I Will Practice More in the City

Very beautiful, I persisted until Chapter 10 before being persuaded to quit This biological father is already very poisonous, but the most important person to persuade him to quit is the cafeteria waiter. His attitudes towards the protagonist and the protagonist's father are completely opposite. When the two of them started fighting, they didn't know what was right and wrong. The first reaction was to push the protagonist away and yell? I don't know what the author is thinking I persisted here and continued the NC operation in Chapter 10. Book friends who want to get into the trap are recommended to read Chapters 9 and 10 first. If you can resist it, you can read it Finally, what the hell, if you are here to ex me, I admit that you did it. I feel really uncomfortable reading it. I haven't encountered this kind of book in the next few months. I want to curse...

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't read any more. One thing about the content of a system made me speechless. There were so many items. The second thing was that the content of the book was a bit overwhelming. It's my mother-in-law's. As the saying goes, if you keep interrupting, you will be confused by it. There is no need to drag the content out so much.

Find a factory, you are not suitable for writing novels

Why does the protagonist always encounter a lot of bad things, including killing people, burying corpses, and pyramid schemes and brainwashing? The protagonist is not a superhero. Let's write something normal.

I thought it was a good book, but it turned out to be garbage. What did the bloody plot want to express?

There is a book called I will practice more in the real world. I suggest the author to study it and not come up with so many poisonous points.

It feels like everyone has a golden finger and is suppressed in various ways. One side wants to build a memorial arch, and the other side wants to be something like that.

When you see the eighth picture, is this screening readers? What kind of crap did you write? ! ! ! ! !

I thought it was a martial arts practice article, but it turned out to be a bloody urban ethics article. . . . . It's not that the writing is bad, I've encountered even more outrageous things like this in life, but I'm very curious about the author's psychological state when the author's introduction is written like that and the content is written like this. It's too outrageous.

I read a novel so early in the morning and was poisoned by the plot. I quickly ran away

Okay, I also admit that I was successfully persuaded to quit by this shitty person.

Fifteen year old bookworm. Chapter 8 Death from Violent Poison

It's extremely poisonous, so you can't watch it at level 1.

I am Shennong Chapter 10. I didn't make it through. Stop coming, everyone. Just look at the table of contents

Isn't it sad for the author? Nowadays, people who read novels just do it to pass the time and have fun. There is no way out for realistic writing. Although you can write what you want to write, your results will probably not be good. Looks okay

The writing is a bit strange and a bit poisonous, so I'll leave it alone and wish the author better and better as he writes more.

After reading three or four chapters, I found out that after getting the golden finger, even my father wanted to change, so he forcibly arranged for someone who knew martial arts. Poisonous!

It's a rubbish plot. You have to give up your seat on the bus in what age, but you still have to emphasize that it's a city person or a rural person.

The writing is based on the defense. A 14-year-old bookworm died after trying poison. It's really disgusting.

Brother, when I see so many comments scolding you, hurry up and write a new one as soon as possible. The writing is too exaggerated, the settings are too exaggerated, and the plot is too slow. Your type of novel is not suitable for slow pace, and you come up with ideas one by one. Please sort out the outline first, and then set the main plot. Don't ramble here and there.

Let's report it together! Stop being disgusting!

For example: 1.5 Is a transcendent level 2.0 Is the limit of the human body She hasn't even reached 1.5 In 200 chapters, what are you doing?

There are really many poisonous points, brother. The character development, plot advancement, cultivation process, and attribute point acquisition methods are all a bit anti-human. There is no sense of fun or immersion at all. The three golden chapters of this work are a failure. I suggest you rethink the idea.

I have only read one chapter. It is so dense with poison points. There are many novels that add point flow, but this is the first time I have seen such a detailed breakdown. What points are added to strength and inner points, and then also divided into a lot of data such as upper and lower limbs, and heart. And being broken up at the end feels a bit strange. Also, the woman who bought his house wouldn't ask the protagonist to help him support his boxing gym later on.

I read a few chapters and couldn't stand it.

It is extremely poisonous. Just after the death of his adoptive father and adoptive mother, a scumbag father who has never met appears, and his mind is confused. Don't you know to leave the city and go to the mountains and forests to practice? According to the settings, most of the martial arts classics on the Internet have abridged versions, or should you visit famous mountains and historic sites to practice and grow everywhere?

If you want to skip the previous plot and only watch the protagonist's training, you can move directly to Chapter 52 after understanding the basic settings. The ending of the early plot is in Chapter 41.

Shu'er? There are a few people in life who say that, ugh!

You can divide your cultivation according to essence, energy and spirit, but it's useless to divide it by parts.

Because he is afraid that the country will find out that he is an extraordinary person and stop practicing? After returning to his hometown, he spread the breathing method to delay the death of others? ? ? ? ? Author, do you know what you are writing about in these last few pictures? I can ignore the little points mentioned above. After all, no one is perfect and everyone has different personalities. But where is the logic in these last few chapters? I really... Want to swear!