The Road to Card Making Begins in Konoha

This kid plays house with so many exams. It's really boring. Maybe it's because my taste is different. The protagonist follows the team to adventure in the XX forest to find some elixir and encounter some monsters and monsters. Every time I see a plot like this, I feel so boring.

It's relatively superficial. Card making is just a gimmick. It's basically about political struggle.

You just call on the whole clan to kill a thief, and then you just hit him with a last hit, right? Having sex with cats every day is a waste of time and chakra

The Sannin just started going to school after World War II? Orochimaru, did Jiraiya have a psychic beast when he first started school? Those who can continue to watch, are their brains still there?

Uchiha opened his eyes as if for fun, feeling humiliated by being beaten by a cat. Why is this Uchiha not against nature?

The sofa looks nice and interesting.

The introduction was a lie and slipped through the cracks.

Jiraiya and Orochimaru, who just entered the ninja school, can channel toads and snakes. They are awesome!

There is a lot of daily life, and the main plot only enters chapter 30. Very watery. There are also idiots who only go to school at the age of 4. The three body arts are taught in school. What can they learn? Will of Fire? The plot is super draggy. It is completely different from the introduction. Even if it is written in the dungeon to fight monsters and collect card materials, it is better than the daily life plot. This is not a cool novel, it always suppresses the protagonist's fighting ability.

The book is not bad, but there are two big problems: 1. It is too exaggerated to open three magatama in the first grade, and it does not show the increase of three magatama. It is better to use one magatama. 2. The illusion supermodel who has experienced hundreds of reincarnations cannot be achieved by imagination. You must know that this achieves countless times of magnification in time. The only known effect of this effect in Naruto is Itachi's Mangekyō Tsukuyomi. ——The setting problem is too big. Many people who read Naruto fandom will be persuaded to quit. There are not many chapters and few people are following it, so the impact is not big. I suggest the author change it directly. The benefits will definitely be greater than writing like this

Suddenly I had a bold idea, can card creatures be rustled? Isn't this a real doll🤤

As long as it has something to do with card making, it won't have anything to do with it at all.

The protagonist's political fight is the one I hate the most. He is very general in his dealings with people and deals with people in a crude way. He is also not very sensitive to people and things in the world. There are many things that he doesn't know about this or that.

The timeline was too messy, and I couldn't finish my political homework. The reforms were okay. At that time, they were all small aspects, and there were no big changes in the big direction. Once they are too old to die, the small ones still can't use force to deal with F4. Once the decision is made to occupy the team, F4's black hands will directly respond to the daily task assignment: killing with a borrowed knife and assassinating, using all possible means.         ，，，，

Overall, it's well written and interesting, but it's a bit unreasonable in many places. For example, the magic of pig's feet can make people go through hundreds of reincarnations. It's ridiculous. Where does the chakra come from? What about the burden you bear on your enemies? Isn't your mind bursting with a lot of information in an instant? It's also ridiculous that Uchiha experienced the reincarnation genjutsu and directly opened the kaleidoscope. In the original Naruto and Sasuke, he didn't open it so much. Even if his talent is incredible, how can a little kid get the chakra to open his eyes to a kaleidoscope? The explanation that pig's feet can only beat cats but not ninja cats/ninja/nindogs at first is a bit ridiculous. Why can all cats be wiped out with one ninjutsu? Can't there be a wheel battle? Can't you challenge the weaker ones and then gradually accumulate cards to challenge the stronger ones? Most of the people in the ninja school don't even know much about the Three Body Techniques, and they have very few blues, so how could they not be able to defeat him?

What does Hokage school teach? Theoretical knowledge, use of ninja tools, refining chakra, low-level three body techniques, and taijutsu.

The key that hides the power of darkness, show your true power in front of me. An Mahe, who made an agreement with you, orders you to lift the seal!

This novel is interesting and the pattern is completely different from other Naruto novels

I always feel that the protagonist's brain is abnormal 🧠

Just mirror it? Or is it the cover of the website?

It's boring, I'm in the water every day. Is it really just a little fighting power but a lot of water?

I feel that what the author wrote is pretty good, and it can be regarded as a refreshing article. After all, you can't read a refreshing article with your head in your head. When reading a book, each person has his or her own opinion. Come on, author, I support you.

Give me some advice. Please state the specific problem. It is best to have evidence, otherwise you will feel unstable after resuming the update.

Is it like Uchiha has a kaleidoscope? Are you kidding me? Tsunade has Kyuubi? Have you ever watched Naruto? What do you want to do? So it showed me the youthful political struggle and what else ⊙∀⊙? , Can you please stop selling dog meat to others?

You dissuaded me from the beginning, your setting

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The timeline is chaotic. Jiraiya can channel toads before school starts and it can be said to be a fan setting, but the homeroom teacher is a jounin who was injured after World War II, and his classmates are Tsunade, Orochimaru, Jiraiya... Who did Hanzo give the title of Sannin to?