Practicing Immortality at Night

Add Ye Tongren to your bookshelf, come on, author.

To be honest, you can't write your introduction like this 😅. Your own author said it is poisonous, and ordinary readers will have less desire to click on it directly. You have to be more confident

Overall, it's good, but the main character is a bit inconsistent about his father's behavior.

What he wrote is completely wrong and means nothing, and he still wants to scheme against the world.

I just want to ask, is the immortality that the protagonist pursues the kind of eternal love that ends in love? Otherwise, why are you so determined to cut off the blood relationship between Xiahou and Xiahou? But since they want to break up, and they have such a good relationship with their younger brothers and sisters, what trouble will they get into in the future? Can the protagonist hold back and not take action? Back to the topic, if love is cut off just for the sake of immortality, what is the difference between such a protagonist and mountains and seas? It's just different names. They can both achieve immortality in the eyes of mortals.

Finally, there is a general who is not going to the academy. Come on, I must finish it.

This is a very good book among the Shou Ye fanfics I have read.

The writing is indeed good, and the ideas are unique among Jiang Ye's fanfics, but the update is a bit slow!

This Shoye fanfic is the best I have ever read, come on

The whole plot is incomprehensible. It can cut off the thoughts of the predecessor, but it can cut off the family relationship that has not been seen a few times in this life. It is especially overwhelming for the protagonist. If there weren't so few people writing it, he would be thrown into the street if he was late.

I have never read the original work of this book So I read this book just like reading a book normally I didn't feel anything was wrong

Does the protagonist have any golden fingers? System, understanding, inheritance, talent, treasure, there must be one, otherwise how can I be the protagonist? If anyone sees it, tell me 😁

Nothing! ! ! , The character's personality seriously affects the perception, which is far different from the original book! ! ! !

Does the protagonist think he is a disciple of Tushita Palace? He is plotting and scheming! (I have no ability to stabilize the chessboard or flip it over) I don't remember the Taoist scriptures from my previous life, and I don't know the reason. In the ordinary world, these things are indeed intelligent and cultivate sentiments, but in the extraordinary world, these are peerless secrets. Reading from heaven all day long, putting the cart before the horse