Nightmare Game

I've seen Chapter 95. So far good. The setting structure is very good. The dream setting covers the logical shortcomings in the narrative, and the playback of the scene after the end further fills in the holes that are difficult to understand in the narrative. These two advantages greatly enhance the rationality.

The ride was really great, but unfortunately the turning point at the end was a little too toxic.

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I like to make up stories for myself before going to bed, weird and exciting or fantastic. I hope that the dream will succeed. It is an indulgence that abandons logic and common sense and morality, and it is a carnival to escape reality. When I woke up, I really wanted to know what was at the end of the dream, but I couldn't continue to dream because people's rationality had revived and those purely subconscious dreams had been fragmented. Yinan walked into the nightmare to find the protagonist, and I especially wanted to know what it was like when I, as the protagonist of the dream, was "awakened" in the dream. Okay, I have the material for tonight's dream, welcome to the dream.

After reading the cycling book in one sitting, I now have a hunch... The next copy will determine whether this book will become a god or a ghost. For me, the most interesting thing in survival stories is the protagonist's struggle as a human being, how to behave and be a human being. As a human being, you should have your own joys and sorrows, your own persistence, and you should do things you know you can't do. Of course, you should have your own selfishness, your own pride, your own selfishness, and your own dark or fragile side. So for me, I just like to see the immaturity of the protagonist, and I like to see the human side of the protagonist. Of course, some people like to watch Dark Dragon Aotian, and some people like the protagonist's high IQ and rational solution to problems. Everyone's enjoyment is different So the first 99% of this copy of Riding is extremely successful in my opinion. Until the twist in the last chapter, I don't know if others like it, but I don't like it. Because this copy uses the first half of the page to tell the plot process, and the second half to tell the story that people are collective creatures after all, loneliness can drive people crazy, and the story of the car driving forward at the end teaches people a firm heart. I thought the ending would be the protagonist's final firmness in his heart, his humanity, or his persistence, and what he gained from this journey. And then you tell me that the protagonist wanders around and obsessively erases his own humanity? ? ? ? Anyway, I don't quite accept it. In my opinion, this ending is a denial of this copy. And in my eyes, this behavior is equivalent to a major personality change of the protagonist, and has nothing to do with the new protagonist. Moreover, this nightmare space has a TM card bug. It has persisted for hundreds of years even after clearing the level. It is forced to grow for the sake of growth. The author's deus ex machina is too obvious. I am now looking at this transition in the middle and the next dungeon. The high probability is that the protagonist will become a cold and rational monster who is not interesting. I choose to abandon the book on the spot. There is a small chance that the character's personality can be balanced. If the author has such writing style, I believe you can become a god in one book.

Is the author not suitable for writing novels? I just read a book about the finals, and your talent is overflowing, and now I feel it is a pity. The desire for expression is too strong, and the updates are unstable. Commercial novels still have to make choices. You have to put market elements and what you like into the box without distinguishing. In the past, the commercialization of novels was not enough, just to please myself. When writing a finals game article, keeping the story simple and writing a pure game competition article, and high-quality articles are definitely not a problem.

Updates are too slow, which is what I fear most about unlimited streaming. . 😭😭

You are so cruel. You have to cut it off. You can update it slowly. It's not like you don't have to write a plot. I don't know why you have to cut it. Let's talk about it and let's find a solution together.

The author may also be able to write about the previous infection fear in a good style.

Come on, author~ The Final Circle is the first book I have fully ordered from Qidian. I really like your writing style. If you can update it stably, you will definitely become popular! Testimonials from a bookworm. I haven't read this book yet. If the update is stable, I'll catch up later. If it's unstable, I'll keep it.

