The Heavens Begin from Changjin Lake

😐If you say it, it's amazing in the front, but it's uncomfortable in the back. Be able to understand the difficulty of selecting materials and have obvious struggles on the edge of review. The personal force was controlled, but it still took off directly. As a result, the dungeon in the later stage of the war is neither good nor bad. As long as you have enough ammunition and are not suppressed by artillery fire, you are already amazing. On the other hand, I wanted to open up the prophetic link, and I also wanted to ensure the logic of identity, but ended up getting nowhere. It is better to travel back in time like a certain photo book and tell the stories of those people who may have been forgotten in modern times. It's better than using the old-fashioned "Urban Soldier King", which can't be written well and has to be forced to write. Moreover, the dungeon talks about learning command, but in reality, there is a lonely hero? India used to send troops to rescue people. I don't even want to complain about Chinatown, which has no foundation or brains. This is probably also the old problem of martial arts. If you can't change the map when you change it, you can't enjoy it anymore. Because there is only victory left. As long as the dungeons are interconnected, it is easier to write. I feel that the upgrade and development will not change the direction now, so it is better to finish this plan as soon as possible and then conceive the next one. Everything you wrote in the introduction was completely forgotten by you.

Author, political cadres at the company level are called instructors, those at the battalion level are called instructors, political commissars above the regiment level, and battalion level do not have a chief of staff. You shouldn't make such common sense mistakes.

I have some suggestions for the author, and I just happened to reply to a comment that came to mind. The previous protagonists in the War to Resist U. S. Aggression and Aid Korea all improved their personal abilities. It can be said that now he has no problem wandering around alone to fight for a basic company, but this is basically the limit of personal force without cultivating immortals. It happened to be written that the starting identity of the leader of the dungeon happened to be the leader, which just allowed the protagonist to exercise his leadership in this dungeon. Ability, training the ability to lead a regiment, a brigade, a division or even more. In this way, in the future, when writing about the Western Front battlefield of World War II, the protagonist's identity can be directly raised to a high level but he has good ability to lead troops. Writing can also be very brilliant. Otherwise, it would be too cliche to just rely on personal ability to wander around the soldiers. , Falling into a cliché is nothing more than constantly improving personal abilities, changing locations, and opening up restricted scripts. It is really meaningless to watch too much. It is better to introduce it step by step, so that it can play a decisive role in many battlefields, and then you can change a lot of plots and have a lot of explosive points, instead of watching the plot to take your own way. You can't change it. It's okay at first. But as the protagonist gets stronger and stronger, you will feel a sense of tearing. He is obviously strong enough, but actually playing soy sauce on the battlefield is not fun enough. However, your position is purely military and you cannot write the protagonist to be as strong as a cultivator. Then change it to become stronger and stronger in the ability to lead troops. There is still much to write about.

Laughing to death, how stupid is it for a modern person to travel back in time to that era and go to the battlefield? If the bullets on the battlefield don't have eyes or a halo, they will die early. The biggest thing for a modern person is the knowledge in his head. If you go to the battlefield and kill a thousand or ten thousand people, it will not be as good as the future that modern people know. With the knowledge provided, going to the battlefield is just the stupidest choice.

Having a protagonist is the same as not having a protagonist. I am afraid of changing the plot. Every time I let the protagonist fall into trouble following the plot, and then sing over and over again to sensationalize. Too much chicken blood will make people feel tired.

Nonsense, three chapters to persuade him to quit, all his property to be given to the country, his skills are quite good, but he still has to fight with others before he can join the army? What rubbish plot

During the War to Resist U. S. Aggression and Aid Korea, the memoirs of South Korean general Bai Shanye: "The food of the US military is divided into three grades: A, B, and C. Grade A is Western food including steak, grade B is hot sausages and other hot foods, and grade C, the worst, is canned food and convenient field foods. The Korean army has an adequate supply of rice, and they can often eat seaweed, squid, and even kimchi that are flown in from Japan. The rations for the volunteers are fried sorghum, millet, and soybeans.

Entering the pit from Changjin Lake, I was moved by Shangganling. I saw Chapter 52 of abandoning the pit in Shangganling. Changjin Lake may be the opening chapter, and the writing is above average. The author of Shangganling is getting better and better, and the writing is touching, and also has some hints of preaching and science popularization. This is tolerable, but the more you write, the more you write, and the further you go, the more you feel visual fatigue. Let's leave the rest first. I don't dare to read it. I will keep it to see the effect!

