
An Adeptus's Daily Life in Teyvat
提瓦特大陆的仙人日常
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
539Chapters
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2.6kRecs
24.8kFans
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I remember to torture those two losers who disturbed Jianyi after seeing Fei Que, otherwise I would feel unhappy. Of course, forget it if I didn't write about it.
The characters of Chong Yun, Xing Qiu, Qin and others are deviating from the game. The protagonist wrote a book and spent a lot of words to describe it. Of course, this may also be my problem, or I am not suitable for this kind of book. I started to pay attention to this book when it was just ten chapters old, but recently I have become more and more disappointed. I hope the author can improve it.
Now I am very doubtful about the author's mental state. In order to encourage the author, I can only discount 999, hoping that the author can carry forward his unique (crazy) style.
What the hell? Aren't mandrills from the Yaksha clan? How come you are now a bird?
Damn it, boy? Danmei, are you investing here?
An essential question, is this book good to read? Don't put any filters on your answer, just focus on the pen and writing style. How does it compare with other fans (such as Naruto's high-scoring fans)?
A rather long book review
Let me comment on it seriously. First of all, the advantage of this book is that the writing style is not bad. The author is capable of writing a good work. At least even if he follows the routine, it is enough to make a pass in online articles to support himself. I will focus on the shortcomings later (because this is the only advantage) 1. [No main plot] The protagonist seems to be a plot adaptation machine, without any purpose or any logic of action, as if it is just to satisfy the author's fantasy of adapting the plot of Genshin Impact into a cool novel; when things come out and things come out, I almost want to insert the plot originally described in Genshin Impact according to the routine of a cool novel. The protagonist of the experience given to readers is not a pure water elf, but more like a fly flying everywhere. 2. [Serious Feudal Complex] Because the devil loves people, and because the devil is powerful and can handle many things that humans cannot handle, people must follow him without any complaints or second thoughts. The Demon God of Salt does not like/is not good at fighting but is very kind. Although her people can only hide in Tibet and are deprived of the qualification to live in the sun, God loves the world, so she is not wrong; the tower tyrant is self-motivated and is great in isolating the wind and snow. In fact, he is a CJB. After being overthrown, Wendy directly solved the problem of wind and snow. Although he raised people in pig pens, God loves the world, so he is not wrong. Then the protagonist begins to exterminate human desires with great righteousness, and the descendants of the followers of the Salt Demon God are directly purged and exiled. Brother, this is a peaceful era. Our ancestors have lived for so many years, and living resources are obtained through labor. Is it your turn to be judged by the pure water elves who have been sleeping for 500 years? And to execute a large group of people with just one notice, without giving any excuse or opportunity to make amends, is the social impact not considered? Wouldn't other people think that this butcher's knife would fall on them one day? 3. [I want to be feudal but don't understand feudalism] Qixing is the real power person who guards key departments and is only responsible to the emperor. You are an immortal and you are an imperial envoy. Are you awesome? You just woke up for 500 years and started shouting around to review Qixing's work after just three days of sleep? Even if you find something wrong with Qixing, you can only report it privately. Wouldn't direct accountability be a slap in the emperor's face? 4. [Acting disorderly] In order to write a cool story about accountability to the Seven Stars, the protagonist was given a powerful position; then, in order to be funny and funny, a bunch of settings were added, making him become a fool from time to time; and finally, in order to satisfy the author's desire to change the outcome of some people, the protagonist occasionally killed decisively. Any two of the above combined are already a disaster, and all three together I can only say good guys. That is, you can imagine a mentally ill person. An unhappy person is like killing someone, and the key is that his killing is legal. What kind of despair it is to live in this kind of Liyue... 5. [Other three-view issues] The protagonist has an attitude of "done all the work in this life when he entered the customs." That is to say, is it possible that even if the emperor does not win the battle between the demons and gods, according to the routine of gods loving the world, people will still live well... It's not that they can't live without you, can you not be a eunuch and set the emperor's pedigree?
Author, I would like to make a suggestion, either delete the character card of the emperor, or add the character cards of several female characters, or directly state in the introduction that the protagonist's sexual orientation is normal. Otherwise, your character card only contains two men, and there are hints of Nantong in the beginning, and then you submit the book to a male channel, what's wrong? Do you want to go to heaven? After reading more than 200 chapters, I glanced at the book sticker out of boredom and thought it was Nantong Shukai who scolded me. You deserve it for what you did!
It can be more daily, and try to be a version slower than the official version, otherwise the later chapters will be more troublesome. Miha backstabbed the fan author not once or twice. Don't write anything that the official did not explain in detail. Someone from Station B and Miyou Society summarized the in-game information. When referencing, be careful to distinguish between the summarized content and your own supplementary content. Cai Ying described it very well, but the official protagonist was relatively normal in the early stage, and only became shabby in the later stage.
After reading three chapters, the grass content is amazing🙂