People Are in the Wilderness, and They Have Their Own Chat Group with All the Heavens.

The world is too low-quality, the protagonist is too low-level, and he looks too naive!

In the prehistoric zone, even a pig became an immortal in 8,000 years, right? Nascent Soul? Isn't this reverse cultivation?

It's meaningless to talk about cause and effect. A drop of water circulates in the world for hundreds of millions of years. If you post it in a chat group, the world will always be missing a drop of water. How many causes and effects?

Actually, I didn't want to say it at first, but after seeing today's latest chapter, I really couldn't help but complain. The protagonist really doesn't have any qualifications as a god or demon. He has been like this since the Empress. Yes, you know that he may be Daluo in the future, but not now. After he came out, he was tricked by the empress and used by Ye Fan as a prop to test the immortal's fighting power. After winning, he still had to promise him to do ten things? Ten pieces! I really can't understand, in which work is the immortal so cowardly? Looking at this, the other party is not grateful at all. It can even be said that he does not even have the most basic respect. I would like to ask the author if he has ever thought that if an immortal can do something for the emperor, it is a supreme favor, okay! ……

When I saw Chapter 127, I didn't plan to read it. I said that I saw Chapter 127 only to express that I paid for the subscription, and then I saw the results now and I am more and more disappointed. I thought this book was quite interesting at first, but the more I read, the more frustrated I became. The fairyland described above is awesome, and Daluo is awesome. I have to find many backgrounds. It's awesome, and now you are being plotted and plotted, your face is being rubbed on the ground, and you are still happy. If the protagonist doesn't know, it's okay, you wrote it, you know that you are being plotted, and then the protagonist sticks to people like a dog, you are so cheap, I really don't understand what you want to write, I deleted the book...

Why are you promoting Zhang Sanfeng again? It's funny. The foundation of this world is there. Putting him in Zhetian will kill the Great Sage

Let's not talk about the low-end version. There are not too many poison points and slots at the beginning, and I can't complain. First of all, the setting of the protagonist itself is the biggest problem. The protagonist's peach tree spiritual root is powerful and can be used to suppress the cave. Obviously, can the level of this self be low? , It turns out that it took the protagonist eight thousand years to achieve the Golden Core Yuanying, and the powerful Qiankun Bag is ten feet in size, and the spiritual roots have their own inheritance. Instead, the protagonist went to practice the powerful skills and inheritance, and he was also drunk. The characters in the group are also a group of retarded people. This is not surprising. After all, there are only a few books that can be written in most chat groups. They are either Dihua or retarded and brainless. There are only a few who are really awesome.

Whoever writes a novel would have become an immortal long ago regardless of the book Pig's Foot. In this book, Pig's Foot is a big waste. There is no shortage of skills and resources. This is the first time I have seen such a waste of Pig's Foot.

The protagonist has cultivated to the Golden Core Realm for 8,000 years. Although the time flow rate is different, the higher world also has great advantages. As a result, the supporting character in the chat group was upgraded from level 136 to 150, and the protagonist was upgraded from level 97 to 99. There is no upgrade block for other high realms in the low realm. Let alone breaking the ban by sleeping, writing this is just a shame.

The author writes well, come on, I really like this style of slowly practicing, don't suddenly have a female protagonist fall in love in the later stages.

Coming to 8000 years ago, you cultivated into Nascent Soul. You are really a talent.

Seeing that he wanted to build his power, he immediately lost the desire to read on. Jin Dan began to think about building a power in the ancient world. No one wanted this cultivation level to be used as cannon fodder, so he didn't think about how to practice it. It feels funny, just like when I first started working, with a salary of less than 2,000, I really thought that I would open a company, live in a villa, and drive a luxury car in the future. I just thought about it in my mind, and it was very funny when I wrote it!

In the prehistoric world, eight thousand years have turned into a golden elixir of human talent. Okay, after seeing this, I am basically sure that this book will not be popular.

In the prehistoric times, after eight thousand years of wandering, it would still take a hundred years for the golden elixir to be perfected, which was absolutely incredible.

It's just forcing the theory of cause and effect, and it's trying to push everything up, so don't do anything, don't practice cultivation, and just wait to die!

Is this kind of content too watery? The number of words is so low these days, and the writing style is not enough, so just make up nonsense?

The plot becomes more and more weird after this. Da Luo is described as omnipotent. As a result, even Jiejiao has a bunch of Da Luo. In the early Yuan era, the gods and demons are still Da Luo. This Da Luo is too cheap. Can't one Da Luo only appear in an era? Sometimes no Da Luo is created for several epochs. The beginning and end of the prehistoric era is just for the emergence of a great Luo. The power of the prehistoric era is gathered to create an omnipotent great Luo.

Hongjun is also a poor man, Fuxi's tool man, the public account and pot-pushing king of Sanqian Daluo. He was created by Sanqian Daluo to run the way of heaven, exploited, oppressed and imprisoned, and was forced to practice a new account.

It's awkward and clumsy, and there are still problems with the logic. The real body of Peach Tree is at the level of gods and demons, but as a result, it transformed into something extraordinary.

Now I can accept Zhutian's plot if it's not outrageous, but your combat power and worldview description are really a mess.

The world view is incoherent. Worlds like the Supreme Being have come out, but you describe the world as a continent, using ambiguous measurement units like billions of miles. Moreover, you assume that the oldest person in the previous Supreme Being is only a half-step Daluo, and the performance of the oldest person is to change the time at will. A complete universe of heavens and realms is born within the body of causal destiny, and the prehistoric era you describe is like a continent rather than in the form of multiple time and space. Moreover, I really don't understand your description of Daluo. I don't require you to have the eternal life of the Holy King, but you must at least have the Holy Sacrifice Way.

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I followed the example of other big guys and started a group. Friends who are interested can join!