Founding a Cultivation University

Disgusting... The synopsis claims to create a cultivation world from scratch. And what happened??? Suddenly there's a Dragon Group, a cultivator management department, and other cultivators in the world. Did they start writing randomly without even an outline?

The book started off well; the school was newly established and the protagonist was invincible, which got a bit boring. Campus life was barely mentioned, and the school stopped generating revenue. The protagonist was busy exploring new worlds and seemed quite restless. Then, he added some cultivation in the real world, and the book became a hit. The protagonist gradually grew stronger through cultivation.

Keep up the good work, author! The beginning was interesting; it didn't start with any clichés like showing off or being arrogant. One thing to note is that the protagonist's focus on romance is a bit excessive. The part about Qingqiu where the protagonist is written feels a bit like he's developing a neurotic personality. We should probably switch it back soon!

Qingqiu didn't really need to appear so early; it's only just begun. There's a lot to develop and build. Appearing so early gives the impression that they're out gallivanting before they've even settled their own affairs, which doesn't provide a very good reading experience.

The idea is good, but the main and subplots are too messy. Following the typical pattern of novels or TV shows, the main plot is the skeleton, and the subplots are the veins. If not handled well, it becomes very chaotic. The content about teaching students hasn't even been developed yet, and the protagonist is already running off to Hu Kou Village to recruit the remnants of the cultivator clan.

The book has a good concept, but unfortunately the author can't handle it. First, there's all the forced humor, which is really awkward to read. Second, there's all the excessive illustrations. You have to understand, most people who read this book are looking for educational and cultivation stories, but the author has basically abandoned those themes and just throws in a bunch of random stuff.

In a modern cultivation academy, students should be begging to enroll, not soliciting students through invitations. The more mysterious the academy, the better; ideally, it should select one student from a million applicants.

I couldn't even keep up the act in the first chapter! Dude, can you please get your act together? You're a cultivation university! A modern cultivation university! If you just casually mention that you teach cultivation, and then show off your skills, the line to enroll will stretch from Xiamen to Beijing! And then, just to pad the word count, they even hired a cleaning company to clean the house.

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is terrible. You might as well have just recruited some privileged children who are already extraordinary, instead of worrying about so much. It really reads like a simplistic, amateurish novel.

The part with the system and the egg was the most confusing; I couldn't bear to watch it. It was definitely overly toxic. Everything else was passable; I'd give it a 6 or 7 out of 10—it was watchable.