Variety Movie Red Mansion, I Am Jia Hu

Are there too many typos? Voice recording?

With this ability, everyone like Lai and Zhou Rui's family will definitely be killed. The slaves will eat the inside and outside, and the master will be beaten to death in feudal society. Jia Wangshi just drank a glass of poisonous wine! Since it all involves fantasy strength, what else do you have to worry about? Moreover, these things are done for a reason, and the various members of the family will never have any objections. On the contrary, they applaud and applaud. No one except Jia Mu knows about Mrs. Wang's bad things and unites the family!

I would like to ask if you feel that the last few chapters have been too boring. There is no focus. No matter which side there is, there are so many words and so many psychological activities. It makes your chest feel tight. Or am I the only one who feels this way and am I being pretentious?

Are you serious about your writing style and attitude?

The reading experience is really bad, the subject matter is very good, and the writing is really bad

The writing is so poor and the map is so big

These typos are not common. . . , Is this a direct persuasion to quit?

The concept is quite good, but what if I have to worry about everything? How did you write so many typos?

This is not the key. The key is that you have already written millions of words, so why are there so many typos and many unclear sentences in this newly opened book?

I prefer the age of the protagonist, Brother Jia Lian. Many of the characters in Red Mansions are too young. There are younger brothers like Jia Baoyu and even Lin Daiyu. The Jia family is gone before they reach adulthood. They can only become high officials at the age of thirteen or fourteen. It is quite unrealistic. Your writing skills are poor and the integration of history is a bit confusing.

After reading it, to be honest, I didn't understand what the author wanted to write. The time traveler Golden Finger is no different. The protagonist in more than 70 chapters has not played as many supporting characters as Jia Lian. Is there any behind-the-scenes information? Even though I already have the ability to lift the table, I am still so timid. It is as difficult to read as the third-grade elementary school essay 10 years ago.

It's true that any beast can write about Red Mansions! What the hell

I wrote such a mess that I didn't read my farewell.

It's a mess. It's all typos. It's rubbish.

There are too many typos and the chapters feel very confusing. Sometimes I don't know why it is written like this. It feels like nothing has changed after traveling for more than 20 years and there are plug-ins. It feels like there is no such person in the Jia family. The main character in "Xia Jiangnan" is so awesome, but in the end, he is just a soy sauce and has not accomplished anything. It cannot be called a garbage novel, but it is not much better.

They are all typos and it makes me feel uncomfortable just looking at them.

The sentences don't make sense and there are lots of typos

What you wrote is messy and rambling.

With your ability, do you still need to arrange such a high-level character background? With your ability, what else is there to see?

Do you know about Red Mansion? Just add Xinghan, Menghualu, and a son-in-law. You can add some bullshit martial arts. Red Mansion has nothing to do with martial arts.

There are too many typos. It looks tired and boring.

Why do I see Red Mansion in the original stream? Is this thing from the primitive era?