This Star Wants to Retire After His Debut

To be honest, this book is one of the better ones I have ever read in entertainment. Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's writing is very good, the foreshadowing is very good, the plot moves very naturally, and you can see that the protagonist has made a lot of plans to achieve his goals, and the relationship with the heroine does not come all at once. There is foreshadowing, and the image of each character is also very full, everyone has their own characteristics, and the protagonist's song selection is very suitable for the plot, and they are all masterpieces that can represent that style. Readers who like listening to music can also find good songs by reading this book. There are also shortcomings, but it can be said that there are no poisonous points, it can only be said to be disadvantages. The first part is rather slow, and the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are not obvious. The song selection and lyrics are too short, and the lyrics of a song are repeated twice. The writing style of netizens' comments is a bit too much, even including the life background of an audience member. . . Generally speaking, this novel is a slow-burning novel, and it can be seen that the author created it carefully. If it is a perfect score of 5, I think it is worth reading with about 4 points.

Knife in hand, follow me Kill Chen Gou and snatch Youwei

After reading two chapters, the writing is too superficial, which is a failure. For a 25-year-old to join an idol group, you are a bit too old. Also, isn't it a bit disappointing that the protagonist travels through time and continues to want to become famous on the road to becoming a group? The 25-year-old predecessor has no idea, and the protagonist you have passed through still has no idea. I can only say that you have not grasped the essence of the title of the book. So, the title of this book is invalid. There are too many books nowadays, and readers are disappointed with the character and temper of the protagonist at the beginning. What else can you do to retain readers? ... It is recommended to directly draw from a certain retirement novel and keep the characters and reopen it. Of course, if you write and play on a stand-alone machine, just pretend I didn't say anything.

Author, I am very happy to finally have multiple female protagonists in an entertainment novel, but what you wrote is too ink. There are more than 80 chapters in this competition. I really can't stand it anymore. I have withdrawn it. I will use this to make up the number.

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The author should probably find more kind-hearted colleagues to PY it It's really good-looking, but I don't know why it's not popular yet If there are not enough recommended resources now, you can try as mentioned in the first line This may help you take off earlier The male protagonist is very thoughtful in designing the female protagonists Work for him One: He didn't lick, two: He was aloof (he wanted to be a capitalist) Secondly, the age of the male protagonist is older and the song selection range is wide, which is good So there are almost no poisonous points in this book, nothing to question In addition, there are many female protagonists YYDS

At our age, everything else can come later, but studying can't come later!

To be honest, I can only accept books with single girls like entertainment.

The writing is quite in line with my taste. The characters all have high IQs. Is there any pretentiousness or slap in the face? Good luck to the author. I'm just sorry that I can't give you a recommendation vote or a monthly vote (I voted for an author with hemophilia who writes sports articles, I feel he needs it more), so I can only give you a reward occasionally. It is also suggested that the author can read more similar works to learn from their strengths and weaknesses. Like "Debuting from the Queen's Concert". This is the most responsible author I have ever seen. He explains clearly to you why he chose this song, this movie, and the chapters. Sometimes he even gives you references. Come on, I hope the author can become the next great god.

I started poaching people to start a company and do some sexy stuff, but I ended up doing a romance here. It's watery and ink-stained. I skipped a few pictures and ended up not having any dyslexia at all.

Idols are supposed to have less contact with the opposite sex. It is impossible for both men and women to join a group.

I'd like to encourage you. It's well written. There's nothing poisonous about it. I just read that the comments have a strong reaction to ancient poems. Actually, it's not bad. There aren't many. In addition, the pace is relatively slow and the plot cannot be advanced. Everyone knows that following up can make this book better recommended, but you have to read more. Otherwise, readers will read two chapters and feel that they have read something but not feel it. This is the disadvantage of a slow-paced book, and it is easy for people to give up reading. Praise should be given, give the author some motivation

Post a version of yellow people!

Dislocated time and space

I can't stand it after reading about 30 chapters. I have capital, talent and everything I need. It's no problem if I want to start my own company, but do I need to be in such a hurry to recruit people? Even if you are anxious, do you need to be so humble?

The sea is full of water! The pace is still slow

What the hell is a mixed-sex group?

There are so many entertainment articles with female protagonists. There are very few of them now. Please support them.

Well-intentioned advice: It's hard to get good grades if you're self-motivated

The name Youwei is a bit strong.

It's not that I can't accept multiple female leads. . Can the author give more details? How will it be handled in the end? I saw Chinese Valentine's Day. The protagonist hides things from each other like this, isn't he just a scumbag who has his feet in n boats? What to do if it leaks. Word of mouth exploded? Break the hearts of these good girls? Is this love or greed? At this time, I looked back at the diary of the protagonist who wanted to protect the innocent girl. A bit…. The protagonist is even more scumbag than before the time travel. Before the time travel, he said, "Speak clearly and don't lie to your feelings." Now, "I agree to all Chinese Valentine's Day and not go to anyone. I must not let them know." Is this a scumbag before the time travel or a scumbag after the time travel.

Is there anything wrong? It means mentioning that the memory of the past life is engraved in the mind, dream interpretation, etc. Otherwise, how can I be a copywriter?

Baipi Gucai yyds

Sister Wenjun😭😭My sister Wenjun

Sister Wenjun! ! ! ! 😘😘😘😘

It's obviously very good-looking, why is there no one in the comment section?

I just want Chen Youwei to be a heroine

The book is good! But do you still want to write?

Ever since someone made the name of the character Yu Youwei popular, many female protagonists have either been named Yu or Youwei.

This is the ending... Worse than the bad ending