This is the period of 1951, when Chinese and American soldiers used individual equipment.

Don't ever draw a sword, you'll almost have a phobia of drawing swords😨

27th Army Attrition Report

I discovered this novel the day before yesterday. Generally speaking, I think it's pretty good. There's just one problem. I don't feel happy about it! Your comrade has extremely low ideological consciousness. He kills all enemies at every turn, shoots at enemies who are injured and begging for mercy, and leaves no one alive at every turn! It looks so cool! But, why, the three major disciplines and eight points of attention are no longer needed? You're going to make a mistake! Our army has always treated prisoners preferentially. Even during the Anti-Japanese War, you will still be punished for your actions! I don't know for a moment whether you are hacking our army!

Traveling to this kind of meat grinder battlefield is not about looking down on modern people. If there is no golden finger, you will be so scared that you will wet your pants. What else are you talking about? Patriotism. You may see the sunshine the next day. It is a luxury. Fighting is not. Talking and laughing, it requires blood and sacrifice.

This type of novel is completely restricted. The scale of the battle is below the brigade level. It cannot change the course of war and history. It cannot contact celebrities in modern history. The slightest contact will risk being blocked. There is also the espionage war genre. The plot only dares to revolve around attacking enemy spies and protecting our spies. As an agent, you dare not involve any intelligence on the frontal battlefield. You said you couldn't shorten the time of resistance against Japan, liberation, and foreign wars. What's the point of traveling back in time?

The greatest value of a time-traveler is not to go to the front line to kill enemies, but to hold the future in his mind. What I am very confused about is why almost all time-travelers do not identify themselves?

Fighting alone, personal heroism is not good-looking, it is better to command and fight with thousands of troops! ! ! This book is poisonous

， But before the weapons are raised, you all say that the water is too cold. The fleet has been stationed at home for a long time, and the strategic pocket has long been in a basket. The blood of our ancestors is as high as the sky pillar, and we are already thinking about it before we fight. He vigorously raised his sword and swung it at the bandits. A hundred people went with him and half of them returned. It's a pity that our generation has been in peace for a long time, but the war has not yet come.

With the combat effectiveness shown by the protagonist on the battlefield, he should be able to defeat everything in northern Myanmar. And killing people like crazy on the battlefield, this kind of person should have a strong sense of patriotism, a sense of justice, and maybe battlefield syndrome. When I met a group of scumbags in northern Myanmar, they were only injured in self-defense instead of directly killing them. They also built some bullshit Chinatown. The character design or the character perception was completely different from the same person. I saw it well in front. It feels like force-feeding poison here, give up!

In fact, this theme was very touching at the beginning, when I wrote about the war in "Serving the Country", but it was too boring. Too watery. A sentence can be repeated eight or nine times. Drag and drop nonsense. There is a lot of unnecessary hard marriage. Repeated. Author, are you at a loss for words? Those few words are necessary. It's no use being moved after watching too much. I just feel annoyed. Hope there will be more improvements.

This book is just a headline. Return it to the heavens, to the heavens of your trees.

Self-consciousness (dog head)

Published in the Weifang Evening News on October 9, 2021, the Fourth Company captured the flag process of the 31st Regiment of the US 7th Division, known as the Polar Bear Regiment!

It was okay in the early stage, but it was too watery in the later stage, which was a waste of my starting coins.

The first two chapters regarding the identity of the protagonist have been revised and do not affect reading. Hope everyone supports it.

After reading it, I feel that it is well written. Personally, I feel that the first few chapters such as Changjin Lake, My Leader, and Shangganling are well written. The following chapters feel that the battles are the same and not as good as the early ones. The author also lets us know the cruelty of the battle. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

The writing is long-winded, probably written by a primary school student, with a few words repeated over and over 😥

The early writing is quite good, those lovely and great soldiers.

Write about ancient times, such as Yangmen tiger generals and so on

Few people read this genre, you can probably tell by looking at the catalog...

I had the patience to finish reading the first chapter of "My Group"... I really want to slap you to death, you little pen boy! Puff! You're drooling all over your face