Zhutian: I Can Upgrade Infinitely

Anyone with any brainpower can't read this book. Chapter 2: A maid you have never met before, you call her sister on the left and sister on the right when you meet her? What bullshit? Don't say it's a time-travel in the present, even if it's a time-travel in the future, it can't be so mean.

After running 50 kilometers, I had to rest for a while, and I didn't finish until dark. Although it was a bad place, so many powerful martial arts and practicing to the extreme, the result was this level.

The protagonist (the author) is mentally immature, has scattered thoughts, has no rules for doing things, and has no overall view. The protagonist has nothing to do with the wise, the overlord, the planner, or the strong. You can understand what those little losers are like in reality.

Are you going to kill more than 20 of you and then let them go if you pay money? ?

Are you cheating to be a nanny?

The protagonist is a bit young, 10 years old?

Alas, the ancient world did not want to establish modern institutions. . . . . A new generation of Wang Mang?

Yang Xiao's Great Shift of the Universe is a bit too high, and it feels like level two or three is enough. After all, in the original work, you only reached the first level

1. The outline comes directly. 2. No plot. 3. Running around, rushing to the next world before finishing the previous world.

Destined to be a Eunuch, the diction is too casual and lacks any rigor. It is equivalent to calling father daddy, mother, and mommy in a fantasy novel.

Author, if you don't know how to write about hegemony, I'm just asking, can we use our strengths and avoid our weaknesses? Writing about rebellion is like playing house, I keep skipping this part out of embarrassment

I couldn't stand it in the second chapter, so what the hell.

Read Chapter 2: Children are enjoying themselves

I read two chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. I was almost poisoned. It was really poisonous. This novel didn't feel like it was written by an adult. It felt like it was written by a junior high school student? Maybe even younger. There are so many flaws that I don't even want to complain about them.

The price drops further towards the back. Inexplicably, the people I meet are all arrogant, and the protagonist is like a bad good guy who never gets angry and does some inefficient things without knowing the purpose.

The force you have created is of no use, it is too wasteful of energy, just like Zhu Ignorance who does not want to cooperate and wants to rebel, and you still need all kinds of persuasion, which is a bit price-deprecating.

What happens when snoring is upgraded? Does it feel like thunder every time you fall asleep?

Not bad, a qualified and refreshing article, not irritating, not procrastinating, not Qiong Yao, not a two-dimensional licker.

But here it is, author, go watch sports videos and find inspiration. Everyone who plays e-sports has better physical fitness than your protagonist.

No more eunuchs

The author of Zhutianliu who doesn't divide the volumes actually doesn't want to write it well at all. It's basically just a waste of money. It's not worth reading.

There is something wrong with your novel. If you practice the iron cloth shirt to the 20th level, it will not be as good as the indestructible power of Vajra. Just practice it to the 10th level! Your technique should at least be divided into levels! The martial arts in the martial arts world should be classified as first- and second-level martial arts. Surpassing the tenth level should be a breakthrough of the original limit. The tenth level where it is impossible to breathe basically can be compared to the tenth level of Splitting God's Palm. The little fox can't even beat Erlang Shen when he reaches the tenth level.

Yes, the author is suitable for this kind of rice, but the writing is difficult to describe in one sentence. If you want to make money, you can write comics, weird and mysterious, but you need a lot of foundation to write Douluo Dalu, which is particularly easy for anyone to write and very profitable. It's absolutely okay to fool newcomers, just drive high and go low, and go with the water. Easily One Million Words is so popular that it is very suitable for making money

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