This Apocalyptic Game Is Too Hardcore

Is there a bloody plot coming? I met the granddaughter of one of the powerful people outside, and happened to save her. She also happened to have super powers (the big boss of the powerful people tried hard to hide the secret for more than ten years, and the protagonist only used a few words to convince the woman that he would help her keep the secret of super powers). Is she attracted to the protagonist? Will there be an internal struggle for power within the alliance, and will the protagonist have to help her grandfather quell the chaos?

You want to give good things to the protagonist, but you are afraid that the protagonist will be too strong and have to restrict him, so you might as well not give them 🙂

To be honest, I feel that this novel has the same problems as many other novels. It greatly weakens the power of modern weapons. It is outrageous that a 5.45 Bullet cannot penetrate the skin of a carbon-based creature. In addition, the shock wave of the RPG's close-range explosion did not knock down or kill the creatures. It's unrealistic that bone armor can stop bullets. The kinetic energy of bullets will break bones on their own. AK74 can form a large cavity in the living body. Although the entrance is small, when it enters the body, it stirs in the body like a bouncy ball. Therefore, if it is hit, it may be unable to move and bleed to death. It is not ruled out that adrenaline is nearby. The 7n22 can penetrate a 16mm special steel plate at 220m. Therefore, modern weapons are very powerful, so you must check the information before writing.

In this apocalyptic world, looting is still prohibited. I'm really speechless. Since there are players, why can't Pig's Feet issue tasks? Becoming an explorer actually requires an assessment. There are only a few people, but they still engage in cannibalism. Wouldn't it be enough for the explorer to have hands? Set up to 1 year or month and must complete specific level tasks. Enter the gross assessment. What's even more funny is that the Explorer actually has to buy a gun privately because he doesn't have the right to hold a gun. The fanatic gang all have AKs, but the righteous side actually bans robbery. Make it like a safe world.

Just like the title, it doesn't matter if it's in a movie or a game novel. The author will consider adopting it! PS: Don't be so lofty and powerful, try something more down-to-earth! ! !

The author's writing is good, but he lacks some knowledge and some scenes are unrealistic.

TM If you insist on giving me a reward, just be a eunuch

I still suggest the author to make a patch so that some of the player's words will be eliminated, otherwise it will feel weird.

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The cruelty of the doomsday is not strong, but some details are not good

When I passed by, looking at the introduction and title of the book, I felt like I was back in elementary school.

The subject matter is good, but the knowledge is not enough. Some places are awkward and some have no logic.

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This book is too boring. Fire axes and kitchen knives are relatively common. Except for a few people in Japan, samurai swords are much rarer than guns. How can I get them?

The author suggests that monster corpses can be collected and decomposed to produce items and potions, and a synthesis manufacturing column can be opened in the system.

Copied idea of ​​"I Can't Be an NPC"

A eunuch? I was chasing after him every day before the New Year, and I was waiting to support him during the Chinese New Year. Did he support me to death?

Your grades are pretty good, so why are you a eunuch? I have too much spare money. Saying that my computer is broken is actually just laziness. It just gives me an excuse.

Eunuch?

The author is not very good at describing battles. I suggest you check more information and learn more. For example, in the first chapter of deer hunting, it feels no better than when the protagonist discovers a deer. He shoots an arrow and the deer falls to the ground. The protagonist rushes up and stabs the deer's heart several times. The description of the deer's pawns is much better. It makes people feel fake. I think it can be written more detailedly. The arrow hits the deer. You can add some deer performance to that paragraph, such as hearing a whistling sound, standing upright or moving sideways, etc., And you fall to the ground directly. When the protagonist rushes forward, you can also write some resistance of the deer, such as top horns, swaying, etc., But you let the deer die directly, which is unreal.

A eunuch? No updates for almost a month

Very well written! Give me a cum

It's because he was infected with his last book. I stopped updating it for too long and he stopped updating it. I'm a little afraid that he will start a new one again.

Wouldn't the author consider writing about Japan Entertainment again?

Only after reading Chapter 9 did I realize why I couldn't continue writing this book.

Do you have any recommendations for doomsday novels of this type?

Paralyzed, it's the eunuch GRD again

Really gone? There haven't been any updates in four days.