The Book of Blue Clouds in the Sky

Come on, look forward to the follow-up. Also, I want to ask, is there a female protagonist in this book?

Brother, you can't become popular if you write a book like this. It's only a few dozen chapters and it's already out of stock before it's even put on the shelves. You've lost a handful of dirt in the ocean, right? And is the protagonist a time traveler? Sharing everything is really the truth, kindness and beauty in the world?

The protagonist is a boy who gives away treasures. He is really a wise man. Have you seen Zhan🐺? Movies all know about personal heroism, but you don't understand this when writing novels? The protagonist saves the world alone and a group of people save the world. The feeling of immersion is different. It is destined to be a failure.

What to say, Chapter 29. The open hook is a bit big, and the jump in writing is too big. It may not be suitable for Zhu Xian's readers, because it is too "modern".

The first 27 chapters were okay, but by chapter 28 it was a bit outrageous. There were too many legacies of the Five Elements Sect, and it was too abrupt. It was excusable even if you told the master, and even advertised it widely, I just lost interest!

Adding a person who didn't have the original novel, I don't know what to think. What? A time traveler?

Cut it? How about saying something?

It looks very cool, but there are some problems with giving away treasures casually.

At the ruins of the Five Elements Sect, I can only say that it is outrageous. It is just left there. There is no formation restriction. It is impossible for such a large sect to be gone without anyone exploring. The things are almost placed in front of you and are easily accessible.,, Forget it, I have no brain, the author has the final say

I feel like the writing is not good. Let's take a look at the details. An eight-level super clear and four snakes can't defeat the protagonist. Your master just said before that your strength is eight levels. Now, can you just slap yourself in the face? Also, if a little brother is so powerful, he can't be hurt by a top-level magic weapon. Wasn't your master's magic weapon only at this level before it was upgraded? You can really write.

It looks pretty good, keep following up.

'In a world where personal power is paramount, there is no need to be a gift boy. You have given away all your things to others. Why? Just to improve the strength of others? Brother, this is Zhutianliu. The protagonist will have to change the world sooner or later. If he doesn't improve his strength a little more, wouldn't it be courting death to come to an unknown new world?

I don't know how to evaluate it. It feels strange to give away treasures of heaven and earth to others at will without a golden finger. Even your master has not given so many treasures of heaven and earth to his disciples. If you, as a junior disciple, give so much, won't others feel that you are a mobile treasure house? If you are always top-notch, in reality you would have been killed by the devil a hundred times.

The beginning looks good, looking forward to the follow-up

Embarrassing, I read it in writing as Zhutian Song Qingshu