The author's ability is still very good, and the copy is well written. Except for the third one that gave me a bite, the first two are above the average level and have no bad points. If the author pursues the infinite flow of the main copy, there will be no problem at all. Then there is this reality. Anyone with a little bit of discernment can see that it is just a castle in the air, completely serving the plot, without any authenticity. There are only a few chapters in total and a few things are said. Apart from laying the groundwork for the subsequent plot, it is no problem. The rest can be said to be a complete mess. It can be said to be collapsed to the extreme, because even if there is no outline and the early foreshadowing plot is written, it will not collapse. I will mention a few unreasonable things as evidence of what I said. Let's first analyze the things surrounding the protagonist. The first is the school problem. What's the point of fighting for your life once in seven days and not studying in school like a normal person? I won't consider it if the meal expenses are less than a month old. I hope the author will not forget it. This is the problem of debt. You owe as much as others say you owe, right? Let's not talk about why we don't have a penny to go to a five-star room without food, food and accommodation. Just pretend that we don't want to go. The 10 million must first be mortgaged before we can borrow it. Okay, this doesn't matter. Just pretend that the world is different. The original owner's house has only four walls, does it look like someone with 10 million? Can't you contact the reporter? The loan company bullied poor students and actually issued 10 million more debts out of thin air. This is a good hot spot, right? It is definitely impossible to find out what the original owner did with the 10 million. Since the money evaporated out of thin air, it is obvious that he did not borrow it. It just happens to be combined with the fact that he borrowed 10 million without property mortgage. Even if it is found out, the protagonist can be popular for a short period of time to make some money, and then he just accepts it directly. This is obviously completely serving the plot and has no authenticity. The above is not a problem. The most important thing is who will play this game? Reality should not improve at all within five or six times of clearing the level, right? Let's assume that everyone who clears three dungeons can get 1,000,000. Then everyone who plays this game should be in desperate need of money, right? There shouldn't be anyone who is sane, right? I remember that there seemed to be a program that gave you 500,000 US dollars to complete a project. One program was to pour cement into a tank and you could run out by untying the rope. This project would stop in time and was completely non-life threatening. No one dared to try it a second time. Even if a mentally disturbed person tried it, few people would dare to do it, right? There are also questions raised by other book friends about who can enter the game. Then there is this completed copy. Seeing that the relationship between the girl in the middle and the protagonist is so good, I found that there is a slight problem. Plus the author kept making it clear, I thought it was impossible. In the end, this long copy is useless in the end, just like the ending of the book is a dream. Except for special works, this ending should be avoided by all authors. Give up the opportunity to improve your strength, and then write about the protagonist's growth and scrap a long copy. The side effects are quite good, few are praised, and many can't stand it. Writing about the protagonist's growth in online articles is completely an accessory. It will be the same without it, so few readers will care at all. It is not impossible for you to use a copy specifically. It is so long, and there is a twist, and the ending of a miracle has raised the side effects to a higher level. You said the protagonist's heart The attitude sublimated once, and then competed with the car to get the first place. Absolutely few people said that this plot was not good. If you did this, it would be like bringing the shortcomings to the table. It would be okay without adding any lubricant. I think I can wait and see, and just 100 coins will be a good reward for the first two copies.

I've read Fear Infection, it's really well written, no worse than Platinum, come on,

The first two stories made me feel like a god, but the third one left me speechless. No wonder the monthly tickets are so low.

If I start with a debt of 10 million, I will definitely lose it and not be able to pay it back. At worst, I will become a Sanhe master╮(￣▽￣)╭

The writing is very good, and every book is a small masterpiece.

If your book is placed in fantasy, it can at least exceed 10,000 copies. It is a pity that 1,000 people paid to read it.

The author I've been following since the alternate dimension is cut off again. It doesn't matter. As long as you write again, I will still read it.

I am the ultimate bookworm. The author writes very well. If I continue, it will be a masterpiece at least.

Woc is raising and raising and is dead

It's really a surprise. Alas, I think the author's writing style is pretty good! I still remember the author's last book, I Can See the Finals, and I thought it was pretty good. Is the game area too lonely?

I remember that there was a pirate copy of the novel "My Day Has 48 Hours" which was also very long, and many people complained about it.... But the novel was still successfully completed.

Books are left on the bookshelf and disappear 😂

This book is great. I'm also following the last one. If you write it, I'll order all of it.

These three stories are quite interesting, a bit like the infinite horror team annihilation war But they were written too early. It would be better to write them in the middle of the release And there are a lot of mysteries. The intention is good and the logic line is complete. I like this ending very much, but the taste of writing is not acceptable to everyone.

With this update speed, my dog ​​doesn't even dare to rest like this

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Do you have any short stories to use as ideas?

Does the author still write books? I really miss it during the book shortage. The author's talent is really about to emerge 🙏🙏🙏🌹🌹🌹🌹

Hope to finish this book

Has the author changed his name or stopped writing?