Awesome, Angel Yan Asked Me to Be Her Boyfriend at the Beginning

I feel uncomfortable seeing you lose your memory. Personally, I feel it is a failure. Even if the memory is restored, it will be another person.

The writing is good, and the emotional description is relatively high-quality among male videos. I suggest you write it with combat and science fiction as the main line and emotions as the secondary line. Now I feel like it has some hints of romance. Less useless plot, more fun, let's downplay the other time traveler! Originally, double penetration was poisonous, and it still accounts for such a large proportion. Fortunately, I don't write much now, so I have time to rest. In addition, it is a headache for the protagonist not to know the plot. Originally, the biggest highlight of a fanfic is that he knows that the plot has been modified. Otherwise, what is it called a fanfic? At least some major plot protagonists need to know, right? Otherwise, if I was depressed once watching the original drama, would I be depressed again watching this one? The above is my personal opinion, I hope you will continue to work hard! The overall writing is good, and the plot will be optimized even better!

South of the Milky Way, it's natural!

To be honest, the amnesia section was poorly written, especially when Yan's memory was sealed at the end. The memory of the first hundred years after more than seven thousand years had no impact at all. Don't say that love can change, it can't change anything. At most, it can be regarded as people who have been with each other. If you take the oath of guardian angel to each other, it can be explained. But I think you didn't write it. What you wrote was love. It was handled very poorly.

It would be better to just die on the planet Tyro, and then be brought to Earth by Heimerdinger to fuse the super gene for 7,000 years, and then meet Yan again. It would be much better than creating dozens of plots like this before. The main original plot is not well written, and it is simply incomprehensible.

The author's virgin post is mine 😏😚🙏

Why? Why! ... No way! It's so hard to write a fanfic of "Blade Blade"! I just added it to my collection and said I'd save it and get 500,000 to check it out again! This is gone...? ? ? Which father-in-law did the author run away with? Eunuch Wei? Eunuch Cao? Or Mr. Rain?

The king is back!

When I saw the sealed memory, I knew I was going to be tricked, and I was really speechless when I talked about matching other men later... Although the author forcefully explained that it was a joke, can this kind of thing be a joke? Is the angel's oath of guardianship so cheap? It's really hard to describe the protagonist's character and combat prowess.

Beautiful

Ahem, this is a room dedicated to complaining. Come here to complain about anything you see, but please be merciful.

Hey, what's the use of well-drawn characters! However, the author is acting like a monster and does not take the ordinary path, insisting on giving readers a taste of arsenic.

The more I watched, the more confused I became. Suddenly I lost my memory, and I was still a super novice.

Without strength, you will be nothing but dust in a few hundred years

Ao Xing

It was okay at the beginning, but then...

The title of this novel is really interesting. When I was looking for fan fiction, I saw one in which Angel Yan asked the male protagonist to be her boyfriend, and another in which Angel Yan dumped him.

Aoxing Suzibel? Ao Xing can represent a Chinese name. Ao, surnamed Long Su Zibeier. Homophone: grandson

Come on! Don't stop updating, persistence is victory

North of the Milky Way, Wuyan is the most beautiful!

Please continue to write books seriously, just be plain and refreshing, don't jump, don't be a monster, don't be a eunuch!

Noanche is a mess. Can't read

Why beat Ge Xiaolun? Do you want to hit Kesha?