The Cyber Maniac Is by My Side

The first person is really not that good. The first one is like a little kid's ramblings. I can't read it 😅😅 Sorry, it's like a really uncomfortable running account.

The rest is okay, but the front, the first 7 chapters are a bit messy. I remember it seems to be a problem with the narrative structure. I'll revise it when I have time. There will probably be a lot of people reading it after the revision. Besides, it's best not to copy the original plot in the fanfic. Who is the protagonist? The main point of view must be the protagonist, because it's the first time I saw someone wearing a female V. I don't want this book to be eunuch anymore.

I'm in such a hurry to write that I can write down a lot of words. After all, there's a lot of words and it's not enough to read.

It shouldn't be. Hasn't Taiping Prefecture been unilaterally announced by ncpd to be expelled from Night City and no longer provide services? It seems that this method has also reduced the crime rate in Night City. The cyberpunk setting collection on Station B has this content. Or is it that the timeline has been moved forward so this cool operation has not yet appeared?

How strange! But it's also really cool! 😁😁

Well written, I will reward you and Fujimoto Shu in a ward

My writing skills are average. A better word is that the author has not carefully studied the personal pronouns and writing methods of online articles. A worse word is that my elementary school student next door can write better than you after two days of studying.

Bao Terror is a completely independent paramilitary organization in Night City. NCPD has no ability to speak loudly to Bao Terror. Apart from the company, Bao Terror is the biggest one in Night City. The reason is that in 2023, the wasteland had to be returned to Japan due to a nuclear incident, and military technology had no time to take care of Night City because of the fourth corporate war. By 2030, the ncpd directly declared collapse and undefended due to high crime rates. The security and safety of the entire city were taken care of by the mobile terrorist team. By 2 During the era of great reconstruction from 040 to 2060, NCPD recovered with the help of the company. However, during this period, the Terrorist Mobile Team also continued to develop and grow, and after 2055, it became independent and became a country within a country in Night City. Its power was even greater than that of wasteland and military technology.

It's okay. It smells like cyberpsychosis. From other people's perspective, V probably can't hold the prosthetic body anymore.

"V, have you heard that a madman killed Arasaka Tower?" "I didn't build it!"

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter, a man dressed as a woman?

My evaluation is that it is not as good as my two

When will V feel sorry for Lucy again 🤓

I'm optimistic about you and hope to continue at the current pace. As long as you don't jump, the ticket is yours. ps: Don't stick to the game/anime plot. Several new books follow the plot completely. If you had just released anime and games, you would have done this to fill a gap in the market, and maybe you could still make a living, but now you are completely seeking death.

It seems that the author has passed the postgraduate entrance examination, so let alone continuing to write and open a new book, he may say goodbye to his career as a writer. Although it is a pity, congratulations.

Update soon

The most powerful cyberpsycho in Night City. 😏

Hope to write more about David. Lucy interactive

Rewrite a story about how the data sage of the Adeptus Mechanicus transformed the servitors in the Whirlpool Gang, and prepare to study how to travel through time.

A good start. It would be nice to continue to stay at the company. Chicken beats up Adam and then dominates the company, which is so damn smart. The author knows nothing about 2077. He has withdrawn it. It feels like he originally wanted to watch a Netflix drama, but finally found out that it was shot by Kuaishou in a vertical screen without any brain.

Can you re-open a new book? The new century and the text are completely connected to heaven. Why not re-open a new book?

It would be great if we could guarantee to update it once a day. It's so fun to write.