From Coal Boss to Industrial Mogul

I accidentally tipped the author! 😭😭😭 Author, could you please refund my 100 coins? Haha

The writing is decent, but many plot points are too childish, like something out of kindergarten. In that era, money was everything; someone like the protagonist would be easily manipulated and crippled in real life.

Good heavens! You just gave such important information to those people at the school without applying for a patent or signing a contract? How old are you?

Surprisingly, someone wrote about coal mines. I work on intelligent upgrades in a coal mine. 🙂

Chapter 1: Transmigrating to the day my father died. I've seen this kind of thing too many times; it's already become a toxic theme for me. This kind of subject matter? Transmigrating into a high school student? Are you kidding me?

A good start, a young prodigy with a magic wand; hopefully, there will be fewer setbacks and more substance, real-world business, and commercial warfare.

I suggest revising the word "coal mine" in the dialogue. Phrases like "the first batch of 2,000 tons of coal" and "when will the next truckload of coal arrive?" Are problematic. You could remove "mine" and just write "coal." Or you could add "stone," like "coal ore." Doesn't it sound awkward to read?

You're dreaming. Trying to become a coal mine owner in 2002 without the resources or connections? Just laughable.

I couldn't even finish the first chapter! The protagonist is written like an idiot!

It's not good. It feels even worse than the first book. Shouldn't it get better as it gets? Author, don't become like those greasy old authors!