The seventy-two transformations of Earthly Evil, I shall be the Lord of God!
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This book can at least be a small hit, but the author's plot rhythm is not good enough. He keeps suppressing the protagonist's reputation by following the latest chapters, writing poems and articles, and finding various excuses to prevent the protagonist from becoming famous. The plot is too bland and the preparation time is too long, so it can only be said to be a good idea. Let me remind the author that if an article and poems are only sold in one bookstore and not in other bookstores, everyone will doubt whether the bookstore owner is the author.
Come on, well written 😍
Could it be that some factory director left the palace?
Pig's feet should not be used to write lyrics all over the waistcoat. This is obviously inconsistent with the second part of the Confucian Temple! If you want to make a statement, you should first establish your reputation so that people can believe your poems. It is useless to just write on your waistcoat! What we readers are watching is the highlight moment of the pig's feet. It's not that you are half a pig eating a tiger, and you haven't eaten a tiger yet? What we want to see is the highlight moment of the protagonist. Like Xu Qian's pretentious highlight moments, if you write like this, basically no one will read it. Pig's feet should be inaccessible to others. If you face difficulties, you can stand up if you don't have fame.
Reading is the lifeline of new books. If you like it, read it more! If you have any suggestions or ideas, please leave a message!
It seems that the main plot still requires a test of merit and fame, which is not enough for the world. It feels incoherent with the built system and looks weird...
Why do you overturn the verdict? What do you have now? Overestimating one's capabilities
There are some extraordinary plots in the early stage that are not well laid out and are a bit inexplicable.
The main point is that the protagonist is not ethical enough. In this world with monsters and ghosts, can the protagonist be more ethical? He climbs a mountain just after he is released from prison. It is difficult to understand.
There are only a few spells in total. When two people are fighting, one side: Look at my Seventy-two Earth Fiend Invisibility Techniques. The other side: Oops, also look at my Seventy-two Earth Fiend Invisibility Techniques... The whole book is just a few spells extended by the Seventy-two Earth Fiends.
Hello author, let me share some of my opinions. If you don't like it, you can delete it.
I just read Chapter 4, and I really don't understand one thing, that is, the protagonist feels depressed and wants to go hiking to relieve his mood.
I just want to say, what does the protagonist think? I just got something from the master of ghosts and gods in prison, which means that the protagonist already knows that this is a world with ghosts and gods, and this world can no longer be viewed with the theories of the previous world.
The protagonist in your book is a time traveler, right? You must have read novels, movies and TV series, right? Doesn't he know that it is most likely to encounter strange things in the deep mountains and old forests? If you want to say that this is the real world, you can say that you have to believe in science, but as I said in the previous paragraph, you have seen ghosts and gods with your own eyes, so why are you running into the mountains?
The uncle who fished you out asked you to stay at home and avoid the limelight. If he comes out after a while, can't you read a book at home? You already know that your physical fitness is poor and you can't exercise? If you don't like doing any of these things, you can just sleep on them, right?
You don't have to go out to relax as soon as you get home, right? In a situation where there may be ghosts and gods in the world, shouldn't normal people find a way to protect themselves before they dare to go out?
Why is your protagonist so brave?
It's okay if the protagonist doesn't encounter anything. In the next chapter, he meets a talking weasel?
Author, don't blame me for complaining, it's not good for you to write like this!
I know you may want to use this to draw out the protagonist's golden finger.
But it's too far-fetched! It seems that the protagonist has a big heart.
The novel you wrote is quite good. The writing is smooth and the dialogue is natural. It can be seen that your literary skills are quite good. I am just expounding my own opinions above. I hope it will not affect your mood.
Come on! Hope you can have a good result.
It's very discouraging to do so many things at the beginning.
I don't understand what the point of having a literary palace is. Completely irrelevant
The owner of the street stall is so well named.
Stop studying to test for merit and fame. This kind of practice of cultivating immortality by testing merit and fame is annoying. No matter how well you read, it is of no use to cultivating immortality. Don't constantly emphasize that the protagonist is a scholar. It looks irritating. In a world where the power belongs to oneself, the scholar is useless trash. If Yuan Shen is written as a temple, it would be better if the Confucian Temple is not connected with reading. Of course, it would also be written as a Confucian Temple. It would be better and more reasonable for the protagonist to first understand the strength of the enemy spectator before helping Gu Leyou to take revenge, and how much strength he can use after being injured.
I haven't read it yet, but I'd like to ask what the title of the book has to do with its content.
A good book, very comfortable to read, not so aggressive, suitable for old bookworms!
Don't be an eunuch again. The evil-killing, man-god, and romance between dragons and snakes are all eunuchs. I've never seen you write a work with a satisfying ending.
Look at the table of contents. How did you switch to Confucianism to cultivate immortality?
I guess the author is a man with a sword and a plow.
This book is not as good as fairy grass, but it can be considered a good source of food. Although there are some minor problems, the flaws are not outweighed.
The book is a good book, quite good. I will keep reading it. If it stops, please post a new title. I will follow it
Two thousand words every day, how can I get a chance to stand out, ugh :-(
It can be opened twice, why can't it be two per day?
I gave you a monthly pass, you said this
Publish new books, write more quickly, don't force people to keep books! At least two updates...
If you update twice a day, your results will be much better.
Is this the end? The front is very good, but it feels too rushed.
The writing is not bad, and the plot content has a lot of room for improvement, especially in the middle and later stages.
This is an old author, but it seems that this kind of subject matter is not very popular anymore, and the results are getting worse every time.
