I'll Play with You Until We Reach the Top of the World

As we all know, the LPL has five major virtues: PC, match-fixing, cheating, cheating, and breakup. The author dares to start a group, if nothing else, there must be a full order

The author has watched too many bloody romance dramas. His brain is seriously ill and he died from poison. Why is there not even a good one? It's not without reason. He deserves it.

The pacing is okay. Maybe it's a female author. The writing is more delicate. Even the protagonist like you is too miserable. There are two bastard teams in a row. The characters you wrote shouldn't be so miserable. Do female writers like to abuse the protagonist?

Taking the abuser as real... A typical disease of young people

The writing is so disgusting that people won't let you talk about it, right? It's a "true story" about an abusive master who is addicted to abuse.

I heard someone say that you are the author of that novel about not knowing how to win? I read the comment section and if that's true, why can't you change your habit of abusing your master?

After watching part of it, let's talk about the mistakes in the plot! 1. JackeyLove knows Baolan, Spicy Hotpot, lwx, and lqs, but the scene in the middle of the group called the Seven Wolves is obviously not familiar to me. Although it is said to be an adaptation, since it is based on a realistic plot, I think it is not good. 2. As the boss of NB, although he doesn't understand games, he should know the business value. Chris is not a boss who doesn't know anything about writing. He is a bit ingenious. Players who don't know what soul is will casually enter the e-sports circle. Since you want to do big things, you need to understand the basic knowledge of the e-sports circle. The most basic cornerstone of team building is not required. Chris's role is dispensable. Online public opinion, other teams don't know? He is so good as others and no one comes out to prove it? Except for the people of his own team. 3. I feel that the mid laner of the team with the pig's trotters is weak. . . Doinbs7 can't hold down Knight. He is an LSPL power leveler and became famous for his assassins in his debut. Knight is probably still ranked or playing in LSPL. After training in S10 and S11, he gradually became the number one mid laner in China. 4. The connection between the middle teammates in the game is a bit not very good. I watched most of the first championship and it was nothing more than putting up the highlights of the junglers in each season. Many of them were from the third uncle, and I knew all the details in the middle. 5. If I don't believe in the people who can accompany you to the top of the world, I won't stand up and speak to you. It's Lin Weixiang who is very smart and lqs who values ​​emotions. They directly renew the contract before the contract renewal is confirmed. We will ask the good brother after we have renewed the contract. What these brothers did, it feels like lwx and lqs are superficial brothers. If brothers are like this, then I can't even think about it. It only represents my personal sense, I think some of it can be modified!

DRX! This is a miracle belonging to the League of Legends!

I think the writing is a bit strange, so let me mention a few points that I personally think are not very good. First of all, I was actually attracted by the title of the book. When I saw lqs and lwx among the supporting characters, I knew what the author wanted to write. I felt good about it, so I clicked in and read it. But the more I looked at the back, the weirder it became. What I couldn't understand the most was that the protagonist had clearly shown a clear dislike for several TCS teammates in the front, and the protagonist had many choices. Why did he have to follow him to NB? Although I know that if the protagonist does not go to NB, it will conflict with your original purpose of writing this book. After all, it is "together on the top of the world", but overall it is a bit confusing. I can't understand the logic of the writing. Well, the author said that you will explain it later, so I will read it later. Secondly, I think some of the character portrayals are a bit strange. In my impression, junglers always have a little thought. How to play without a little thought requires a lot of thinking about jungle. Moreover, the background of the protagonist you portray is a child from a single-parent family who works with his mother outside all year round. I feel that such a protagonist should not be such an innocent person. Even if the protagonist is young and his mother is very good, he should not have such a character. The character state in life and in the game is also a bit separated. Again, some descriptions of supporting characters feel unreal to me. I won't talk about OOC because I don't know much about the real situation of these professional players. The main reason is that when you describe some of their psychology, it makes me feel uncomfortable. On the one hand, you described some of their dark psychological thoughts, which makes me think that it is understandable for them to have such thoughts. This is a relatively real side; but on the other hand, some of the plots you described make me feel very unreal. Let's not talk about these professional players who have not yet gained fame. Let's just talk about some of them who have gained fame. After playing so many games, if there is a problem with the details of the game, their mentality will collapse. It is so easy to lose their mentality. How can they achieve these game achievements? Why do they play professionally. For example, the description of Hou Ye and Benji, they are also world champions after all. After playing so many games, why are their mentality so bad? Not that much. (Of course, because I don't know much about the details of some games, maybe this detail is very important and correct, so they simply lost their mentality) Come on, author, he is actually very fast and very diligent. You can build on this a little bit Improve the quality. I really want to see this kind of plot where a bunch of brothers work together to reach the top of the world. From this perspective alone, the author's writing is different from many other writings. I hope you work hard, write this novel well, make more progress, and write better. ps: My suggestion is just to read it. The main thing is to write the story you want to write and present it completely.

When I saw the second fight against IG, I felt that the author's writing was too realistic and too exaggerated. The protagonist did not have any plug-ins and could practice routines in advance. As a result, he was able to defeat Samsung and SKT with Sunset Xishan's Wu Shao and Tong Wudi plus the fledgling Songxiang. It was a bit exaggerated. Samsung was really invincible in the S game that year I couldn't stand it when I saw the fight with IG. , It's too routine, the teammates are in dire straits, the protagonist explodes and leads his teammates to win the game. Although it is a routine like this, other novels will give the protagonist cheats. After reading it, we will know that it is not an explosion for no reason, but a cheat, and yours is the protagonist's explosion. I don't know why it happened. After all, it is a novel, and it needs a little sense of excitement. What you wrote is too dry and uninspiring. This is my personal opinion, I hope it helps