I Am Gradually Becoming Omniscient and Omnipotent in the Heavens

The plot is too watery, and most of the text is copying the settings. The first part is okay. I don't know the original work well. I can read the Shendiao Scroll, Qing Yu Nian is good, I can watch the first and middle stages of Snow in the Snow, I would like to call the Zhu Xian Scroll a "pure water elf", and Jiang Ye has inherited Zhu Xian's high-quality water veins. The water flow is too big, and I have no patience to wash it away, so I am not interested in the rest. In general, if you have never read the original work or are not familiar with the plot, and you can tolerate typos and grammatical errors from time to time, as well as the protagonist's name in almost every sentence, you can use it to pass the time. It can be said that what supported me to continue reading were the original works of these novels, and also partly because the authors were retired soldiers. Washed up and went to sleep.

To be honest, I can't think of any other reason why you write so closely to the plot, except for the word count, and the realm you set and the performance of your system are too exaggerated.

Nowadays, fan fiction is all about following the plot in the same way. Who among the authors would watch a movie and TV series over and over again dozens of times? Not to mention other novels, the golden finger of the protagonist in this book is the strongest learning system. What is the greatest wealth in a different world if you have this golden finger? Is it a plot? It's knowledge, okay! If you have advanced computer science, building an artificial intelligence is easy, right? Materials science has advanced to a high level. What materials will be needed in the future that cannot be synthesized by oneself? The benefits to the protagonist of advanced genetics are obvious, right? Isn't it easy for those with superpowers to have superpowers? It's easy to get those sacred bodies, right? Medical knowledge, nuclear energy knowledge, knowledge of the four basic forces, energetics, mathematics, psychology, acting, economics, finance, military science, You can learn all these in the modern world, and then you can enjoy it in any world you travel to. Typing is too annoying, otherwise there are so many ideas, it is really difficult to find a well-written book, Not to mention other things, just artificial intelligence, develop an artificial intelligence, and then develop the protons of the Trisolaran world, and then make billions of these protons, synthesize materials, and make artificial intelligence. Even if you go to the magic, fairy, or fantasy world, you can spread these protons all over the world or the continent, and monitor the entire continent. When the time comes, don't you want to see the Scripture Pavilion and the library? What knowledge do you want but can't get? Why follow the plot in the same way and follow the plot yourself based on the original world view? Isn't it more attractive to readers than following the plot?

If Douluo is deleted, more people will see it.

Why don't you change your name and make your content inconsistent with your name?

I can't stand it anymore. This book is really too ordinary. It's a dog-licking nanny. It has no passion, no content and no depth. The writing is not up to par, and it can't bring out the taste of the original work.

This book is very poisonous. Firstly, it is too watery. Secondly, even if the protagonist travels back in time and forgets the plot, it is not a novel that he won in the lottery, but he still doesn't know anything about what is written later. Also, even if the protagonist travels to the past in modern times, the modern thoughts are still there, and the book says that the protagonist is as if he was born there and learned everything from scratch. The third thing is that Shirley Yang is very poisonous. I feel that it would be better to write her to death. How can I put it? This person is completely selfish. He clearly knows that there is an ancestral curse but he just cheats the protagonist and them. The fourth is that the title of the book is completely inconsistent with the content. Sometimes when I look at it, I wonder if I am reading this book. This is the biggest poisonous point. Fifth, this is my personal point of view. I feel that the protagonist's character and actions are not very good. I hope that the protagonist should be more cold-blooded and decisive in killing. It is best not to have a virgin or a heroine.

I can't see the function of the system. Isn't it the strongest learning system? Why can't I feel the learning function of the system? How can I just add some experience points and learn it into my brain? He even fainted! Everything else is system tasks!

It's better not to write about Douluo, it's completely meaningless. Don't write heroines. You can just hook up and listen to music to sleep with women.

I clicked in after seeing the introduction. Before I read it, I thought it was a scholar-type cultural character. But... In the end, I still lost.

