Hunter X Hunter: My Nen Ability Is a Zanpakuto

Generally speaking, you don't want to read Zanpakutō if you see multiples of them. You would rather see the author's brainstorming about one Zanpakutō. To be honest, multiple Zanpakutō were almost completely written down a few years ago, but with the addition of Nen ability, I can look forward to it. I hope the author will not be anxious and polish his work seriously.

The title of this book should be changed. It should be called Invincible Me Pretending to Be Pretentious in the Hunter World. What is the use of your Zanpakutō ability? ? Is the Yan Ling Pill of the swastika just a thunderbolt? ? The initial solution is to give you lightning-like speed? Even if the original work did not describe the power of Enreimaru Shikai, can you write about a familiar Zanpakutō? Look at the three knives you chose. They are all knives that barely appear in the original work. Before the Thousand-Year Blood Battle of Yan Ling Wan, he just appeared and put a lot of people in the sea. He was instantly killed by a family. No one knew what Shijie was used for. The Swastika Jie Thousand-Year Blood Battle appeared all of a sudden, and the usage was not what you described here, so except for the way of appearance, his ability basically depends on editing, and your editing is also very poor. The five-star head itself is useless, and it was originally useless. The same goes for Hongji. If you don't know about Swastika, Shijie's specific abilities have not been explained by the store manager. Apart from putting up a shield, he basically doesn't know any other abilities. As for the ability of swastika, I don't think your writing and creative abilities can be well controlled. I don't know if you gave up those Zanpakutos whose abilities are already very clear in order to highlight your creative ability and write something that no one has seen. But after reading almost 300 chapters, I can only say that your abilities are simply not possible. Not to mention your original Zanpakutō abilities, your control of the plot is also very poor. The plot should not advance as fast as it should, but not as fast as it should. Furthermore, the protagonist's strengthening makes no sense, the strengthening mechanism is inexplicable, and the upgrade of the Zanpakutō is also very outrageous. The protagonist's Zanpakutō will gain experience points as long as it kills monsters, and it can be upgraded. It's okay, but it's nonsense if you can swastika your LV3. Besides, how long did it take for him to awaken his ability and kill the ant king alone? He didn't experience any life-and-death battles. He was always in a crushing battle. He upgraded his Zanpakutō and improved his telekinesis ability. It didn't take long for him to be able to overwhelm the ant king. Then, if the previous battle includes the description of upgrading the Zanpakutō on the spot and improving the ability to read while alive, then the battle with the Ant King is the most inexplicable. You go from being no match against the guild leader, being unable to defeat even the Swastika Enreiwan, to instantly killing the legion leader, and then defeating the Ant King with overwhelming power. During this period, there was no battle plot, and there was no upgrade of the Zanpakutō. In the final battle, the protagonist defeated Catwoman with one blow as soon as he appeared on the stage, and then died in seconds, leaving two legion commanders. Why? Like I said, the plot should be fast and slow, and the plot should be slow and fast. There are less than 300 chapters in total. How many chapters have you written about the succession battle of the Cajin Kingdom? How many chapters did you use for Greedy Island and Ants? ? If you want to make the Dark Continent chapter the main content, then why not just awaken Ryūren Ruohuo? ? There is no need for a swastika. As long as the swastika is released, the entire hunter world cannot be dealt with. The 6,000-degree high-temperature flames cannot be blocked by any hunter, not even President Nitro. Such a good idea, the abilities of various Zanpakutō VS various telekinesis abilities, direct attack swords, Kidō type swords vs various series of telekinesis abilities, through the improvement of one's own telekinesis ability and the liberation of each Zanpakutō to strengthen the protagonist, hunter exam, fighting arena, and battle brigade , the protagonist's Meteor Street origin, Greedy Island, can be used to improve the protagonist's telekinesis ability, improve the Zanpakutō test, use different swords or the combination of several sword abilities to defeat the enemy, or survive in battles with powerful enemies. In the Ant King Chapter, you can swastika the first Zanpakutō, and then defeat the ant king through swastika. What about you? Just go to the invincible style. Let's say the invincible style is invincible. For example, you are invincible with the Zanpakutō. There are so many invincible abilities in the original book, but you can't be invincible with any description of combat, whether it's a supersonic attack, the 13km distance God Killing Gun, or Senbonzakura's billion blades, let alone the heaven-destroying Ryuken Wakaki. It turned out that it was almost 300 chapters, and there were only three swords that barely appeared in the original work. Except for Yan Lingwan who made it up a little bit, there was almost no description of the rest. Then what is the significance of your ability to be a Zanpakutō? You just said that because the time traveler merged with the soul of the original native, it is not necessary to awaken the special ability.

? ? It's too complicated. Just write about one ability when writing a book. Keep it simple.

Personally, I feel that your writing style is okay, but your characterization is too weak, which doesn't give me a very high impression, and you don't know much about some of the settings of the original work. To be honest, hunters are not suitable for multiple Zanpakutō. Hunters are more inclined to think. A single Zanpakutō is enough.

Author, please don't mess around, Hunter World is 24 hours, not time. If you blindly change the second setting, it will only make readers run away!

There's no need to have too many knives, it's good to have a specialized one

This book is ruined. This kind of book that gives N many abilities at the beginning is basically 100% sure of TJ's life, even if it takes the comic book route and has too many abilities, it will collapse.

The ability to read is flawed. With so many Zanpakutos, what is your flaw? There is no perfect reading ability. There are always shortcomings

With so many abilities, it's better to write a dog protagonist, just a husky. Anyway, it doesn't matter if it's human or not, dogs can do it too 🤭🤭🤭

Did the author write the soul-cutting sword backwards? Mankai can increase spiritual pressure three to five times. You wrote it backwards. In the Thousand-Year Blood War of Bleach, Captain Mankai was held down by the hammer because there was no Mankai to increase spiritual pressure. There was consumption, but it also increased several times. After the consumption, the captain in Bleach could only hold on for about one minute after he was able to increase spiritual pressure. No such setting