Douluo: I Have the Original God Template

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The plot is okay. That is, the author has not perfected the details, and there are also problems that are easy to occur in the rebirth stream. If a reborn person suddenly discovers someone who has never appeared in the previous life, will he not be wary? The original Iron Sword is level 2. Suddenly there was level 13 Kirigiri: Return of Light, and that kind of plot change. Showing off the abnormality of his martial soul everywhere... ... The author. You don't understand people's hearts

I just want to know, what kind of ghost is summoned by that summoning card? Isn't it the Genshin Impact system? Does Genshin Impact have that person? What a thief!

The plot of Tianshui Academy is quite sudden. Come on, it's not easy to meet Douluo + Yuanshen.

Douluo's sewer floor tiles are as good as the sewer floor tiles, and there are a lot of book reviews that praise Tang San, which makes me laugh to death.

The protagonist is jumping like this. Not to mention the rebirth of the God King, Tang San from the original timeline has already poisoned the protagonist to death. I really thought he would just throw hidden weapons at his face.

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The bigger problem with the rebirth flow is that the author doesn't seem to fully understand the state that [Tang San] should be in when he is reborn as the [God King]. First of all, Tang San is aware of the phenomenon of [time travel]. Among the second generation members of the Douluo God Realm Committee, [Evil God King Ji Dong], he is a [traveler], a fellow Tang San, a modern person in the 21st century; in addition, the rise of Hercules Zhou Weiqing (later one of the twelve god kings of the great god circle) is closely related to Tang San (the birth bead of the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger), and in "Dzi Bead Transformation" At the end of ", Tang San personally took action to solve the final boss, and invited him to inherit the position of God Shura (he can take the initiative to time travel); not to mention that among the first generation of twelve god kings in the great god circle, there is also [Sky Hen], the [technical side] god king (the capital of interstellar civilization), and among the first-level main gods is [the God of Time] (but the original book only mentions it), [time travel] is really not a rare thing for Tang San. (Just like the visitors and objects from other worlds in Teyvat, the Twins are special cases, but not the only ones) In addition, after tens of thousands of years of accumulation, Tang San's thinking mode has long been no longer what it was like in Dou Yi. Mortals can compare (20,000 years of experience in the thinking of modern people with high IQs is less than 100 years for ordinary people, how can this be compared?) It is really difficult to write about Tang San's rebirth. He is a god king, not an ordinary god king. His peak will be the [Committee Chairman of the Twelve God Kings of the Great God Circle], with more than 10,000 years of experience in governing the God Realm. If you want to write a good article that can surpass the strength, resourcefulness, and talent of a top reborn god-king, the performance of the protagonist is really far behind. yysy, Dou Wu is a complete failure, just a waste of money, Dou Four should be over, drag it on...

The nanny-level system also needs to be added to the academy. It doesn't matter if you join, it's not a good idea to join, you have to join a girls' school that only accepts girls. I can't think of the point of joining a girls' school when there is a confidentiality system. . . .

Tang San was reborn and still danced so much, it was a bit poisonous

What if the male protagonist doesn't have a picture? I made one (AI) based on my fantasy, hoping not to step on the author's point or go too far

This protagonist deserves three five-stars?

At the beginning, the protagonist was at level 2 and Tang was at level 30 (full soul power). Then the protagonist was promoted to level 8 in three months. After absorbing the soul ring, he was at level 13 and caught up with Tang San. After that, I upgraded to level 6 in two years and started to level up like crazy. . . If your level was not close to Tang San's, you wouldn't have written it, right? . . . If you want to be like this, you might as well have innate eighth-level or ninth-level soul power, so I don't think you're under-leveling. . . If you don't know how to write, then you'll be graded hard. No wonder there aren't even 100 discussion posts in the comment section. There's a reason for the poor grades.

I couldn't stand it anymore. I saw that I went to Tianshui and died of poison. The story before and after has no logic at all.

By the way, why do we have to join Tianshui College?

When I found out that the heroine was Qian Renxue and that Tang San was reborn, my mentality exploded and I felt like I was being bullied. Didn't the author of Golden Liquid know? Tang San could see clearly

The author made a mistake between the knife and the sword. The knife is single-edged and the sword is double-edged.

9.9 Out of 10 Douluo fanfics are written by Li Zhu Zhuqing

Hee hee~Dugu Bo secretly protects Xue Beng? Xue Beng also ordered Dugu Bo to clean up the situation? Did I read that correctly? What an imbecile~ The system has given you a Titled Douluo, so why not just set up everything in different planes and then make up the protagonist temporarily? (I know you're here for the word count, but I'm just disgusted.) I died of poison before I even paid the fee~ In the first three months, the way Notting City, Su Yuntao, and the dean of the college got to know each other from level 2 to level 10, as well as the appearance of your martial arts soul, have changed. I don't doubt anything. It's too intellectual. I resisted it, but the poison ran away later. Goodbye Future is another palace novel.

I feel that the combat power of the original god is similar to that of Douluo. In terms of natural principles, it is not as good as the Douluo God King. The performance of the seven gods is similar to that of the second-level Douluo god. Tang San was reborn as the protagonist, which I thought was quite simple.

I was shocked by the title. What did I see! Can this be fought? !