My Universe Sandbox

The realistic plot is written one after another😫

It's quite a loophole. In the computer, the protagonist can be said to have unlimited time. It's not just about learning what you want to learn. I think it won't take long for all the records to be found in the world to finish learning. If you use this knowledge to develop your own civilization, wouldn't it be difficult to treat your legs?

This book would still be pretty good if the real-life part was removed, but if it were added in, it would be like feeding poison, and it would be really uncomfortable to read 😰

It seems that the Lord of the Universe is actually the local network administrator, which has nothing to do with the power of the Lord of the Universe. You can learn from the fantasy of Daluo Jinxian who controls everything and creates everything. The creation flow is not easy to write. It seems that the reality is not well written.

I don't know why I have to write about a woman to take care of the protagonist's life, and all the secrets of the protagonist are exposed to women. Maybe the author of this creation story wants to write a female protagonist. If so, please say so. I will abandon the story directly.

If you want to get into the trap, just read Chapter 15. If you can continue reading, then get into the trap.

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I'm really not interested in real-life content, just write more creation content.

It feels like you are writing this book with pig's trotters as a bystander. When you are making up your own story, why not try to make one or two pig's trotters to participate in the development of the world. It would make it more refreshing. It feels very boring to tell stories all the time.

Now that you have seen the latest chapter, let me know what you think. The first author needs to figure out the characteristics of his work. The ratio between my world and reality is 80/20, or 90/10 (personal opinion). Second, try to reduce the actual plot as much as possible. Chapter 15 is a big poisonous point for passers-by to tease a "disabled" protagonist, and the protagonist is a disabled person. How can he jump in the real world, open a company, copy games, and make video special effects? It was fine at the beginning. You are a nobody, who cares about you. Once it develops, you must investigate the protagonist's team and background. The business war you think: strategize and win thousands of miles. Actual business war: grabbing official seals and poisoning. . Jpg Third, the development of the universe. I pinched the mosquito casually... The survival of a species requires a foundation. If you directly drop a species by air, it will either not adapt to the environment and die directly, or the species will invade and it will be difficult to stop the crazy reproduction. Only very small ones still fit into the local biosphere. Fourth. Time has fast forwarded to landing on other planets. And are there other civilizations on other planets that exist, expand, come into contact with, and resist what the author grasps?

What kind of poisonous novel is this? Drive high and go low. Write about women if you have nothing to do. If you don't know how to write, don't write. It's science fiction.

The author has never been able to change the habit of writing about "people", which is very funny! All species are described as "human". Chapter 13 is about the confrontation between sharp claws and strong teeth. Both parties are beasts. Suddenly one party ran into the forest and picked up fire? And waving it wildly ~

The garbage protagonist is omnipotent in another universe. Directly compared to his own universe, he is just a single cell. Knowledge is power, don't you know?

The scientific logic is not required to be rigorous, but the various low-level mistakes in Chapter 2 really shouldn't be made. It is recommended to take up high school biology and then correct the previous questions.

I have an idea, wait until the finale to come up with a section, all this is the fantasy of a disabled person who was electrocuted to death due to computer leakage before his death. 🤔

It is recommended that the author write less modern plots

How can I say it's a bit boring

The story is not very logical. The author likes to use rules to explain everything. All the experiments of the protagonist are not supported by theory (even if you make one based on modern science), there is no depth or imagination. Basically, I am trying to explain everything.