Can Only Monsters Be Allowed?

I've never played Horse Girl, so I can't understand it since the protagonist became a trainer. Sometimes the name of Horse Girl appears that has nothing to do with the plot and is just a background setting, and sometimes a proper noun appears. It's very tiring to watch. Until now, the novel I am currently working on does not have a clear main line. I basically write whatever comes to mind. One moment she is training the horse girl, and the next moment she suddenly enters the battle round. The only line I can see right now is establishing an agency and investigating companies related to monsters. But a lot of horse girl training process is poured into this simple main line. I once suspected that the author was short on word count and spent a lot of irrelevant space until he introduced "Sunday Quiet" at the end before starting to advance the plot. Simply make dumplings with vinegar. The most uncomfortable thing is the dialogue. It is obviously a dialogue between characters, but it starts to make up settings inexplicably. A character asked a question, and it took two pages of settings before answering. It felt so fragmented that it was impossible to sink into it. Another point is that I have read less than 300 chapters, and there are too many names. I mean names that have nothing to do with the plot. They are just the names of Ma Niang used as backdrops in the dialogue. Maybe those who have played Ma Niang can understand, but this kind of casual reader will find it very tiring. Combined with the dialogue issues I mentioned before, I understand that the author may want to quickly create the character through dialogue, but for those who have never played Ma Niang. A character image of Ma Niang is like a castle in the air, but you use another Ma Niang who is also a castle in the air to build the foundation for it. I don't know what to say either. After reading 300 chapters of the novel, I didn't understand the plot at all. I was all analyzing the relationship between Ma and Niang. Moreover, the key characters in a novel can be portrayed well, but as long as the individual comes out, they have to be shaped, and it is impossible to complain.

The novel is a good novel, but when I saw the words "Little Omer" I had the urge to speed up and skip ahead.

There may be some spoilers below The progress is 60% ahead I have read the Ma Niang novel, the special photo novel, and the comprehensive manga. Originally, I thought I had some insights, but after reading this book, I found that every step of the author's steps was unexpected. When the author wrote Shinjo Akane, I thought she was the heroine, but until Shinjo appeared offline, she didn't seem to have much connection with the monster side plot, and she didn't feel as present as King Airei... There are many kinds of content to write about Ma Niang. The right way is to write about nurturing, about competitions, and about making friends with Ma Niang. The evil way is to write about strange writing. The main character's training script is written on behalf of him, love is forbidden in the school rules, and the content of the competition is far away. At this point, you may be wondering what the author wrote. This is the key point I want to say. The author has combined the previous content! The protagonist and Ma Niang investigate monsters together! It's not Ma Niang who he brought with him. Writing a comprehensive comic, you either have to write it at a fast pace and feel comfortable, or you can slow down and write the previous characters before introducing new ones. The author has laid out too much. The world view is indeed well laid out, but the characters are not attractive enough. I can't see the characters I like, and who can stick to reading it. I hope not to lose the advantages of being a fan

Okay, okay, now Shuang Qian is about to rip apart. The book friend said it well. In my world, I use my monster to hit my man and put it in my face. If I can bear this, why should I be the cover heroine? But this is a joke. Judging from Akane's performance, she should have some understanding of what is happening in this world. Although she has not read the original work, the imperfect farewell ending always has a strange feeling: in the end, nothing has changed? Facing reality does not mean that we can change the oppression that exists in reality. Why should we let such a wonderful friendship end with never seeing each other again? Memories should stay in your heart, and friends should be by your side. Even if you can't see each other for a while, as long as there is still hope, you must run towards you, otherwise there will be no future? If you don't even pursue perfection in the boy's story, where will the boy be? Even if you have to face failure, you have to smile and say "I'll leave it to you" and then face the ending without regrets. The indestructible spirit is the boy's resistance to the world. I think this is very important So I really like this world. I think the protagonist's core attitude towards the spirit is also great. He neither exalts nor belittles. He regards emotions and desires as part of thinking. The spirit cannot replace reality but can guide actions. It allows us to look forward to things that seem impossible, to wait with hope, and to strive for a better ending. Not waiting for hope to come, but frankly admitting that I know they don't exist, but come on, they are really handsome.