If you have anything to complain about, you can complain here. If you complain elsewhere, I will delete the post!

This book is really boring, bland and bland

In response to the cognitive issues that many book friends have about the protagonist system, I will give a unified reply here. First of all, the system is called a learning system, and there must be learning tasks. However, the first world belongs to the novice stage. The system now has a guiding role. Through frequent tasks, the protagonist can initially acquire the ability of omniscience and omnipotence as soon as possible. Otherwise, wouldn't it be inconsistent with the title of the book? In the next world, before each world begins, the system issues learning tasks to ask the protagonist to learn something in this world. Then when leaving, the protagonist will be evaluated and settled based on what he has learned in this world. Beyond that, the system will show up less and less! In the end, after experiencing world after world, the protagonist passes the learning tasks issued by the system, and finally becomes an omniscient and omnipotent story! At the same time, I would like to thank all the book friends for their opinions and suggestions. Your opinions and suggestions can often provide me with good ideas!

It's really boring. All the descriptions are from the perspective of the protagonist, and all the supporting characters are like tool people without thinking. There is no excitement in reading it

The story in the book deviates from the theme. The title of the book is omniscient and omnipotent, but the story does not reflect it.

눈_눈80% Is water, I really don't want to watch it anymore

I wonder if there is a female protagonist? If not, leave. If there is no woman in time travel, it would be better to write about a monk.

There are too many worlds, so I'll write down a few less (just write one about She Condor and Yitian)

Little Dragon Girl

Author, I would like to make a personal comment, that is, your recent writing has been a bit stained. You have to pick up treasures in the Universe State, and you have to enter the upper and lower parts. There are almost five pictures in total. You just pick up things in the Universe State. What you write should be like the previous ghost blowing the lamp, and the early stage of Swallowing the Stars. What should I say? Things that can be dealt with in one stroke are dealt with in one stroke. In the past, I felt that those things were just on the main line, but now Swallowing Starry Sky has a little bit of ink in the later stages.

How many avatars do the male protagonist have? One time, one main character plus nine avatars, another one, one main character plus ten avatars.

The book was pretty good at the beginning, but it has stopped working since Qing Yunian. The system is gradually disappearing. Every time the protagonist goes to a world, he has to practice it all over again. It's boring. If the author of the system doesn't want to write it, he can upgrade the system into something similar to the protagonist. Now that the protagonist is no longer needed, it's very annoying to leave it there.

From Devouring the Starry Sky to now, most of the plots going forward are not interesting? I suggest the author take a fugue and go to other worlds, such as Tomb Raider Notes