This book can at least be a small hit, but the author's plot rhythm is not good enough. He keeps suppressing the protagonist's reputation by following the latest chapters, writing poems and articles, and finding various excuses to prevent the protagonist from becoming famous. The plot is too bland and the preparation time is too long, so it can only be said to be a good idea. Let me remind the author that if an article and poems are only sold in one bookstore and not in other bookstores, everyone will doubt whether the bookstore owner is the author.
Come on, well written 😍
Could it be that some factory director left the palace?
Pig's feet should not be used to write lyrics all over the waistcoat. This is obviously inconsistent with the second part of the Confucian Temple! If you want to make a statement, you should first establish your reputation so that people can believe your poems. It is useless to just write on your waistcoat! What we readers are watching is the highlight moment of the pig's feet. It's not that you are half a pig eating a tiger, and you haven't eaten a tiger yet? What we want to see is the highlight moment of the protagonist. Like Xu Qian's pretentious highlight moments, if you write like this, basically no one will read it. Pig's feet should be inaccessible to others. If you face difficulties, you can stand up if you don't have fame.
Reading is the lifeline of new books. If you like it, read it more! If you have any suggestions or ideas, please leave a message!
It seems that the main plot still requires a test of merit and fame, which is not enough for the world. It feels incoherent with the built system and looks weird...
Why do you overturn the verdict? What do you have now? Overestimating one's capabilities
There are some extraordinary plots in the early stage that are not well laid out and are a bit inexplicable. The main point is that the protagonist is not ethical enough. In this world with monsters and ghosts, can the protagonist be more ethical? He climbs a mountain just after he is released from prison. It is difficult to understand.
There are only a few spells in total. When two people are fighting, one side: Look at my Seventy-two Earth Fiend Invisibility Techniques. The other side: Oops, also look at my Seventy-two Earth Fiend Invisibility Techniques... The whole book is just a few spells extended by the Seventy-two Earth Fiends.
Hello author, let me share some of my opinions. If you don't like it, you can delete it. I just read Chapter 4, and I really don't understand one thing, that is, the protagonist feels depressed and wants to go hiking to relieve his mood. I just want to say, what does the protagonist think? I just got something from the master of ghosts and gods in prison, which means that the protagonist already knows that this is a world with ghosts and gods, and this world can no longer be viewed with the theories of the previous world. The protagonist in your book is a time traveler, right? You must have read novels, movies and TV series, right? Doesn't he know that it is most likely to encounter strange things in the deep mountains and old forests? If you want to say that this is the real world, you can say that you have to believe in science, but as I said in the previous paragraph, you have seen ghosts and gods with your own eyes, so why are you running into the mountains? The uncle who fished you out asked you to stay at home and avoid the limelight. If he comes out after a while, can't you read a book at home? You already know that your physical fitness is poor and you can't exercise? If you don't like doing any of these things, you can just sleep on them, right? You don't have to go out to relax as soon as you get home, right? In a situation where there may be ghosts and gods in the world, shouldn't normal people find a way to protect themselves before they dare to go out? Why is your protagonist so brave? It's okay if the protagonist doesn't encounter anything. In the next chapter, he meets a talking weasel? Author, don't blame me for complaining, it's not good for you to write like this! I know you may want to use this to draw out the protagonist's golden finger. But it's too far-fetched! It seems that the protagonist has a big heart. The novel you wrote is quite good. The writing is smooth and the dialogue is natural. It can be seen that your literary skills are quite good. I am just expounding my own opinions above. I hope it will not affect your mood. Come on! Hope you can have a good result.
It's very discouraging to do so many things at the beginning.
I don't understand what the point of having a literary palace is. Completely irrelevant
The owner of the street stall is so well named.
Stop studying to test for merit and fame. This kind of practice of cultivating immortality by testing merit and fame is annoying. No matter how well you read, it is of no use to cultivating immortality. Don't constantly emphasize that the protagonist is a scholar. It looks irritating. In a world where the power belongs to oneself, the scholar is useless trash. If Yuan Shen is written as a temple, it would be better if the Confucian Temple is not connected with reading. Of course, it would also be written as a Confucian Temple. It would be better and more reasonable for the protagonist to first understand the strength of the enemy spectator before helping Gu Leyou to take revenge, and how much strength he can use after being injured.
I haven't read it yet, but I'd like to ask what the title of the book has to do with its content.
A good book, very comfortable to read, not so aggressive, suitable for old bookworms!
Don't be an eunuch again. The evil-killing, man-god, and romance between dragons and snakes are all eunuchs. I've never seen you write a work with a satisfying ending.
Look at the table of contents. How did you switch to Confucianism to cultivate immortality?
I guess the author is a man with a sword and a plow.
This book is not as good as fairy grass, but it can be considered a good source of food. Although there are some minor problems, the flaws are not outweighed.
The book is a good book, quite good. I will keep reading it. If it stops, please post a new title. I will follow it
Two thousand words every day, how can I get a chance to stand out, ugh :-(
It can be opened twice, why can't it be two per day?
I gave you a monthly pass, you said this
Publish new books, write more quickly, don't force people to keep books! At least two updates...
If you update twice a day, your results will be much better.
Is this the end? The front is very good, but it feels too rushed.
The writing is not bad, and the plot content has a lot of room for improvement, especially in the middle and later stages.
This is an old author, but it seems that this kind of subject matter is not very popular anymore, and the results are getting worse every time.
Why doesn't the author write a new book?