A Certain Scientific Boy

. Half a chapter is gone... Please help save me some trouble. I didn't understand the background of the Demonic Forbidden City. It is said that it is a demon god, but there are people who have cultivated to become immortals. However, they don't know much about demon gods. They look down on demon gods, do not look down on superpowers, and do not look down on magic. If they want to cultivate immortals, they say that cultivating immortals is superior to others... Okay, that's all for half a chapter.

The protagonist likes to be called "Master". Note that this is in Academy City, not ancient society. And it feels a little oily. A grown man uses his ability to lift the skirt of a strange girl. Be careful, the author may not know that some details will reveal the creator's true thoughts. The original work is mostly about familiar interactions between girls, which shows that the original author likes girls to post. Strange men and women do this, well, I can't say. . . 🙂

After reading a few chapters, I don't know what the rest of the story is going to be like, but as the protagonist, he can be bad, slutty, holy, funny, good-looking, or even stupid. But this article gives people the impression that the protagonist is a businessman who practices so-called immortality.

I can't watch it anymore, at least it doesn't fit the mentality of a cultivator. The protagonist is cultivating the Great Freedom Demon, right?

It feels weird. I haven't seen the main plot of this book so far. The protagonist does not follow the original work or write an original plot. He spends the whole day talking to Ruizi, flirting with Mikoto, and chatting with his five subordinates. The main character plays the role of cultivating immortals in a Japanese comic with magic and super powers. I can only say that it is very funny and has a strong sense of fragmentation.

Sorry, I have to add an oriental system. You can't even understand the magic ban system and you have to add a Qi practitioner setting. This system is no longer popular now.

Prison Color Haimei

Did you make a mistake, author? In the first chapter of the three golden chapters, you are just like Tang San, with a long section of water settings and the main character's guesses??? Forget about water, you can pull and step while watering. Forget it, the technique of writing through is that you can watch and dislike a certain character, arousing the resonance of the audience who are also dissatisfied with the character, to quickly increase your popularity, or the fan stickiness of a certain audience (for example, a certain passerby must criticize Aki) But at the beginning, you directly dislike the world background to show your sense of superiority. For fans, your writing technique is called self-explosion Because the beginning of Chapter 1 You haven't come up with any interesting jokes yet. In this case, the audience selected by the title of the book or other information comes from this IP. And at the beginning, you only have this IP that is attractive, because you haven't told your own story yet. In this case, you didn't use this IP to attract traffic for your story, so you blocked this IP first???                                                                                                                                                             but you have to wait for yourself to cross the river first. You can't tear down the bridge before you cross the river...

The book is actually pretty good. I don't know why my grades are so bad. Logically speaking, it wouldn't be like this if there wasn't a big hit. This writing style belongs to the Japanese-light writing style of the SF translation more than ten years ago. It may not be popular with people nowadays, but that is not the main reason. The harem is a bit inexplicable and lacks empathy. For example, Tsukiyomi Komoe, Fukiyose Siri, Himegami Akisa, and Shirai Kuroko have no need to enter the harem. They have no emotional basis, and the lack of side descriptions will make people feel disgusted. There are too few conflicts in the main and branch lines, not dramatic enough, and the overall process is too dull. To put it bluntly, online articles are still enjoyable articles. Whether you are writing light novels or fan fiction, how to suppress the description through foreshadowing and finally explode to highlight the exciting points is the core to win the audience's attention. Internet novels that are not enjoyable can only be Shimizu novels. Even Shimizu novels must highlight emotional descriptions and inner portrayals. Except for Misaka Mikoto and Saten Ruiko, no one else is satisfied with this. This is why it is inexplicable that your harem is closed. This book has some advantages, the logic of writing is still there, the description of transitions is also good, and some of the jokes are not vulgar, but the general direction problem cannot be covered up.

A question suddenly occurred to me: are there more people who read fanfics who have read the original works or those who have not read the original works? For example, I watched the plots of Naruto, One Piece, Bleach, Conan and other anime at the starting point, and I understood the general world view structure. As for the Magic Forbidden, I have only watched the Super Cannon anime and the first part of the Magic Forbidden anime. I still know the other settings from the Internet. As for the original novel, I have actually never read it. So I'm curious, whether there are more people who read fan fiction at Qidian. Com: those who are fans of the original works (or anime fans) or those who haven't read the original works.