Adding Points to My Cultivation in the City

It's so beautiful, I persevered until chapter 10 before giving up. The biological father was already quite toxic, but the real deterrent was the coffee shop waiter. His attitude towards the protagonist and the protagonist's father was completely opposite. When the two got into a fight, he was oblivious to right and wrong, and his first reaction was to push the protagonist away and yell?

Find a factory job; you're not suited to writing novels.

I thought it was going to be a good book, but it's just trash. What's the point of this melodramatic plot?

Why does the protagonist always run into so much trouble? Murder and burying bodies, pyramid schemes and brainwashing—he seems to be involved in everything. And he's not some kind of superhero! Write something normal, please.

There's a book that calls me to add some cultivation in the real world; I suggest the author take a look and avoid creating so many problematic plot points.

By the eighth page, is this some kind of reader selection process? What rubbish is this?!

It feels like they've already got a cheat code, yet they're still suppressing everything else. They want to be virtuous on one hand, but they also want to be... Well, you know.

I thought it was a martial arts training story, but it turned out to be a melodramatic urban romance... It's not that the writing is bad—I've encountered far more melodramatic things in real life—but I'm extremely curious about the author's mindset when writing the introduction and the content like that. It's outrageous.

I was reading a novel this morning and the plot killed me, so I'm leaving now.

Extremely toxic; level 1 is definitely not worth watching.