From Coal Boss to Industrial Mogul

I rewarded you with my swipe😭😭😭 Author Can you return the 100 points to me? Haha

The writing is good, but many of the plots are too childish, like kindergarten. In that era, money was so attractive that people like the protagonist were actually beaten to death and maimed by others.

Good guy? ! You gave such important information to people at the school without applying for a patent or signing a contract? How old are you?

There are actually people who write about coal mines. I will carry out intelligent upgrades in coal mines 🙂

Chapter 1: Time travel to the day my dad died. I have seen this kind of thing too much, and I have already considered it to be a poisonous point. There is also a theme like this, where do you travel back to high school to have fun?

A good start, a magic board for young geniuses. I hope there will be less slaps in the face and more useful information, industry, and business wars.

It is recommended to modify the word [coal mine] in the dialogue. Between the lines, there is something like "the first batch of coal mine is two thousand tons" and "when will the next truck of coal be delivered?" Otherwise, you can remove the mine and write coal directly. Or just add a stone, coal ore. Wouldn't it be awkward for you to read it yourself?

I think too much. In 2002, I had no ability or background and wanted to be a coal boss. I could only hehe.

I can't even stand the first chapter! The main character is written like a fool!

It doesn't look good. I feel it's not as good as the first one. Isn't it supposed to get better and better? Author, don't be like those greasy old authors.