Although I don't play Ma Niang, I can still understand it.

How should I put it? There are too many various jokes and two-dimensional elements in this novel. It seems a bit difficult for me to v5 on site B, not to mention that most newcomers will probably be confused. The reading sense is extremely poor, which can easily lead to poor subscriptions. You can learn from the plot design of Praying Cat and Cloudy Sky.

I can no longer accept this world without updates, and now I want to destroy it!

What's going on? I feel so tired watching it. The subject matter is my favorite and the plot is well written, but why am I so tired watching it?

My thoughts on reading this book: ①Daily introduction? Monster? Akane Shinjo? It's a bit interesting, I hope it's not a daily poison ②Holy shit! It's a black dragon! ③What the hell is a horse racing girl? I want to see a monster! ④ Tachyon is so cute, hey, Tachyon, my Tachyon ⑤tnnd Black Dragon, what are you doing! I want to see Tachyon, Tachyon! Why are there so many monsters!

Ah! It's so tiring to watch (sigh), the protagonist has too many psychological activities! Sometimes I even think about it when fighting (fight me hard!! Don't think about random things!); And I often think about one thing and then jump to another thing without any results, which makes me, a single-threaded creature, very tired.

What can I say about this article... The writing style is really good, it's very relaxed and smooth, and the world view and setting are also very good. Whether it's a monster transformation or a demon transformation, or a mercenary type like a horse racing girl, it's an attractive direction, but the author really doesn't intend to have a clear main line. The plot development of a hammer in the east and a stick in the west makes people feel like eating marshmallows after more than one volume. Every bite is sweet, and after careful reflection, you find that you have eaten air.)

Let's take a quick look at the monster cards Omer currently holds Permanent cards: Thunder Killer Combination: King Airei, Ace Slayer King of Galatron Combination: Galatron, Jinguqiao Mephiras (New Austrian version), Zeton, Gomora, Bemonstein Disposable: Grozam, Ghidorah, Behemoth, Omer (Shinjo Akane Statue Version), Gliza Should that be all there are now? It may be added later Updated on April 27: Super Gob Updated again on May 18: Five Emperors Alliance: Gorzan (not yet), Melba, Eye Q, Rechubas (not yet) Super Gob Ant Super Beast, Ariponta (a model worker to some extent), Garula, Love Ghost, Reborn Monster Linton Updated on June 18: Mecha Gomora, Reginald , Impleza Updated on August 9th: Wind Demon King Beast: Magbasa Updated on September 6th: Nature God Alliance: Renlong, Rainbow Snake God Several unrecorded forms: Ember Jayton: Mefilas (New Austrian version), Jayton, Ormer Forgot the name of the form (Demon King Ghost Eye): Love Ghost, Eye Q, Ormer The strongest composite type at present, Mephemus: Mefilas Si (Xin'o version), Behemoth, Ormer Update on September 18th: Kappa monster Tempet, Mazarath star Update on November 1st: Brunton (Pokémon, non-card) Update on November 29th: Gilbalis, Gatanje'er, Rebrando star New alliance: Sky Bow and Earth Emperor Full Mechanical Dragon (Tianquan Judgment. Nijikaris): Rainbow Serpent God, Gilbalis , Renlong, Gatanjie's buff (optional) Updated on February 4, 2024: King Red, Raichubas (the five emperors combination is short of main body), the word-talking monster Gagulla Updated on April 27th: Red Lotus Godzilla, Alien Bahamut, Ifrit (ff16 version) Five Emperors: Collection (Golzan, Melba, Raichubas, Eye Q, Super Gob)

Okay, okay, pigeon nest is not worth it

The world view setting is quite attractive at first, but when the monsters appear later, it doesn't work. It's not as attractive as the chronicle. The setting is thrown away a lot, but it makes me sleepy and not attractive at all. I feel like reading the setting collection again

General passing monster lovers (

I recently gave up on the horse racing girl, and I feel several years younger.

