I Can Rewash the Gift of Life

Author, you continue writing, I will take my leave now.

Doesn't your conscience hurt when you see those things that are said to be well-written? In the past 10 years, Shen Nong personally tested the drug. First of all, let's not talk about the plot of more than ten years ago. Let's just talk about the writing style and modern dialogue. The words "this girl" and "daredevil" appear in the context of modern dialogue, which makes my skin crawl. Is this how you talk to your classmates at school? Secondly, the logic of the plot is completely illogical. The image of the aunt created does not match the behavior. The husband sold the house to save his family and wanted a divorce. After the adoption, the child could not learn well but could make money playing games and even earn tuition fees. He was given the opportunity to train in the club's youth training. Even though it was explained that he could make a lot of money, he still disagreed and refused with the blunt reason of old thinking. It was inconsistent. Just imagine if a money-hungry woman could use a trash that was the breadwinner of the family, why not? Summary: This is a beginner's work, both in terms of plot and writing, it is very poor and is not recommended for consumption.

By the way, I would like to give the author a suggestion, just focus all your talents on licking your aunt. In this way, the protagonist is happy and the aunt and family are happy. Definitely a good dog-licking biography.

Watch it and tell me how you feel. As an orphan, the protagonist has received the golden finger of talent. As a child who has been living in his uncle's house for so many years, he should have known that the only way to change the status quo is to study hard. No matter what the Mathematical Olympiad or other competitions, he strives desperately for results instead of falling in love or starting a business. Life of a student), entrepreneurship and love should be placed in college, but it is a pity that the author's description of the protagonist's personality is too failed. In high school, you really only need to study hard, participate in competitions, and if you have the ability, you can consider publishing a paper, then your skills will come up all of a sudden, instead of falling in love or starting a business. Can a minor child, and not a reborn person, start a business like that? Can he outplay those old foxes?

I've only read two or three chapters, and I'll just talk about the issues in these two or three chapters. First: Add gaming talent to learning talent, and transform from a scumbag to a top student overnight? I personally think this is very unreasonable. After all, there is a process of learning. Even if you are a genius, you must have a learning process. Even if the explanation is to tap into the memories deep in the brain, the protagonist shouldn't be able to do the Mathematical Olympiad directly, right? Second: Judging from the author's description, the protagonist should have relatively low self-esteem at school and at home, but the heroine came to ask the protagonist a question and you confessed your feelings. Is it too fast? As a person with low self-esteem, should I be confident first? And then confess your love?

It is full of the style of 16 years. The protagonist's family should be borrowed from the protagonist Lu Mingfei of the Dragon Clan. The transition between family relationships is not smooth. The writing is average. Goldfinger has no sense of presence. The heroine is poisonous. Shen Nong can be seen.

After only reading 2 chapters, I left immediately and couldn't make it to the third chapter.

I've read a few chapters and can't stand it. The main character's character is not likeable.

It can only be said that developing games is not as good as studying hard. If you are really talented and become a great scientist, this businessman is nothing.

I feel like this is a female author. A male author wouldn't write the first few pictures. If you read more books written by men, you wouldn't write such disgusting things.

Toxic, Shen Nong is here, it is uncomfortable and disgusting to watch, the writing is okay, Goldfinger is good, but as soon as the aunt setting came out, I thought of the dragon family, but the writing is only deliberately mean, the cousin failed, how many years have we lived together? Especially when the teacher asked the office to copy the homework. Although the routine was bad, the writing was very good, but what was written in the book... And Lin Yue, would a normal person talk like this? Ask a question, you write it like a whisper, your ears will turn red, I, forget it.

Isn't Qidian Orphanage bad? This aunt's portrayal is disgusting. Stop this stuff Go up the level of the book

The first three chapters disgusted me so much. They were really targeting the male protagonist at every turn. The male protagonist looked so cowardly that it made my teeth itch.

It's such an unpleasant chapter at the beginning, but I don't know how many disappointing things are waiting for me later! It's better to look for abandoned pits

Just study, study, suddenly confess your love to the best girl in the school, and then actually agree to it, there is no foreshadowing, at least you should be a little more pure in the early stage, study hard, and fall in love after just a few pictures

A male protagonist who has to bow his head under the roof of others all year round should not still have the mentality of a primary school student. When suffering unfair treatment, there are only two ways to deal with it. The first is to deal with it with a mature mechanism, and the second is to use a cowardly and timid mind to escape like an ostrich. The protagonist of a short book, let alone beak, appears as a peerless hero, but he should not be the kind of cowardly person. Therefore, in the first few chapters, the author's setting of the entangled elementary school student mentality is a bit biased.

It is recommended that you stop reading after reaching chapter 30. The plot behind it is very toxic.

I only saw four pictures and I couldn't help but want to curse.

A scumbag needs a growth process to become a top student, even if it takes just one week. The protagonist of a novel should be mentally mature, especially one who has experienced a life of hardship. If he is not mature enough, the foundation of the novel will be gone. In my opinion, for an immature person, even if a cheat or system is added, it is like a puddle of mud wrapped in a layer of gold paper. The essence is still mud. I just started reading the first three chapters, and I will continue reading.

This is from the big book list, I haven't finished it yet, but the second chapter is really a bit poisonous, yo-yo.

The king of the top of the canyon, Tongtiandai, worked hard every month during the most popular years of LOL and could earn hundreds of thousands a month. The author may not understand the value of top players. Even if the protagonist makes one or two orders a week before, it is not difficult to make 10,000 yuan a month. This is it, all the money earned is given to the aunt, but he still has to be scolded and bullied every day, and the protagonist is content with it.

It's been a while since I've read a campus novel that I couldn't finish even 10 chapters in.

It's very well written. This book made me instantly younger by more than ten years

It is better to write about rebirth. It is difficult to write about a person's mental growth.

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I was just thinking about how the family setting is pretty good, but then I hit the school belle in a cliché way. You are a person who studies or plays games. You follow so many people, don't you think Bai Xiaosheng? Do you know how to recognize people by listening to sounds or identifying people by drawings? The routine is too old.

It's really good, the sweetness is okay, but I hope the protagonist will grow up a little later.

The writing is actually okay. The protagonist has more or less the shadow of Lu Mingfei, I can only say there is a bit but not much. I feel that the author wants to express a lot, and if he wants to try his best to portray each character, these writing styles are not enough. This book would do better if the plot characters could be simplified. Summary: The author's writing style is good, but some of it is too ambitious. (I think the heroine's character is okay, maybe because she is used to being poisoned by some disgusting villainous daughters)

The subject matter is well conceived but the content is poisonous and rotten. It is recommended to reopen it😋😋😋 The poisonous points, for example, the aunt is quite annoying Then there is the girlfriend, sweet, sweet, a bit licking, I admit it After all, I am being kept (not This is a small goal for three years. What age are you doing this? I can only rely on this future mother-in-law And then I am penniless and play games. I thought it would be ok I can't stand it when I see the scene with Guigu😅😅😅