Exchange the Heavens Starting from Swallowing

Protagonist: Identity: Memory of an indigenous body-taker. [I see that the protagonist is an indigenous person with the memory of a time traveler. I slipped away.

It seems like I can't write without awakening my spiritual power.

The will of the original universe is very sensitive to the inside, especially after the original ancestor's troubles, good guys, alien species, and strange objects are all related to you. Even if these are harmless but beneficial to the universe, let the Ancestral God Sect be incorporated immediately. Did you refuse?

Is the protagonist still the protagonist? No matter where he goes, he will be unlucky. You, the author, don't have to let the protagonist escape from death every time just for the sake of the plot! ! ! ! To put it bluntly, if you continue like this, I feel that if the protagonist transcends and comes to our world, I estimate that the author will have to die countless times to relieve the protagonist's hatred 😒😒😒😒😒

There are too many emotional dramas about devouring fandoms and it's not good to read.

The mythical beast of the dragon, strange fire and other things appear to be devouring it. I suspect that as soon as it is redeemed, the Ancestral God Sect will come out to talk to the pig's feet, otherwise, the supreme rule will simply destroy the pig's feet.

Dialogues, psychological descriptions, various embarrassments, and countless poorly worded sentences

This psychological description caused him to die of poison in Chapter 18

The basic settings are wrong, and Li Wei was killed inexplicably. Luo Feng was clearly going to deal with the Huya Squad, but he ended up killing the employer of the Huya Squad, and he also blackmailed others and then broke up the fight. . . Would a martial arts gym protect this kind of personality? Please ask the author to bring some basic logical thinking into the book. . . I saw a lot of readers pointing out that the author just didn't revise it and kept writing it. I guess not many people would read it. . .

After reading the first thirty chapters, I felt that the aura of the protagonist was really strong, so I stopped reading the rest. I wish the author will become a great master soon.

How do you feel about this system? Does anyone have any opinions on this system?

Li Wei persuaded him to quit, and he was looking for trouble for himself when he had nothing to do. He lost his mind and didn't take it out with the family.

Why do you have to practice strength training? Earth slices are not supposed to accumulate energy quickly. Reaching planetary star level? Understanding the rules is the most important thing in the early stage. Always in the water. After reading a few chapters, the protagonist has a system. Not to mention the rapid accumulation of energy. Arrive at Planet Star and you go read the original. The universe wants to be immortal. Basically, it takes 100 times to exert force, and 10,000 times is required for the overlord of the universe. You wrote that killing monsters can be redeemed 20 times or 40 times. The best apprentice record in the universe is 20 times. Too much imagination. Beyond reality

System flow is meaningless, has no characteristics, and is difficult to get good results by visual inspection, but you still have to work hard🌱Grow up.

I originally wanted to read it, but when I saw that the main character was named Yang Wu, it immediately became boring. Many of the books I devoured were written by Yang Wu, but I prefer to create an original character.

I didn't feel immersed in this novel.

The writing is too messy and looks laborious

There is no possibility that you are not suitable for writing books. You have already written 4 books in just one year. If you feel that the results are not good, then change the subject. Swallowing Starry Sky fandom is a niche in itself. What you write is not good enough and you don't have the patience. Think about what you are writing.

Don't learn the Nine-layer Thunder Knife. Isn't it better to customize the wishing system to suit you? It can be better than the Nine-layer Thunder Knife, and it can still be sold for money. Is this a great system that you are using as waste?