Immortality Martial Arts: Starting from Becoming a Disciple of Xie Xun

Is the author a member of Huanyuan Tai Chi? 😂

Adult Susu I like this, what do you think?

From beginning to end, you are writing about how to practice martial arts and how to practice. You are writing a novel, not opening a martial arts gym! Are you going to teach everyone how to practice martial arts? There is no content at all, who are you going to write it for?

As evidenced by this post, this book will definitely hit the street

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not very good.

Only a thousand days can be a thief, how can a thousand days be a guard against thieves? How was the previous plot of Cheng Kun handled like it was clearly designed to not catch them all and let him run away? Holy Mother? Cheng Kun should be allowed to show his true colors. Even if Xie Xun doesn't kill him, he should at least destroy Cheng Kun. It's really unconscionable to let him leave to cause trouble.

What can I say after reading a few pictures? If you are short of books, you can see if the book is not very outstanding and see how it goes in the later period. If it is not very outstanding in the later period, the probability of being sold out is a bit high. There shouldn't be too many subscriptions once it is on the shelf. But to be honest, it is free to read. It is not worth the money.

Is it so easy to become a disciple? Drop your wits!

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not so good, and some parts are quite poisonous and a bit disgusting.

The subject matter is very good. It's just that the author is not very good at describing the character of the protagonist. If he calls it "too stubborn", he is praising him and saying that the protagonist is timid. Not bad! The author also described that he is really not good at fighting. As far as my reading imagination is concerned, I can only imagine two old men who are about to enter the coffin doing Tai Chi. Especially the chapter where the protagonist and Zhang Sanfeng are fighting. I read it twice. Did the protagonist and Zhang Sanfeng fight? Anyway, I looked confused.

Author, ancient people did not have a word to call themselves. The protagonist calls himself Yunqi... Which is a sign of being uneducated and illiterate, such as Cao Cao: Cao Cao and so on. Liu Bei calls himself: Bei something. Elders, those with higher status than you can call you names. That is to say, words are taught to others. For example, "Brother Run" and "Brother Zhongzheng"

This golden finger? ? ? ? The author of the original version is still there, and Tai Chi alone has become the biggest cheat.

The term "arranged marriage" appeared in the late Yuan Dynasty 🤫

Shouldn't the Thunderbolt Divine Palm be the Hunyuan Thunderbolt Hand?

The front part is pretty good. What should I write in the back part? Skip to read.

It's not ancient, it's not today, it's really awkward to look at.

Susu is only five or six years old. How old is Zhuer? You are really caring about her mother. Now I am starting to think about whether I can have a baby with her in more than ten years. The Wild King is short of women, and the author has to pay IQ tax.

When you write a book by yourself, what happens if you don't have time to explain it at the beginning or at the end? It was clearly written before that Zhu and Bai met Wanwan at Green Willow Villa, but later it turned out to be their first meeting... Are you frustrated?

Does the author want to live on subsistence allowances forever?

You may not particularly like the recent chapters, but the author wants to show you a more exciting world, so there is a little foreshadowing, but after leaving Qianyou Villa, the plot will return soon, please understand!

The writing is okay, but the name is not very good. Apart from anything else, from the setting and concept, it seems that there is great potential for follow-up 🥱

Rubbish, you'll know it when you see the introduction