From Whaling Tycoon to Superstar Diva

The author has not made any progress in these books, and is becoming less and less suitable for writing books.

It feels like I was writing in the early days, and I really miss the time when I could basically write about anything. The pace of the first dozen chapters is too slow. If there are no topics in the first few chapters, it will be difficult for readers to follow the rest.

When can I write more about the female body?

It's an old routine of the Black King, but I always feel that it's very shameful for a father to spend money on games even though his daughter is living in a very tight situation...

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: The feeling of youth is back, the writing style is not a big problem, I personally feel that many people have doubts, and my feelings after reading the previous part. It can be said that this book basically reads like a BS novel from the old era. First of all, the protagonist is an ordinary person, a family that is no different from most ordinary people, which makes people feel identified. Then the protagonist slowly changes, and there are psychological things, including system settings, plot development... Basically there are no big problems. In fact, This type of article used to be almost like this, but it's hard to find this kind of article now. I haven't read a book like this for a long time, but it still seems a bit strange. The main problem is that some plots can continue the old articles and seize the advantages, but some points should also keep pace with the times and remove the dross, so as to improve the perception of the article and expand the readership. First of all, let's talk about the krypton gold web game. How do I put it? In my understanding, the system gives the game krypton gold. This krypton gold is just to give a reason for the money to flow. I don't want to expose the special character of the protagonist to others early, and there is nothing I can do about the protagonist's wife in the early stages of the game. You know, buying food or other things is exposed very quickly. After all, the money comes out of thin air. The wife has to check the source and can't make it up. There are no bills. The money is useless. It only saves but does not spend. If the protagonist is not allowed to go into debt in order to improve himself, he will have little motivation. It feels understandable. Many book friends think that Krypton is a web game that is meaningless. In fact, the main problem is that this game is a web game that mainstream young people are not interested in, so it seems a bit strange. In the past, people played more of this kind of game, such as Legends, Fantasy Westward Journey, etc., But now young people have basically never experienced this era. I started reading this type of article in 2013, but I have almost never finished the web game. At present, all mobile games are card-drawing games and skin-changing games, so some people do not agree with this part of the plot, and the audience is wrong. In fact, the setting of this world is a little more cutting-edge, not to mention the current Itchy Rat and Original Demon. For example, it is a bit ahead of its time. The game is set up as a social game played by everyone in VR. It has various sections, and the characters can be reskinned, which requires a lot of krypton gold. There is a magical world in VR, a gun battle world, etc. You can switch to equipment, gun skins, and lottery draws. Not only does it have beautiful skins, but it also has out-of-print characters, which will make it meaningful for young people nowadays to spend money on it. It is more in line with the sense of pretense of modern young people. Nowadays, young people are not very accepting of the pleasure of playing gold and gold in web games, and no one wants to play it. After all, they all feel that the current web games are just a bunch of money-making bosses, so they have less sense of identity. And to improve the technological development of this world, make it more in line with the times, and to a certain extent, it can also give the protagonist more ways to show off, such as VR global concerts, online 4D cinemas to watch movies, let alone other high-tech, there is no need to improve other things, just film and television technology, which is more in line with the current trend, can be different from the past, and maybe more acceptable. Before it was released, everyone watched "Hollywood's Secret Garden", which contained Hollywood movies such as "The Killer Is Not Too Cold", "Forrest Gump", and "The Godfather", but now everyone watches more blockbusters, such as Marvel DC, "The Wandering Earth", "Avatar", etc., Including many virtual anchors, many of whom are DD bosses. Nowadays, many of these articles write about being a virtual anchor, or something like that. It can also be said to be a variant of this kind of article, all of which follow the trend and cater to the audience. If these main settings are more in line with the trend, some of the points that are not acceptable to some readers now have been looked at. For example, the face-slapping system after pretense, which everyone loved to read before, but now is a poisonous point for some people. I have read too many articles. Not to mention the writing style, the plot must at least be logical. It is a bit old-fashioned to pretend for the sake of pretense. If you read too much, you will feel that you have fallen behind. Everyone prefers to read something with grace and connotation. After pretending, it's not that I want to pretend, but I have to pretend, and I pretend to be relatively low-key at first, ordinary people don't understand, but the boss opposite is shocked, and starts to be like a god, and defends the protagonist, and then ordinary people and half-hearted people are embarrassed, saying that you can't do this or that, and start to slander and so on. That's pretty much all I have to say. The book looks okay. It would be better if there were more updates and some settings could keep pace with the times. It might be even better to expand the audience area and attract more readers to read.

It's all poisonous, and the protagonist himself is unlikable

This reminds me of a cartoonist in Neon next door who chose to go to Thailand to have a sex change after getting married and then got stuck with the bug that same-sex people cannot get married. Therefore, the protagonist and his wife confess later to unlock more ways to play.

There are so many bad things that I can't complain about it, and it's almost like it was ghostwritten after it was put on the shelves.

When are you going to confess to your wife? This is the highlight of transformation novels. Several similar novels by the author have completely avoided the main conflict of transformation. In the last one, the parents did not discover the transformation in the end. Is this the same in this one? That would be boring

I am here to support blacking. I am already an old man. I started reading your books in 2009. You have been reading your books longer than my wife. You must work hard! I will always support you!