Traveling Around the World of Immortality at Home

This book is really good (at least so far), I hope it doesn't collapse later. I have two suggestions, or one suggestion: You must control your cultivation level well, and don't make it too high all at once or deliberately suppress your combat power. From what I feel now, this book has 🔥 potential.

Is the protagonist a cultivator of immortals or demons? I have to talk about the benefits of cultivating demons. Magic cultivators advance quickly. Moreover, demon cultivators have many sub-professions, such as inner demons, extraterrestrial demons, corpse practitioners, puppet masters, ghost practitioners, etc. How do demon cultivators advance: My demonic path only needs to be swallowed to advance. The only side effect of a demon cultivator is that if the state of mind is unstable, schizophrenia will occur. If the will is unstable, the demonic path will transform into a pure demonic origin (that is to say, after transformation, it will become a pure energy body without self-awareness, memory, soul, and true spirit.) Demon cultivators can devour the flesh, blood, and souls of living beings to improve their cultivation. Demon cultivators can improve their cultivation by bewitching mortals, demon cultivators can improve their cultivation by invading other worlds and plundering the origin of the world, and demon cultivators can improve their cultivation by devouring them. }

I think that for the emperor, the author can consider learning from the Dali royal family in Tianlong, where the emperor can join the sect in his later years; or put a restriction that the sect does not allow people from the royal family to join; now the emperor is crazy about seeking immortality, and there are many immortal cultivating sects next to him, which feels weird. These are purely personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like them.

I can understand someone who wants to let go of their worldly power and status and only take away their parents and relatives. But if a person can let go of his parents, relatives and loved ones for the sake of cultivation, who would dare to cultivate such a person? It is reasonable for such people to give up and betray the sect in order to practice better in the future, right? After all, for those who can abandon family and love, you can't expect others to still have the love between master and disciple, and the love between sects, right?

Is normal cultivation of immortality called cultivation of immortality? Those were wasted years, despicable. The Demon Sect achieves a small percentage in three years and a large percentage in five years. This is cultivation of immortality. ⊙ω⊙

It started well, but started to fall apart a bit from He Caiyan. Another man had just died, and the author always wrote ambiguous stories. In some places, the author basically introduced the protagonist, and couldn't help but feel obscene. If you are writing a novel, you can introduce it, but if you introduce it wrongly, it will be all poisonous.

"Foster mother, you don't want anything to happen to your adoptive father, right?" 🤐

Don't you really understand that you have trapped yourself in reality just for something that can be hung up for two or three days (Xuanjingsi identity)?

After having the AFK system, the first place to AFK is the brothel. I understand everything.

Look at this opening character, isn't it just that Da Feng's changer was used to change his name?

It's almost done. You can delete the book. It collapsed when you arrived at Taixuanmen. Especially when you used a token to pretend to be a spy. I feel that the author is trampling on the reader's IQ 🙂 If it doesn't work, I will become a eunuch.

There is a poisonous point. Since Yongshou is in the realm of Yuanying, it should be possible to discover the secret of the protagonist. In such a short time, he has advanced from the second level of Qi training to foundation building. If I were Emperor Yongshou, I would definitely arrest the protagonist. I have found that since it was put on the shelves, the protagonist has become more and more slutty. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died long ago.

Come on, come on, author, I think a little bit will make him popular

I feel like the protagonist is a bit sloppy and not stable enough

I thought he would be another hard-working protagonist, but he turned out to be a terrible person.

The protagonist speaks with no respect for his elders. He is a dissolute generation. I won't tell you who he can stand.

The author's writing style is a bit off, and there are some places where it's hard to read! It's weird, I don't know if it's me or the author's writing style is not very popular.

It's too poisonous to let a girl who likes you guard the door

I saw the last sentence of the third chapter. There may be some flaws in the previous chapter, but it's not a big problem. But at the end of the third chapter, the protagonist compares his elder (stepmother) with the woman from the brothel. It really disgusted me. I hope the author can correct it

Good guy, the protagonist wants to be like his father

I'm scared when I see a female co-star, because I'm afraid of being poisoned. Can someone tell me something?

I really can't stand this book anymore

I haven't written 3 chapters yet, my golden finger has not been developed yet, and my strength has not improved, so I am focusing on writing about women. . The author will reward you and there will be no shortage of women. In the future, write novels about women less often.

It's broken and I can't write anymore 🤔🤔

It's not bad, it's at the level of food and grass, and there are less poison points.

After looking at the character card, I realized that Goodfellas doesn't have a female protagonist.

It's so beautiful, everyone is welcome to try it! ! ! (I don't watch it anyway)

It has been completed (sent), you don't have to wait any longer.

Although the author plans to finish the book as soon as possible, I still wish the author better and better, and I will definitely continue to pursue your books

It collapsed at the start