Martial Arts: Awakening of the Sky-Stealing Claw at the Beginning

After reading the continuation, I still have more to say From many reviews, the Demon Cult General Forum was destroyed immediately, and Ye Qingqing did not follow up. The later stage was unfinished, the plot was too fast, and the early stage foreshadowing Xiantian and Ningshen was like a natural chasm, but later it attracted two people and made a perfect breakthrough. Also, why don't you have feelings for Ye Qingqing? Isn't it normal to poop?🤐

It's too poisonous 1. The protagonist's mother has been arrested. The protagonist is not worried at all, or has the idea of ​​​​rescuing her? ? What I want to do is how to make a living in the world! Have you ever thought about what would happen to a woman, a beautiful woman, if she was caught? ! ! 2. Selfishness, the protagonist's father was seriously injured, and he never thought about revenge or taking responsibility. Even if your father treats you badly, he is still your father 3. Poison, Qin Si likes him, he actually asked Qin Si to help Li Chen deal with the wound, and it's not like he can't move. Let a woman who likes you help another man deal with his wounds! ! What do you think of this? 4. Pursue self-reliance and abandon the fundamentals!                                                                                                                                                                 though but all the vigilantes all had miserable endings. Either dead or disabled!       ，，，，！                                                                                                                      Jiang Tian has wanted to kill himself several times, but he has never thought of revenge, and he still doesn't want to be the head of the family! Doesn't that mean that the head of the family will be handed over to Jiang Tian, ​​which will endanger the enemy. If you don't become the head of the family, will your mother be better off even if you rescue her?         ，，，！ Without the halo of the protagonist, you are nothing! Offend him! Come out and cause a wave of hatred!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             <br                                                           I really don't know what the use of your martial arts training is. I'll let it go even if I sleep with your woman. It's better to be a police officer, you don't have any blood!

Let's start another book. This one was ruined by you. After reading it, I felt that what you wrote was just an outline. The map you are writing now is an ordinary martial arts map. There is nothing fantasy about it. You have to create a plug-in, and the protagonist is like Wei Xiaobao, just showing off his cleverness and cleverness.

When I read it for the first time, I lasted only three chapters, and then I became addicted. After more than ten years of skill, I couldn't accept it. I continued to practice with all my strength. The second time I was full of enthusiasm. Who knew I would lose to Chapter 9 again. God has eyes, here I come, Chapter 10, Chapter 20, Chapter 30, Chapter 30... Chapter 9…………………………………………..

The first chapter of the opening chapter shows shit The second chapter shows supernatural powers! ! ! In the end, I stole a light skill! ! But he was able to run away in front of martial arts masters without activating his internal strength! ! ! Can you read some martial arts books before writing a book? ! ! Qinggong without internal strength is just parkour! ! ! ! Only if you have internal strength can you fly on grass I'm really convinced! Electric car without electricity! ! ! ! ! Really! ! ! I beg the authors to read two normal martial arts and fairy novels before writing!

If you haven't read it yet, I suggest you don't read it. This book is full of poisonous points. I'll tell you why it's poisonous after I read Chapter 45. Others want to kill the protagonist. The protagonist has ruined his life and doesn't intend to kill him. Just because of the woman's words. This is a deadly feud. In the end, he let it go because of the woman's words. If you don't believe it, you can read it. It's all poison. The plot is also old-fashioned, just like playing a game. With all this running around, I guess the author copied some game.

Run, weed among weeds, run

The protagonist is immortal and cannot be tolerated by God. What nonsense?

There are such good plug-ins! I don't study how to become stronger all day long and wander around here and there! There is no idea of ​​​​making the core stronger! Just meet one! If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died long ago!

Do you prefer a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Liangliang, you traveled to ancient times and you are still so funny and out of tune. I don't like it. I wish you good luck.

What bothers me the most is this kind of ambiguous eunuch article. Does it mean that the relationship between men and women conflicts with cultivation? Otherwise, you should start practicing in the palace.

There are so many cheats to steal the Claws of the Gods, but the protagonist feels aggrieved throughout the whole process. People try to kill you and fail, but they say harsh words and always let you go. The protagonist even lets him go even if he has some status. It doesn't matter if you kill such a powerful cheat all the way or just tolerate it! As a result, my IQ is completely useless!

Poisonous novels. In what age are you still writing such poisonous novels?

I suspect that the pig's foot is a eunuch or a virgin

I don't know Gou, and there are people trying to kill him, so he still dares to go back! This is too poisonous

The children of this family are more retarded than mentally retarded. If such a successor is expected to survive to adulthood, I don't know if the author has a misunderstanding of the family's successor's ability, or if he has heard too much about the second generation. He thought the author was eight years old, but the characters in the book are all under seven years old...

Everyone in the book is mentally retarded, with an IQ below 6 years old. Remember I said "everyone"

Don't just steal the martial arts that others have already practiced. The most valuable thing may also be other things - the secret book in the package, a certain patch, etc.! Add some visuals! I'm afraid that everyone will be tired of aesthetics! But don't get too fancy! In fact, I feel that the author's book is very pure and very good! Perfect for my taste! I hope the author will not blame me for any inappropriateness! I hope this book gets better as it gets written! ! One book conferring the title of God!

The last two sentences of the introduction are truly disgusting.

Not happy at all. The male protagonist is arrogant and arrogant.

Introduction I feel a little bit 2! The most important thing? First of all, this is difficult to define. Secondly, there are some things that are most important but cannot be stolen at all. Even if they can be stolen, the most important thing in the fantasy world is probably martial arts and opportunities. The most important thing is that if you steal it, you will be invincible immediately? Anything else to write?

After reading Chapter 29, the author has already devised a plot of three pairs of brothers killing each other. The author is too lacking in imagination. If you like to repeat yourself so much, why don't you go into the factory and tighten the screws?

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How can I put it this way? The writing is okay, but it always leaves people feeling like they can't spit it out in one breath and they're not enjoying themselves enough.

There aren't even a single book review. It's so miserable. We should encourage new authors.

I like this book very much, I think it has a good idea!

Why isn't it updated? Want to save up and watch more?

What a great writer, this is basically the only book I can read now! Suits my taste!

Death in Chapter 7, how did you get to Chapter 30? Admire! 😅