The Journey of Martial Arts Starting from Zixia Gong

What should I say? This master I worship will persuade many people to quit. I wish the author will write better and better.

I don't understand why the author is so slavish. He tells others everything and leaves no trump card to himself. Tell others what you have learned without any reservation. Even your relatives may harm you, not to mention that you, the master, are not a good person. Discourage.

I hope the author won't do anything about nature and nurture. When writing martial arts, he should try to be more martial arts-like, not elementary school-like.

I have read more than 60 chapters, let me tell you what you think. Generally speaking, I can take a look at it. The author also inserted it from a novel perspective and became a disciple of Huashan. Then some of the writing is too bland. After all, he is a time traveler and has no plans. Huashan martial arts is not that weak. However, the best martial arts the protagonist learned were all found by himself. People in Huashan did not pay attention to them. Another author who cannot describe the love between men and women, and actually follows the plot step by step? There is nothing new in that.

The white-eyed wolf protagonist that I hate the most is originally the evil lone star who causes casualties to those around him. He is a white-eyed wolf that others have raised for decades and are not familiar with.

The protagonist with bad outlook on life is worse than Linghu Chong, which probably reflects the author's bad outlook on personality.

I couldn't stand it as soon as I started reading it. The author obviously didn't read the whole book before running out to write, what does it mean that the ancient tomb is deserted? It is obvious that the descendants of the Yang family came out in the late Yitian period and lived in seclusion in the ancient tomb. . . . . .

Save the child, we just met. In order for Wuji to use up his energy, you can at least make more excuses to deal with us. If you don't make excuses at all, just let us figure it out on our own? Even if my writing skills are poor, I can't say this. Directly saving lives is the most important, or do you want to use the character of the Holy Mother? Then you thought I didn't say that.

The protagonist's three views are not correct, poisonous weeds, after all, the family teacher is rarely good at understanding

Let me tell you, there are a lot of female supporting characters of the same age in less than 25 chapters and the female supporting characters have more or less mental problems. I will take a look at it next. If you don't like it, I will abandon it.

I have just read the beginning of this book. How should I deal with the relationship between the protagonist and Xian Yutong? Clean him up. It feels too disgusting to read. It is more disgusting than eating a dead mouse. Just watch him die. For readers with a God's perspective, they feel that the character of the protagonist is not good. The main reason is that people like Xian Yutong are so bad. I don't know what the author's mentality is when he chooses Xian Yutong as his teacher to start the game. Even if you choose Xuanming and Xianyu Tong as your teacher, it is better than choosing Xian Yutong.

I travel for the sake of time travel, I don't know what I do to practice martial arts for food, the second chapter is basically copying books, Shuhuang writes a book by himself, this pen name obviously means that the author overestimates himself, you can you up, the result is just as tragic. . .

After reading it, he saw that the protagonist had found Xiantian Kung Fu and Zixia Kung Fu in the sect's library. He copied the exercises himself, and then continued to hide the originals, waiting for the right person. What the hell is the difference between this and Linghu Chong? Your master raised you, so why not raise a dog?

It doesn't matter if he wasn't wearing a body in the first world. What's the point of having to change his body in every world?

It's too poisonous. One is that the protagonist doesn't tell anyone the secrets, but only reveals them ten years later, and he doesn't even tell them all. It's really disgusting. Second, it's okay to help relatives or not, but after all, a righteous disciple must have proper etiquette and compensation. The descendant of the master is a scumbag, and the protagonist is still like this, which is too dissuasive.

A new work by a famous artist? ? ? I just laughed

Sister Hu Qingniu and her son were poisoned to death by golden silkworms, and Xianyu Tongjin silkworms are not poisonous, so they deserved to be palmed back on their faces. Moreover, the daughter of the head of Huashan was poisoned to death by Xianyu Tongjin silkworms. This is the most inhumane villain in Jin Yong's novels.

What is the purpose of practicing this martial arts?

I saw that I went to the Zhongnan Mountain Ancient Tomb. During this period, Yang Guo's descendants must still be in the ancient tomb!

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