Ferry to the Heavens: Hong Kong Comprehensive Start

The author is great. This book is good. Personally, I think the sense of immersion is too low. I need to find ways to improve the sense of immersion. The protagonist in the book feels a bit inexplicable. The tasks are too rigid, and the operations of completing tasks and eradicating the roots are also too rigid. I would like to make a personal suggestion. A small character like Xiaosha is actually very simple to grab a gun. After attacking the police, the two of them fought for the gun and it went off, killing them. A report was all done. It was too deliberate and dangerous to assassinate Xiaosa. After all, the protagonist cannot ignore the gun. After all, the timeline from the protagonist's acquaintance with Xiaosa to the assassination was too short. And the protagonist also hinted at Xiaosa's robbery. The Ministry of Internal Affairs had reason to initiate investigation procedures.

To be honest, I listened and read. It's getting more and more vicious, and the protagonist is set to be ruthless and decisive. What the hell are you writing about Luo Zuer and Le Huizhen? The author should listen to and read his novels when he has time. Lao Zuer went to the dock and killed an undercover agent? The protagonist actually has no temper at all. There is also the character Chili, who dances like this with the protagonist. Being the main character who eats shit?

Uncle Dong is very happy that you can call Uncle Dong, but he doesn't like your tone very much.

Chapter 1 Too much hehe makes it easy to persuade people to quit

I skipped the Hong Kong variety show! I went to see the supernatural, thinking that there might be some different surprises, I was wrong, I was deeply wrong This book is hopeless, farewell

At the beginning, he said he was a ruthless person, and then he made a U-turn and became a softie. I don't know how the author thought about it. No matter what the layout and writing method is, don't make such a U-turn if you get straight to the point.

Let's take a look at the style of JC in the anti-gang group of the PTU mobile unit played by Simon Yam. The anti-gangster group written here looks like a fool. It can act like a young and Dangerous boy in this way. It's a p.

🙂. . . I can accept a harem, but I can't have sex with each other, and be slept with each other at every turn. It was quite interesting when I saw it before, but as there are more and more women, I feel tired. 🙄

Clean up the source. The word "motherland" has been slandered too much! Hope the author can correct it. It's not a big deal, but it's also part of cultural invasion. Stop slandering this word! Don't let outsiders use their words to slander us! Motherland and comrades are such sacred words.

After reading almost twenty chapters, I felt that it was pure recklessness, but the kind of recklessness in my head! With such a personality, no one can protect him, and he was able to be promoted to Shazhan in more than a year?

The protagonist obviously has a gun but still uses Bajiquan every day

If I don't write about the police, I find that these people don't know how to write about Hong Kong variety shows.

What follows is a lot of nonsense. The plot progresses slowly and the content is repetitive. What is the name of the book? I might as well just call it Zhutian.

In the first chapter, Inniu said that the protagonist is a strong man, but in the second chapter, he said that the protagonist is too weak. Was this so contradictory from the beginning?

I became more and more speechless after watching it, it was so different from the beginning. The pig's feet seem to have no idea what they are doing. They are completely obsessed with it. They are messing with women everywhere, occasionally interspersed with tasks, and the writing is not very good.

Damn, I accidentally bought 100 chapters and finally finished reading it. I almost got poisoned to death.

As I keep raising it, I feel like the author has changed. The plot made me confused while listening and reading.

What's the situation? You can't find a way to modify and release the blocked chapters? If you watch it intermittently, you shouldn't stop watching it completely or stop watching it after watching it.

I often talk about numbers, just how many times I can tell you about one thing, and many of them have similar descriptions.

The author writes less popular science and more content. He updates a lot of popular science every day. No wonder everyone talks about water.