All Hunyuan Dao, the ultimate realm of Tao in all soul directions ← One Hunyuan Dao, [Essence] ← Ultimate Realm ← Fusion of the two lines of Tao ← One line of Tao ← Chaos law ← Fusion law ← Upper law ← Lower law ← Domain ← Artistic conception ← Perfection, perfection ← Specialization, subtlety ← Basics [Among them, All Hunyuan Tao (all non-soul-directed Tao from the ultimate realm to Hunyuan level).                               Hunyuan Dao, [Essence] (Xue Ying mastered [Essence] at one and a half hours, and at two hours Xue Ying used [Essence] to combine into the familiar Hunyuan Void Dao and became the lord). The ultimate state (the fusion of all channels of Tao). The law of chaos (the fusion law of the ten laws, corresponding to the origin of chaos).       The fusion law (the fusion law of the eight beast gods, and other randomly matched fusion laws correspond to various sources, such as the fusion law of water and fire corresponding to the source of water and fire, the fusion law of the six laws of the space series corresponding to the source of life, the fusion law of the four laws of the time series Corresponding to the source of destruction, Luo Feng relied on the source of life and the source of destruction to become the eternal true god, referred to as the source of life and death. The destruction of the source of life plus the destruction of the source of destruction embarked on the path of destruction. Luo Feng relied on the law of chaos to become the master of chaos, and relied on the path of destruction to become the god king). ] (I think there is a way of weapons in the endless source space. Luo Feng relied on the law of fusion of metal and space to become the master of the universe, relied on the source of life and death to become the eternal true god, relied on the law of chaos to become the master of chaos, and because of the world beast, relied on the way of destruction to become the king of gods, but in the end Still the sword technique that accompanied him from the beginning became a lord through the way of the sword (the way of the Hunyuan sword)) The endless Hunyuan space has only one [Essence], and [Essence] represents the rules. After the rules are condensed, the basic power of the Hunyuan space - the power of Hunyuan - evolves. The power of Chaotic Source is soil, which will derive a large number of the highest-level powers: the power of Chaotic Source Void (corresponding to the way of Chaotic Source Void), the power of Chaotic Source Destruction (corresponding to the way of Chaotic Source Destruction), the power of Chaotic Source Space-time (corresponding to the Dao of Chaotic Source Space-time)... The power of Chaotic Source is the foundation of everything. Extracting an [Everything] The endless Chaotic Source space can be expressed like this: [Essence]→←Power of Chaotic Source→←[Everything] [Among them, [Everything] (the lower ones such as the ten laws and the corresponding origins, the eight beast-god fusion laws and the corresponding origins, the middle layer For example, in addition to the eight beast-god fusion laws, other fusion laws and corresponding various sources, chaos laws and corresponding chaos origins, the high-level ones are the ultimate realm of Tao in the non-soul direction and the corresponding origin of Tao in the source world, and the highest level are all the highest-level powers and all corresponding Hunyuan Tao and all soul directions. The ultimate realm of Tao and the corresponding origin of Tao in the source world)] The source world can be expressed like this: The power of Hunyuan→←All the ultimate realms of Tao and the corresponding origins The founder of the Hunyuan life group can be expressed like this: The power of Hunyuan→←One Hunyuan The source path and the corresponding highest-level power, or the ultimate realm of the soul direction The most basic lord can be expressed like this: [Essence]→←The power of Chaotic Source→←The Chaotic Source Dao and the corresponding highest-level force [Essence] has eternal characteristics. The ancestor developed the power of his bloodline to the extreme, and did not master the [essence], so he could not develop other Hunyuan Tao and the corresponding highest level power, or the ultimate realm of Taoism in other soul directions, except for the power of his own bloodline (a kind of Hunyuan Tao and the corresponding highest level power, or a soul direction of the ultimate Taoist realm). Moreover, in the process of [Essence] → All Chaotic Source Paths and all Soul Directions reaching the Ultimate Realm, the characteristics of [Essence] are also dispersed into all Hunyuan Paths and all Soul Directions reaching the Ultimate Realm. Therefore, only the ancestors with special bloodline can be immortal. The lord relies on his own thinking to practice. Before finally mastering the Hunyuan Dao, he first masters the [essence], and then combines it into the Hunyuan Dao he is familiar with to become a lord. Therefore, the lord can eternally explore all Hunyuan Tao and the ultimate realm of all soul directions, converging to the endless Hunyuan space. Although the Tao in the soul direction only reaches the Ultimate Realm, non-soul-directed semi-Chaotic Source level Tao, absorbing the Soul-direction Tao Ultimate Realm can become Chaotic Source Tao. Therefore, the lord who masters the Tao Ultimate Realm in one soul direction can master all Hunyuan Tao faster, and the Tao Ultimate Realm that masters all other soul directions by analogy can converge to the endless Hunyuan Space faster. So the lord is only lower than the creator god Tomato. The lord of the fan is only lower than the author's creation god (the author of the fan created the world, and it is feasible to have the lord lower than Tang San). Based on the above two items, it can be concluded that Lord is only lower than reality.

It's a pity that there are no tomb robbing notes. If you want to write the tomb robbing notes, you have to start from Laojiumen, otherwise it won't be perfect.

Tomorrow's ending will be so hasty, so perfect that I won't write it anymore

First one

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