Beast Taming: The Ultimate Breeder

It's quite good, but I still have some small suggestions. First, I can clearly feel that the author should be a girl, because boys rarely write the male protagonist so vulgarly. At first, I almost thought it was a harem article and just ran away. Fortunately, I saw that the comment was left without cp. Unless it's a harem story (or the kind of stallion that attracts a lot of attention), this male protagonist is a bit too much, whether it's 1v1 or no cp! It feels like I have never seen a beautiful girl in my life—— But it may be because the author is a girl, so the interaction between the male protagonist and the cute fat-headed fish cub, as well as many of the emotions between the beast master and the beast master are well written and very comfortable to watch. Besides, the protagonist doesn't have any major shortcomings other than being too wretched. I really like that character who is determined to retaliate regardless of whether he is a good guy or a bad guy! As for the beginning when the protagonist enters the parallel world and can't do anything, and ends up failing in the exam and being ridiculed, it's actually okay. It's a bit blunt, but I personally don't think it's a bad point. If you're picky, it might be a bit off, but it's okay. The same goes for Zhuo Qingqing who changed his character secretly. After all, it felt like it was written as a villain, so that was okay. The last thing is a surprise that I don't know if it will happen. It can also be said that if it happens, it will be a big surprise to many people. Anyway, I will definitely run away directly. TvT is the Inspection Bureau! I originally didn't like the protagonist joining the army or the police, because engaging in these professions will somehow involve the Virgin (this refers to novels, because I sometimes take on the role of the protagonist, so I don't like it. In reality, such people are very respectable!). And ever since the Inspection Bureau conducted an inexplicable test without the protagonist's consent, it's not dislike but displeasure. Even if the protagonist is forcibly cleared later, at most the protagonist will not take revenge and go back, and absolutely do not join - joining will definitely be a big deal, and the kind that is not good at thunder!

It's beautiful, very good, it would be better if there was no female protagonist! One more pity, it's too short! ! !

I feel like the author is not suitable for writing conflicts, and it looks quite awkward. I suggest you write more about the interactions with Zaizai and the others.

I like the relationship between Dali Xiaocheng and Yu Zai, but the state department in it feels so low. This kind of test only lowers the protagonist's image in the heart, and there is nothing serious about it. At the beginning, when the protagonist encounters something, the first thing he thinks of is asking the Inspection Bureau for help. Now, the protagonist only thinks about whether it is the Inspection Bureau or the villain organization that is causing trouble. In other words, the protagonist no longer believes in them, and they themselves have pulled down their status, which is no longer the sacred and respected position.

I really don't understand more and more. What on earth do you want to do?

After reading Chapter 23, I think there are some problems. First, it can be seen from the naming of the pet beasts that have appeared so far that they are completely derived from Pokémon. I don't know what the author thinks. Isn't this just changing the soup without changing the medicine? Although it is a recent thing that the fandom has to reduce the number of recommended places, the number of words in this article does not seem to be because of this. If you want to write your own fantasy beast control, can you have some of your own ideas instead of copying others? Secondly, of the two villain classmates currently appearing, the male one wanted to fight the protagonist to the death because of jealousy. The female student asked the protagonist for help and wanted to get rid of him. Because she chose a B-level pet beast in the breeding house, she was directly recruited by three first-class schools without looking at her grades. Are you serious? Can it be disposed of casually like this? Third, this is only chapter 23. I saw the author said that there is no female protagonist, but in the average of ten pictures, I want to get into women's clothes. Are you serious? Fourth, is the female police officer responsible for protection serious? Just ask the protected person to pay for the meal he ordered. Don't tell me that the protagonist is pretending to be rich. Didn't you move the protagonist before? Can't you see your family background? And you are very casual during the protection period. Aren't you afraid that some fish that slipped through the net will come and cause trouble? Fifth, there are some ideas for cultivating giant fish, but there is only one point. Just use the content of beauty massage to cultivate. If you want to use the setting of evolution according to the beauty of Menas, you have to write out why you want to do this. If you have changed it to a beast-controlling text, don't default to the settings of Pokémon. Definitely Of course there are some good points in the writing First, the overall plot to the appearance of the female classmate's uncle is handled well Second, the writing is pretty good I hope the author can think carefully and write better, see you in the next article

Only those who are admitted to college can own more than six phantom beasts. Those who fail can only own one. Then let me ask, I didn't go to college, but I own six. Am I breaking the law? 🤔

Is the author a girl? It feels good but there are always illogical plots interspersed with it. It's very uncomfortable.

In this book, I don't look at the description of the villain, but just watch the protagonist interact with his pet beast, which is enough food. But when it comes to the villain, the strong overbearing style of writing makes me numb. Author, an excellent villain will make the novel a lot better. I hope the author will not just write novels that he likes to read, but that everyone likes to read... Maybe

This protagonist is nothing but useless.