Ancestors: Starting with Gwen Spider-Man

Fortunately, I see that the titles of these two chapters are wrong. If you don't subscribe, just consider this book to be a eunuch. I will leave this book on the bookshelf for now to see when the author officially cuts it.

Chapter 113 is the finale. This is the author's ability. By the time I posted this comment, the author has been out of touch for a few days. Tsk

I am an old reader who has been following the book for a long time. I would like to say a few words. When I first saw Gwen, I thought it was very interesting. After all, there are very few Spider-Man novels, let alone good ones. This book was really good in the early stages. The story of Peter and Gwen was really well written, and the characters were really fleshed out. I thought the plot would revolve around the Spider-Man system, but it went wrong later. The author may have wanted to expand the macro Marvel world, but it felt too rushed. , And I only watched Marvel movies, and only Spider-Man comics. I thought I would write about the multiverse, but I jumped directly to DC. I even started writing other worlds before I finished writing my own world. Just like restarting when the writing is about to collapse, the author really has to control the plot. Some readers said before that the story of Spider-Man is enough, but now it feels like I have added everything I want but the finished product is unsatisfactory. Alas, I can only say that the author should work hard.

It is rare to find such a fan work that does not have other characters to become the protagonist when the protagonist is currently invincible, but has the character's own character curve, and from time to time intersperses some sweet and daily light-hearted and funny plots in the serious main plot. I am very optimistic about the future development of this book. Good luck to the author. I hope you can maintain your original intention in describing the world in this book. I look forward to the wonderful stories that will happen between our ancestor Parker and the characters who are already wonderful or are still on their own legendary life path in the Marvel world. Not enough! ! ! ! ! 😡😡😡

I found that American comics should not have such a thing as system flow, because everyone who has read comics knows the plot, and I feel that a system is needed to give you choices. Isn't this contrary to the beliefs of the people of the motherland? I can do whatever I want, I don't need a task to remind you, I just do it if I want to do it! The biggest flaw of this novel is the system. As a bookworm of 10 years, I couldn't stand it.

The battle with Odin is over in chapter 70, what to write next?

Not good grades? From the beginning to now, I feel that the writing is quite good, and it is also good to cultivate Gwen! ! !

Little Claude, are you having trouble with money? How come your update speed makes me willing to give you a reward? Come on, good brother, and update everyone's eyes. I can also give you a reward, right?

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You can describe the protagonist from the side and the perspective of another person.

I don't think it would be interesting to wait until the main character's identity is revealed.

The author doesn't want to be a eunuch. It's really good. Please don't keep updating.

Superman must be divided into periods and people. The original Superman could not fly, but was strong enough to lift cars and jump over the World Trade Center with one jump. Although he could fly in the golden age, his combat power was not outrageous. One of the biggest misunderstandings about Superman is the Silver Age. Many people think this is one of Superman's strongest periods, but it is not. In the Silver Age, Superman was only fast enough to reverse time, eat kryptonite alive, pull galaxies for exercise, and blow out stars with a sneeze, which is barely a galaxy level but not a single universe level. After that comes the main event.        p，，5，，       Strictly speaking, the Thinking Superman is a suit of armor, the full name of which is the Thinking Robot Armor. He is a statue-like thing created by the DC Universe's own defense system after the Monitor family entered the DC Universe. However, he looks like Superman. To activate him, he needs the fusion of Superman from both positive and negative armed universes as energy. The Thinking Robot Superman Armor was almost destroyed after a battle with the Dark Monitor Mandrake, and has not appeared since. It can barely be regarded as one of the top 5 strengths of the Superman family Let's talk about the Golden Superman. He is also a Superman in the P-Super period, but he is another Superman in the parallel world. For details, please refer to the All-Star Superman. Due to various reasons, this Superman stayed in the sun for millions of years and became the Golden Superman of the fifth latitude. He is considered the strongest in the five latitudes, so he has also become one of the top powers of the Superman family Continuing with the P super world line, 10 years after Doctor Manhattan stole the DC universe, the DC universe restarted, and the time came to n52. N52 Superman is called the weakest main universe superman after the Silver Age. His upper limit is only the star level, yes, no more. And due to the poor performance of n52 comics, he is also one of the very few supermen who died as a main universe superman. After the death of n52 Superman, his existence merged with the P super. Since that issue was called the Rebirth issue, the P super n super fused Superman was also called R super, that is, Reborn Superman. In the 6-dimensional multiverse, other achievements include normality and Darkseid's 64th level. Since the Dark Metal comic series clearly stated that Mandrake was just a pawn of Pam like the three Creation brothers, the Thinking Super who corresponded to Mandrake was also kicked off. At the same time, at the beginning of the future comic, Golden Superman was defeated by the Seven Deadly Sins, while R-Super defeated one of the demons of the Seven Deadly Sins, so it can be said that R-Super is stronger than both Thinking Superman and Golden Superman.​

