I Have a Two World Gate

In the beginning, the protagonist is the legitimate son of a large family that was marginalized by the new emperor. The family was sent to the border. At this time, the spiritual energy revived and the demon tribe rose. The protagonist knew that the entire country would be destroyed by the demon tribe, but he still only cared about his own one-third of the land. Then why can't we change the route? The protagonist knows that the demon clan will rise and the human race is in danger. At this time, the protagonist stands up and takes the lead in fighting for the world. (In the beginning, the protagonist is the only one in the world who knows the spiritual energy recovery and immortal cultivation techniques. It is not easy for the immortal power to suppress a feudal dynasty? What's more, the protagonist is backed by a big family and someone has the resources). After winning the world, he passes on the immortal skills and gathers the power of the human race to fight against the demon clan, becoming the first human king in Qing history. This kind of storyline is much better than it is now. At the same time, the protagonist originally had to travel through worlds, and in the end he could conquer other worlds through the power of this world. This plot is not grand. Don't readers like to read it? The current protagonist just thinks about his own three-acre land, and allows the demon clan to rise and destroy his country. I can't understand it. Moreover, this development is not pleasing to the eye. What's more, it is very criticized. The male protagonist is a eunuch, and the women are pounced on one by one, and they force the male protagonist to understand and pretend to be confused. The plot writing itself is average, even average. The concept of the story cannot be advanced, so why do people want to read it?

I hope it doesn't involve the country. If you write well, you will be blocked. If you write poorly, no one will read it.

What a nonsense setting. How can people survive in a world where even basic world knowledge settings don't exist? If the grass and trees lose their spiritual energy, they will become ordinary at most, just like cultivators, they will become ordinary people at most. If the grass and trees will die if they lose their spiritual energy, then they were an important resource for cultivating immortals during their lifetime. Isn't eating grass the same as eating spiritual energy?

What I hate most about my family's cultivation of immortality is that I can't even understand it

The idea is very good, but it's a pity that the author can't control it. In a crisis-ridden environment, he has no precautions against people's hearts. Immortal cultivators who have lived for hundreds of years can easily turn you into a tool.

In the first 3 chapters, I thought it was okay and I thought I could read it, but the more I read, the more outrageous it became. In chapter 9, the protagonist actually built a foundation? I posted directly, author, are you serious?

Is your cultivation speed a bit too much? And you don't even explain it. For example, you are the only one in the world who can practice cultivation. Therefore, the luck of the world is blessing you.

Hehe, first

Dear readers, please read this humble author. (*￣3￣)╭♡

I have become a fake immortal. Without spiritual power, I am not as good as a mortal. What about my physical strength. You can't eat monster meat either.

I can't stand it anymore. Without spiritual energy, people still have wisdom. Without spiritual energy, monsters will only degenerate into beasts. It's outrageous that people in the world without spiritual energy can be pressed and beaten by wild beasts.

There are a lot of typos and a lot of wrong names.

There seems to be no explanation of the source of the spell before.

No one wrote anything.

Actually it's not bad. The idea is very novel. There are a few mistakes in the front. Please correct them. It looks good!

It's full of loopholes and I'm speechless.

The latest paragraph about the cruel methods of the ancient immortal world is recommended to be changed.

Kill this emperor directly, and then unify mankind and teach the exercises

I feel that the cultivators in this book are inferior to ordinary people, and the relocated families are inferior to refugees, just like an eel using the name of a dragon.