original plot without much imagination. I think it shouldn't be so difficult to surpass the Ninety-nine Worlds. Ninety-Nine Worlds is basically just living in each world, doing things, not following the plot, and adding some driving and pretending to compete. If you follow this routine, wouldn't you be able to write a good novel? I've watched a lot of clone videos, and it's hard to describe them all. The cameras, girls, and nannies all come in turns. Even those who are not poisonous can't write any new ideas, which is nothing compared to water.

I feel like you want to send it. What are these chapters about? Write two chapters in the east and two chapters in the west. Are you going to use the fragmented narrative of the soul system? If you don't plan to focus on the plot of the new world, don't waste extra words. Just explain it in a chapter and a half, just like Resident Evil and Clash of Clans. If you want to write, write a few more chapters and finish the staged plot.

It can be seen that the author wants to make his own way out of 99. Each world is written in a very broken way, but this will lead to a strong sense of fragmentation. Some worlds are skipped before reading two chapters, and it is really bold to have Tomb Raider 9 before it is released. , I really am not afraid of violent death. The first few chapters came to Guigu Bahuang. I thought I would write about Xia Yu's experience in the Guigu world before joining the chat group for a while, but it turned out that he joined the group just after receiving the jade pendant, and then jumped to another world. It was really too scattered.

I just thought about who Russell is for a long time, and it turns out that he is the protagonist of The End of the World (Marvel). Repeatedly traveling through Marvel has made me a Marvel fan. (Outrageous)

If you write about Warhammer, we Warhammer people will follow you.

Ah, there is something I hate. I am still a fan of that Zhuzhou game, _(:з∠)_, Zhonglu, I won't watch it this time.

For some reason, I like to mention Seven Days. After subscribing to this account, I will leave a comment 😭 First of all, when I saw Guigu Bahuang, my heart sank. After reading two chapters, the more I read, the more sinking I felt. I am not here to pour cold water on you, but I sincerely want to persuade the author not to go astray. I have written something before, and I understand the feeling of getting into trouble after writing it. A fan of the authorities, you have fallen into the pit of the ancient tomb chapter again. If there is no plot, you can only write for the sake of writing, stuffing things into it, and only clear soup and little water will be left after writing. This does not mean that you are not good, it is the same for everyone. Warner's adaptation of Tombs has been thrown into the street, and they haven't even responded... As for Gui Gu, you have made this problem even worse. In the first few minutes of the game, you were asked to write four chapters... It's not that you are stupid, it can be seen that you are advancing the plot, but this game has no plot... Game playability and storytelling are not the same thing. Types like Tombs, Don't Starve, and Fantastic are all games supported by playability, and the plot is too weak. The game Guigu is even more powerful, it doesn't rely on anything, it relies on feelings and the mods of the boss ghs. The essence of Duke style is actually a combination of Zhutian style and chat group, a kind of old wine in new bottles. The plot is advanced in multiple lines. The world can be very complicated, but there is a core world for each type of world. You should mainly write about this world instead of trying to fill in some plots. The result of being exposed to both rain and dew is that I have no impression in the end. In 99, only seven or eight worlds were rewritten. The Classic of Mountains and Seas and Prehistoric 123456 are both used as backgrounds for the Xianxia, ​​making Duke the Harpy. The three major migrant comics each have several background panels, Bleach's Swordsman's World, Naruto's Pokemon Yu-Gi-Oh, etc. The modern world background board focuses on Marvel, Digital Dragon Ball Saint Ultraman, etc. The common feature of these background boards is that the setting is interesting to hear, but when it comes to concrete writing, few can write brilliantly in a short length. Some are boring worlds with pure background boards. Some are full-length novels that can write two million words. It's not that Gui Gu shouldn't be written, but his storytelling is too poor and is only suitable as a background board. Cutting into Xianxia can be cut from a world with complete plots such as the domestic Three Swords. The boss of Gui Gu Bahuang helps the protagonists of these worlds to rise. Or use the world of martial arts to enter, the world of martial arts embraces the world of Xianxia, ​​and then switch to Gaowu or Xianxia. It is not wise to list this node and write the Guigu line like boiled water. To be honest, if you were just unhappy with reading it, you wouldn't have been so bored writing here for so long. I really can't bear to see such an eye-catching book go up and down. It has been almost eight hours since it was released. Take a look at the chapter description of the first chapter. In addition to the chapter description as a souvenir of the release, how many comments are there discussing the plot? Six articles. Compared with the lively dozens of chapters and hundreds of articles in the first chapter, it doesn't even look like a book. Calm down and sort out your outline, re-plan the progress, filter the game world, see which ones can be used as core operations, and which ones can be used as background boards to show your face. I will continue to support you, subscribe for a while, and wait for you. I also hope you can adjust well. I hope we can see the same interesting works as before. The above is what I say from my heart. If you feel that you are just pointing fingers and talking nonsense, there is no need to quarrel with me, just ban me and I will understand.

Author, the Sakura chapter is too long. What you wrote is that I am everywhere in the world, not a Sakura fan. Please condense the fun ideas that you particularly want to write about, and skip the repetitive daily routine, otherwise you won't know what to write next after finishing the Sakura chapter.

I just took a look at Time Travel and saw that there is a Celestial Dragon protagonist. Now in the latest episode of One Piece, Oda has played a big role. Every three years, the Celestial Dragons capture a bunch of slaves and throw them to a non-franchised country for massacre. How does the author plan to solve this problem?

It's too niche. I've heard of most of the games but never played them. I have no interest in reading them because I don't know what's interesting about them.

The writing is quite good, but I have never played any of those games, and when I skipped through them, it felt like I hadn't watched anything.

The writing is quite good. Some games I have played have a great sense of immersion, but those I have never played can't match my brain waves and I don't know why.

Brother, can you write an ending? If you don't have an ending, you're a eunuch.

By the way, the author could definitely write about Sakura. For example, mix some settings from other magical girls. For example, someone who recently became popular became Evil Magical Girl, and someone from the past signed a contract with Kyubey. The reason why everyone doesn't like to watch your version of Sakura is because it's a bit too boring and is exactly the same as the original version. In this case, it's better to watch the original TV series. It can be written exactly as it was originally written, but with some other elements added, such as Q coins. For example, they suddenly discovered in their daily lives that a certain Kyubey signed a contract here, causing witches to run rampant. The final battle was to just fight Kyubey.

Let's start a new book and write about Sakura. I like it so much.

I feel that when the author wrote it, the personality of the protagonist was corresponding to his shortcomings, or that the personality of the protagonist was not too prominent. Most Xia Yu has no characteristics that make people remember him.

Dude, you are awesome, I collected 50,000 words and wrote 2,000,000 words.