It's hard to watch, it's too jumpy in some places. It feels like I don't know what the subject is when I look at it. Suddenly I started chatting with someone about news, and then halfway through the conversation I started talking about the protagonist again, and then suddenly there were square brackets again. I'm so tired from reading narratives like this.

This writing style makes me tired😅

I hope it's a harem (the kind with brains), can't I write male videos anymore? A bunch of people are clamoring that there is no heroine but only one heroine, and the whole impotence is boring I read Aunt Ai's column, the three chapters are very good, come on!

Heart of Corruption

Is it my imagination? The author's writing seems very tiring. I often don't understand what he is saying after reading it once, and I have to read it again.

As a Qidian fan, I can only say that it is difficult. It seems that the main world view should be Gurlitt. Black Dragon, please update for a while first and then let Maomao Yintian and others make some recommendations. The wine is fragrant and the alley is too deep.

This novel is really harmful. It makes me dream about horse racing girls.

I've almost finished reading Volume 8, what should I say... I really can't help but want to complain about Tachyon's medicine, or do I just want to complain about Tachyon? Perhaps the author wants to write the plot character by character, in a way that solves the knot, but for now, Taiko's character is getting more and more unlikable. Every time Taiko makes medicine, I deepen the impression that he is unreasonable. In my point of view, there are several times when I almost have bad things happen because of his medicine. Maybe the author thinks this is a taste? But forgive me, I really can't accept this kind of interest...

I really can't believe that Daily Daodu could recommend such a good-looking novel to me. I couldn't stop reading it once I read it. The lengthy sermons and explanations were okay. The other book I followed, Quadruple Split, also included half a chapter or a whole chapter with explanations and examples. I got used to it. This is the first time I read such a beautiful Jockey Girl fanfic, and I don't know if I will have a chance to encounter a second one. Does the author have any other novels? It seems that there are no starting points.

The writing is very scattered, and only one chapter has passed The perspective keeps changing, and the content often suddenly goes to unknown places The setting is interesting, and the story is okay, but the writing style is really unbearable, so I ran away.

Even the production team members don't dare to rest like this.

This book is a daily novel, and contains content such as a single male protagonist, harem, radio series, monsters, horse racing girls, Arknights, etc. If you are curious, please decide whether to read it based on your own situation. First, I would like to praise the author for his powerful writing skills, and then I would like to praise my own adaptability. Before reading this book, my understanding of monsters was limited to half of Tiga I watched in elementary school and half of Orb I watched in junior high school, as well as a small number of works in the Godzilla universe. My understanding of the horse racing girl was limited to understanding the evolution of the "Hajimi" meme, and my understanding of Arknights was also limited to out-of-the-box memes such as "cheese between two buns." The content written by the author attracted me to read it all. It is really interesting. This book is very slow to read, and for people like me, it is very shocking. This is the magic of this book. I threw it on the bookshelf for more than half a year, but I can still pick it up and read it again. Perhaps this is also a reflection of the charm of everyday literature. Moreover, with such a huge length of 5.34 Million words, only "Reincarnation Paradise" can surpass it among the novels I have read. The author is really talented. In a year and a half of story, he could write so much without changing the map very much. This shows the perfection of his world view and the charm of his works themselves. Looking forward to the author's new works

It's over suddenly, and I feel like there's still a lot more to write about…

To be honest, the previous chapters were quite interesting, but when it came to the "Convection" chapter, the more I read, the more boring it became. Although I subscribed to 100 chapters, I skipped it. Maybe it was because I wasn't familiar with Gurlitt, but to be honest, I wasn't very familiar with the special shots mentioned earlier, and I wasn't very familiar with the horse racing girl, but the previous chapter didn't stop me from reading it, which was quite interesting. But, to be honest, I really didn't understand what the convection chapter was about, and it felt quite uncomfortable, so I had to come out and say something about it.