Longevity Martial Arts: Grinding Proficiency in a World of Monsters and Demons

Let me say a few more words. If you want to promote the plot, you can set a jealous debuff on the ability of the death point. Don't force it like this, otherwise the reading will feel like "what am I doing, why am I getting beaten again"; or you can extend the time and downplay it into ordinary bad luck. Also, why doesn't the protagonist investigate the information about his location wherever he goes? Robustness is not about pretending not to care about anything. Robustness is based on intelligence, strength and a mature escape plan.

I can't understand what the author wrote, it's so confusing

The front is fine, but what's wrong with the back? It's the same old trick of showing off and slapping someone in the face.

There are a few points. Can't understand. Plug-ins can absorb death energy and increase death points. Since the death point can ignore the realm and curse the enemy. Such a big killing move. The protagonist has never taken the initiative to find and absorb the death energy. After reading it for so long, I haven't said that absorbing death energy will shorten your lifespan. The second point is something I don't understand. The protagonist has a good proficiency level. The biggest advantage is that you can become a master even if you are just doing it. Don't take advantage of such a huge advantage. Every time, the plot is forcibly added, and every time the protagonist is written so that every time he thinks about it, trouble will come to him, and the protagonist passively participates in some advanced plots. However, at this time, the protagonist's martial arts skills are not great, and the death point is stretched thin. He didn't have the ability to overturn the chessboard, but he just went ahead and brushed off the high-level plot that he shouldn't be involved in. . . The sub-protagonist survives halo-style and non-stick pan style. It looked so awkward. After a while, it can be viewed as a refreshing plot point. But. The author keeps arranging troubles for the protagonist one after another. . . The further I looked back, not only did I feel less refreshed, but I also felt that it tasted like wax and I couldn't eat it anymore!

Too many mistakes, too many ideas, a bit taken for granted, let's cut it out

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It's a bit unclear, and it looks baffling

What's written above is so good! The author didn't have an outline, so things got messy later.

The front is okay. What is written on the back is a mess.

It's really ugly to do something Western fantasy