
The Mortal World That Covers the Sky Is Immortal
遮天之红尘不朽
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- Completed
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- 671k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The demon emperor's heart was taken away by the protagonist and a few elders who were not even saints, using the broken supreme weapon. This is bullshit. In the original book, the Qing Emperor's heart was squeezed by Ye Fan with the remains of the immortal cauldron. The Qing Emperor's heart ran away on its own. The broken supreme weapon in the protagonist's hand and the Four Symbols Holy Land, which didn't even have imperial weapons, could suppress the Qing Emperor's heart. You know the Qing Emperor is still alive.
Seeing that I couldn't bear to accept Ye Fan as my disciples, I retreated.
The writing is good, but at present, the protagonist's physique should only be at the level of an ordinary king's body, and the golden finger is small. The protagonist should not be able to fight against the Forbidden City Supreme when he first becomes an immortal, and it will be difficult for him to achieve the level of a Heavenly Emperor in his lifetime (unless the protagonist can transform into a chaotic body). I hope it can strengthen the protagonist's talents.
You can also see that I am a novice, but I still have a clear idea of the plot behind it. I will add my understanding to write about the world that covers the sky in my heart. There will be updates every day. I hope you will support it.
The writing is quite good. I also wanted to write a fanfic that covers the sky. The concept is from the ancient times (more than 100,000 years ago when Ye Fan started). The protagonist is a disciple of the Four Elephants Sect (assuming it has not become a holy land, haha😄) and the story of enlightenment. However, my writing skills are not good. After writing three chapters, I can't write it and let it go. I saw the author's fanfic today and was really moved, haha😄. The main thing I want to ask is, what kind of "weapon" will the protagonist be? The protagonist comes from the Holy Land of Four Elephants, so he must deal with "earth, fire, water and wind". The weapon must fit these "four elephants". What I conceived at that time was the "Four Elephants Dragon Beard Fan". Because I feel that most of the "devices" used to cover astronomy are like bells, towers, tripods, swords, knives, etc., And I feel that they are all badly written. I wanted to find something innovative and close to the protagonist's practice. At the same time, things like "fans" are also very symbolic in Taoism. Come on, support you! !
Another Zhetian fanfic. The main character uses a sword as a tool to prove the Tao. Many people are discouraged by looking at it. If 9 out of 10 copies are used🗡️, why can't they be replaced with something else? The most ridiculous thing is that the person in the world called "Mother" is called "Mom", which is blinding to my eyes. Isn't this the assembly line work of the studio?
I really don't understand why a marriage partner popped up out of nowhere.
The man who covers the sky, the soul who covers the sky 😏 The protagonist has now become the Holy Son of the Four Elephants. He has mysterious visions and the four-pole tribulation. He fought against the Western Emperor's Dao Seal, and successfully defeated a king's body in the holy land, the demon clan's genius, the golden-winged Xiaopeng King, and the Holy Son of the Purple Mansion. 😁 The protagonist's reputation and performance can currently reach the first sequence of the young geniuses of the Eastern Wasteland (the current name of the Yaoguang Saint is A big spirit but few shots, his performance is not as outstanding as the protagonist, Ji Haoyue, Yan Ruyu Have not officially debuted yet, Hua Yunfei, Jiang Yifei, Zixia, the innate Taoist child, Jiang family's god king body is silently developing) 🤫 Now the protagonist does not need to lie dormant like before, the overwhelming style, pomp, passers-by and flattery of the genius can be arranged 😃
Let me tell you a bit about the main character's physique.
I stopped watching when I saw sword making. It's boring. It's time to come up with more creative weapons. Seeing you playing with swords here is not as interesting as reading martial arts novels.
Is the protagonist considered a special physique or a special bloodline? Now it should be considered a special physique. After all, the divine body is only a person who has awakened the divine blood in the human race. If it is considered a special physique 🤫, is it biased towards the king's body or the lunar sun? What is the name of the special water constitution 😏, water swamp body, water swamp king body, Neptune body, Poseidon body, Xuanming divine body, Xuanming body, Xuanming king body.
In the original work, the broken imperial weapon, the immortal-killing flying knife, that Zifu Shengzi and Ye Fan fought over can be written in as a chance, and the ancient emperor's scripture of Luya Tianzun can be obtained from the immortal-killing flying knife by chance. This ancient emperor's weapon, the god Zhuan, is already dead, so don't write it too easily to obtain the ancient emperor's scripture.
I'm in a hurry, so I'm going to explore the secret realm in Chapter 6. How much the people in power of this holy land hope that their genius will die.
Brother, can the Emperor move? Already given so many opportunities, just keep transforming.
I am really writing a Zhetian fanfic, and the time point is Ye Fan and his friends 70,000 years ago. The protagonist is a descendant of the Void, with a returning bloodline and no special physique. The route to becoming a path is still the Avenue of Space (ordinary avenues to become an emperor, as the protagonist, it is estimated that he will not escape the fate of being eaten by the Forbidden Zone Supreme). The ancestor of the void uses the infinite void to prove the way to master the scale of space. The protagonist uses the string argument to master the dimension of space 🤭
I haven't written much new stuff, it's basically the original stuff.
Well written, but a bit weak. Yingyu bloodline is relatively rare. Apart from picking up the former word secret, there is nothing special about it.
The protagonist can obtain several more sources of Tao, increase the original source, and cooperate with the scriptures and super evolutionary fluid to evolve the acquired Tao fetus, which is consistent with the Tao. The origin is close to the Western Emperor. During the Great Sage period, he can control the body of the Western Emperor to participate in the dark turmoil.
Is this another update? Can it be updated stably?
Student, I asked you why you update every two days 🤫
At least I ordered them all
It's quite interesting. I almost laughed to death at the part about accepting a disciple, Ye Fan Pangbo. Later, I hurriedly praised my Taoist friends and felt full of desire for survival.