Immortality Across the Heavens, Beginning with the Taiping Guangji

I have some thoughts I just had to share; please forgive me, author. This book on astronomy is one of the better ones I've read recently, and I really like it. But this chapter today made me a little uncomfortable. Excellent works are always enriched by various details. Subduing the twelve constellations today was far too easy; the protagonist remained noncommittal, which was a bit frustrating.

Did I travel back to the Qing Dynasty? Wouldn't that lead to a rebellion?

The latest version has little to do with the book's title and has no resemblance to the Mingyu Gong (明玉功). It should indeed be called "Starting with Ape Strike Technique" (从猿击术) rather than "Mingyu Gong".

The first world, set in the late Qing Dynasty and early Republic of China, was quite well-written in terms of martial arts; I thought it would at least be a high-quality read. However, I never expected the second world to turn into a chaotic free-for-all of martial arts, which felt like a waste of the first world. Considering the title starts with "Mingyu Kung Fu," well, I guess I'll just drop it for now.

The author's writing is good, but the plot is fragmented. The level of the masters encountered in the first world was like this, but in the second world, the internal martial arts were forcibly elevated. The martial arts manual created in the second world, which resembled Gu Long's crossover martial arts, was actually changed to Beiming in Tianlong?

This book has a similar premise to another book: the protagonist transmigrates to the late Qing Dynasty, is rescued by a master who takes him as a disciple, teaches him martial arts, and then robs the rich to help the poor. Even the ambush by martial arts masters arranged by the Qing army is the same—three martial arts masters are deployed…

I feel this novel should be titled "Eternal Life Across the Heavens Begins with the Ape-Slaying Technique"

Wielding the Great Evil King's weapon, the Demon Heart Crossing technique, and having traversed countless worlds and mastered numerous martial arts techniques—a practice spanning at least a century or two—he still gets utterly humiliated by Xiang Yutian. Is *Feng Yun* inferior to Huang Yi's martial arts novels? The protagonist's cheat codes are too overpowered.

Hello author, this is about the temple names of emperors. Emperors like Shenzong and Zhezong received their temple names posthumously, but you call them that while they're still alive—it feels really awkward.

The beginning is somewhat like an infinitely magnificent scroll.