The Legend of the Dragon King: Ying Long Xiangtian

One, forced downgrading, to put it bluntly, just copy and paste Tang Wulin, and then plus, the whole bloodline of Niub Honghong, and then the bloodline will be stimulated to death, let's tell a joke, your own bloodline will die Two, the time traveler, after seeing Douluo, and then not knowing Ditian, told him that his name is Ditian, and still put aside his incompetent rage.

I hope the heroine is Na'er. After all, Gu Yue in the original novel has already won. Although she is Gu Yuena, her personality is actually that of Gu Yue. Na'er found nothing like this later, and Wulin didn't even think about her at all😭. Her existence is purely to create love conditions for Silver Dragon King and a step for falling in love with the Tang family. She is really too tool-like and pitiful. I hope the author can give Naer a good ending 😢

When the sky is dark enough, the stars will shine brightly!

We are often confused about what we want to do? There are many thoughts that pop up in my mind every day, and those that are immortal are called love. Romain Rolland said, "There is only one kind of heroism in the world, which is to still love life after recognizing the truth of life!"

I really can't read this book. It has all kinds of logical conflicts and poisonous points. I can't stand it at all. The protagonist was able to strike 500 times with a 100kg forging hammer when he was just 6 years old, which means that the protagonist's strength at that time was at least 1000kg. The result was over 900 kilograms after three years, which is disgusting. The average person's punch strength is about 50 kilograms, but you ask him to swing a 5 kilogram object 500 times to try it. Therefore, if you can swing an object 500 times like in the book, the power of the punch will be at least ten times higher. The author has not considered whether the data is reasonable or not. There is also strength. I awakened at the age of 6 and my innate soul power was level 5, and one year later it was level 10. However, three years later, it was only level 18, and it was just over two levels a year. You are too perfunctory to admit it!

Author, how did you come up with this way of writing? This male protagonist is not only stupid. A modern person has traveled to another world, and as a result, he has absolutely no understanding of the relationship between men and women, even if there is a society. What movies, novels and games haven't you heard of? He doesn't understand this at all, so he might as well just be an ancient person. Author, the more you forcefully explain, the more embarrassing it will be. Everyone can see that this is forceful and very deliberate. You deliberately write about why he doesn't understand how innocent he is? That is simply ignorant. Ten of them are connected to nine, and they know nothing. Modern people are in their 20s, no matter how stupid they are, they all know the result. What did you say to me about social fear? Do you know what social fear is? The target of social terror is people, but where are his teammates? He doesn't have to at all. What about the others? That's totally unnecessary. It's just too cold. It's just an act. You deceived yourself by writing it in the end. The emotional line you wrote was really a bit forced. There were several times when I felt that I should just change the book. It was so uncomfortable to watch.

Every time we travel through ups and downs, the sky may not be full of colorful clouds, and every time we climb mountains and ridges, the spring may not be full of flowers, but history always comforts us in the form of optimism. On this journey, we will not let down the power of submersion in our days.

Emm... The author wants to show you something. I just read through the comments of other works 😏

How can this book be almost over for a month, updated every day, but not even have a monthly pass? How bad is this!

It's a pretty normal Dragon King legend fanfic, I support the author.

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns. At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders and the demon heads north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, and love has lost its hold on tears. Destiny means success or failure. The immortal regrets but I don't. Even at an early age, I knew that things were going to be difficult, but I was still able to fly like a hero among the clouds. The cold wind blows all the way, causing the sea to rise and fall, and the traveler walks alone. A sword is forged with painstaking efforts and painstaking efforts.

Has the author graduated from elementary school😥

The writing style doesn't matter, the logic doesn't matter. I only ask you two questions: 1. Is the protagonist a time traveler, or not an earthling? After all, who has read the Douluo book? I don't know Silver Dragon King Ditian, are you watching the same version? Or have you only watched Douluo Yi? But there's nothing wrong with Douluo Yi's Tang Shenwang, so why does it arouse the protagonist's hatred? 2. Why should Hao Duanduan join Mo Yuan? The addition of this character is a failure. The plot of this book starts to get messy from this character. Do you want to know why? Because this plot was written on your own whim, so it's messy. There's nothing wrong with copying the original plot. Next time you write a book, it's best to delete this kind of character. Don't even think about touching it. He is a crazy "god" who always wants to show his holiness in front of others. To put it bluntly, the Mo Yuan you wrote has no self-esteem and needs to do something to show his greatness. He is hypocritical.

Brothers, let me tell you here that this protagonist has social angst, so I'll say goodbye. Goodbye.

I have been practicing for many years and have already refined my body to the realm of the emperor. I can live as long as the heaven and the earth, compete with the sun and the moon, and ignore all the poison in the world. Unexpectedly, after just turning a page or two, I was already poisoned and there was no cure 😭

The back part is too watery and the protagonist feels submissive.

I can't feel the feeling of being in love at all right now. Where does the word "love" come from? There are over 100 of them, and there is no progress at all. Thank you for writing it, and it is pure love. I don't have any complaints. I can't write, so I won't write. The more I read, the more my brain burns, and the more I read, the more irritated I am.

Find a book about Douyi. The protagonist's martial spirit is the three-legged golden crow. If anyone knows, please tell me 🙂

Almost copied the template of Tang Wulin's Golden Dragon King's bloodline

He has always been a crazy devil, looking down and asking about the universe of yin and yang. Millions of years of planning and savings, I am waiting for eternal life! The rules are the rules of the board and the laws of the chess game, and all laws in the world can be found. For the first time in the world, he opened up the magic path and tested his edge in three battles. As time goes by, gray hair suddenly appears, and there is endless youthful beauty in the mountains of books. Expand the divine power of heaven and earth, learn from the natural way of all realms

Who are the heroines of the author?

It's very poisonous, the plot is long-winded, and the characters are incomprehensible. One moment I know the plot, and the next moment I don't. It's a group of wits. I can't stand it after watching Emperor Tian's attack. There are so many slaps in there for no reason.

The ending of this book is much better than that of QQ's The Age of Dragon and Warrior. That book still directly killed the male and female protagonists.

The first time traveler has the same mind as a child The second time I watched Dou Yi Dou Er and I didn't know who Di Tian was The third time Gu Yue and Naer split into two after they left The fourth time Di Tian came to kill the protagonist, not to test the protagonist. When he came, he still talked nonsense with the protagonist. If he didn't just slap him to death, would you talk to the ants when you trample them to death? To sum up the plot, it's like shit. Although it is written by a new author, I feel that he has never read the original work, or even Dou 1 Dou 2, but has only heard about some plots on the Internet; it is written like a primary school student's composition, using punctuation marks indiscriminately, how can I put it, leaving aside the plot, it will be suffering from reading the article.

This is the prototype of Mo Yuan

I'm very curious, the protagonist's emotional line is too fast

There are so many typos and wrong sentences, and I can't use punctuation marks. It's really uncomfortable to read.

Why are you doing this? Have you never been good at writing before? Now I suddenly come back to update a few chapters, but no one has read it. If you hadn't pushed me, I wouldn't have known you were resurrected.

Isn't this just following the Tang 50 route and template? Reading this book is almost the same as reading the original work.

Good guy, it's been almost two years and this book is still not finished.