Fafa photos of my wife Gwen (*´｀*)

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These chapters are a bit of a break from the book. I've been skipping these recent chapters. Protagonists like Superman or Homelander cannot build a team. Once a team is built, it will develop into a nanny. Or you are sure to write new ideas about the interaction between the superhuman protagonist and the team, or you can directly create various major events to bring out the role of the team. Otherwise, everyone wouldn't want to see the protagonist act as a nanny.

It's a pity that a good book was completely ruined because of one wrong judgment by the author. I can only say that he has become a clown just like the author's name.

I think that the protagonist only obtained the template of the motherland, and gained the power plus his own decision to do whatever he wants. It does not mean that his brain and way of thinking have become the original people of the motherland. Don't forget that the protagonist was an adult with rich social experience before gaining the ability, not a puppet that was ripened by the people of the motherland.

I saw that Spider-Woman wants the protagonist to be Catwoman's teacher, and I hope the protagonist will not take Catwoman into her harem. I am not against a harem, I just don't want the protagonist to take in girls just for the sake of taking in girls. The previous plot describes Catwoman and Harry as obvious partners. I don't want the protagonist to think that because they are not together for some reason, my actions towards her are justified. Nowadays, the protagonists in many books only have eyes for women and have no brothers or friends. Such protagonists are really not attractive at all.

Wudiwen was forced to change the map, and the emotional line was directly cut off. It's really better to start a new book. This book is considered a post.

Spider Gwen

Still wondering why eunuch, I checked the comment section. It turns out that the author learned the operation of No Return of Heroes and forgot about it. I can only say that I am really brave. I am just curious about how many subscriptions I lost after I forgot about it?

Why don't you join station b and do something? I was bullied by the Internet 😢 I suffered from depression 😭 My suicide experience 😓 I plan to start over 😡 Don't laugh at the challenge 😄

Gwen transformed herself step by step from the real girl to the queen of the harem

Maguire🤓🤓

According to Marvel's statistics on the popularity of heroes, Spider-Man is the highest. I have always felt that writing this has great potential, but you are too pretentious. The neighbors have already followed suit, and there are also followers on their own platforms who can write faster than you.

The content of Time Management Bureau is a big failure! Not to mention how many people have watched the TV series, but are there any existing American comic book writing time bureaus that are more successful? No! Rarely even involved! Why? Because the plot of Time Management Bureau is inherently bad.

You spend money to buy something and you can leave a negative review if you are not satisfied. Why can't you leave a review? It's not just one person who complained about it. Regarding the inexplicable map changes in the last few chapters, how many people complained about it, which shows that everyone is not satisfied. I hope it can get better before complaining.

My eunuch radar is on alert, I hope the author can slap me in the face

Let me tell you my true feelings after everyone started trolling Because too many people started trolling, I subscribed to the chapter after changing the map to see where the problem lies. Frankly speaking, there is not much problem with the reading experience. Apart from the common problem of invincible flow, which is that the combat power expands too quickly and makes it difficult to write, there is actually not much problem. Looking at the update time of the catalog, if there is one chapter a day or a chapter every few days, then this speed will definitely not satisfy the readers. If you can do 3 chapters a day, readers will not have too many complaints about the smoothness of the plot. Summary: This is a book with great potential, but the update speed will become the biggest problem of this book. There is no need to worry about the outline.