People Are in Konoha, Practicing Martial Arts and Cultivating Gods.

1. The protagonist takes himself too seriously. He rejects Orochimaru several times. Does he think Orochimaru can't lift the knife and he is so awesome? 2. The protagonist's personality and behavior style are very separate. The character's personality is based on farming and development. As a result, he either gets close to the Nine-Tails Jinchuuriki from the beginning or refuses Orochi to attract other people's attention, which gives people a feeling of inconsistency. 3. The market for writing fan fiction, a style that speaks cautiously but acts like a dragon, really doesn't feel big. Personal opinion, please do not over-interpret it, thank you

The training speed is too slow. You must know that the power system in Naruto improves very quickly. For a genius,

It's not okay if the Naruto story is too slow to heat up.

This is another Naruto story that breaks down the CP. To be honest, is it difficult to write an original heroine? I know how to stare at other people's wives every day and write

As long as it doesn't turn into "Eyeball Legend" in the end, damn it, now Naruto fandom is all about eyeballs, either the Sharingan, the Byakugan, or the Rinnegan, without those eyeballs it's all trash, unified lineage theory, Fuck.

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, the author's self-created practice system only refers to a little bit of Yang Shen's settings. I am very disappointed. I thought I would directly use Yang Shen's exercises.

You don't need to write how many kilograms of strength you have. Otherwise, how many kilograms of strength can you say the complete Susanoo can split a mountain? It can be said that the physical strength is comparable to that of ordinary genin. If you add chakra, it can be comparable to elite genin.

Upgrading is too slow. Figure out you want to have a higher ceiling, but only if you stay alive first. And the protagonist said he was trying to save his life, but in fact he was jumping wildly. Speaking of saving one's life, the actual behavior is that one wants to know that one is the protagonist, jumping around like crazy even if one cannot die. I can only say that I can't stand this kind of goodbye to the protagonist. As a reminder, if you see this post later, don't read it if you can't stand Long Aotian.

Women will only affect the speed of drawing the sword, unless you are a rich woman 😃

Martial arts can still be understood, after all, knowledge is passed down. What the hell are the prescriptions? The medicinal materials are used all over the world.

Which pair of CPs is not easy to break down Xin Jiunai, and is Xin Jiunai beautiful?😅

It's Hatake Sakumo, not Hatake Shigeshi, right?

The human cells in the ninja world seem to be three times more than those on Earth, and the strength is also three times. How many kilograms of strength is a poisonous point?

It is not impossible to break down the CP. As long as the protagonist can be like Minato, who is single-minded, it is best not to fall in love with someone at a certain age. After all, he has nine years of compulsory education.

I really don't understand. Although the Yang Shen system is very attractive, but looking at the catalog, the protagonist is still obsessed with chakra? Does the protagonist love Kaguya Otsutsuki so much? Do you like being her backup power bank so much?

The author is crazy about jokes. Is it funny?

Has the protagonist learned the Bird Escape: Large Potion of Scar technique?

. . . . Why can't we give up the Hokage power system? Aren't there already strong ones? The dual power makes me tired just looking at it

What the hell is the protagonist? Author, do you still think this was 10 years ago and the protagonist Long Aotian was popular? Times have changed

Kushina

Yangshen Martial Arts is too dependent on the world, especially the cultivation of the law. It is simply a booster installed for the protagonist under the laws of the world. If you increase your knowledge, you can practice like a rocket. That world is a paradise for literati.

No matter what kind of martial arts he practices, he is called Fengyuan. He takes out a transformation device and turns directly into Aotuman. He kills the so-called Otsutsuki with one slap.

It seems that Kakashi Hatake's father's name is Sakumo Hatake, not Shigemo Hatake, right? Can't even figure out the name?

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Isn't practicing God a state? Is it turned on every time?

Why do you like airports? Don't you feel anxious?

I'll go to the male lead and put a picture of Ultraman, so that the price will drop.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

The Creator is the Seven Tribulations Ghost Immortal. He becomes invincible when he reaches the Yang God. A thought of the Yang God can be as big as a planet. If it is a physical body, it should shatter the void.

Not bad, update soon