Rebirth Starts in 2005

I am thirty-two this year. If I could time travel, I would still marry my original wife. The greatest luck in this life is to meet her. I met her in college and we have been together for ten years.

Copying music is a failure. Ordinary people can't remember the music even if they remember the lyrics. What's more, if you don't know how to compose the music without any knowledge of music theory, you will be fooled in minutes.

How can an ordinary person remember so many songs? This book collapsed after copying the songs.

Is Feng Xi also reborn? If yes, I will withdraw it and stop reading.

How to put it, anyway, you can see the number of sets here. If you want a harem, follow through to the end, and a scumbag will be a scumbag. Don't play exciting literary games, take them all if you want them, don't force yourself into a lover who will end up in a fight. Rebirth novels are really about nine out of ten books that involve playing tricks on the wife of the previous life. The readers are annoyed after spending money to read the book. Why bother?

I was also drunk after being double penetrated and having a harem. Isn't it good to have a single female protagonist?

As long as the interaction between men and women is well written, the rest can be tolerated. But this male protagonist is really a bit of a turtle. He restricts himself and others. There have always been several women who have devoted themselves to the male protagonist. How many times has the male protagonist devoted his feelings? To put it bluntly, it's just about giving out sweets. Whether it's Feng Xi or Ellie, the male protagonist doesn't have that feeling of love from the heart. The male protagonist's feelings are like a toad. If you poke him with a stick, he will jump. I recognize your characterization of the male protagonist anyway. Although it looks beautiful, it still makes me feel aggrieved. There are quite a lot of scenes spent on the interaction between the male and female protagonists, but there is really no sweetness. As for the supporting role, I won't say if Xiao wants to accept it. If Gu doesn't accept it, write less of her scenes, otherwise she will be scolded later, and it will be embarrassing whether she accepts it or not. If you set him to be a generation older than the male protagonist, don't make him ambiguous, otherwise the setting will be a bit jarring. Why was Feng Xi like that in his previous life? Is life just unsatisfactory? Why have there been so many changes in this life? Just because the male protagonist has cancer. All of these things still lack characterization, explanation, and plot. To be honest, Ellie is a bit boring. I have no choice but to write like this. She only looks for the male protagonist. For various reasons, if the male protagonist abandons her, she will be gone for the rest of her life. Her psychology is logically very fragile. The male protagonist wants to increase her self-confidence and help her do more things. This is what the male protagonist is doing. She is also very insecure, and as long as the male protagonist makes a promise to her, it will probably be easy to deceive her. The role of Xiao does not have many roles, so there is no further explanation, but from the current point of view, she was interested in the male protagonist in her previous life. Logically speaking, the male protagonist in her previous life was a bad guy, so what is the actual story between her and the male protagonist? I don't know, but I hope it can surprise readers. Personally, I think three female protagonists are actually enough. If three people can be vividly written and written well, it will be much better than dividing it into ten or eight characters. It's just my personal opinion on how you should write it or how you should write it.

I recharged another 600 coins, and I really couldn't stop liking the author's writing style. An excellent novel not only has two female protagonists, but also a supporting female character like Liang Wei and a hidden thread like the White Widow's daughter. After all, in life, you meet many people, and everyone may be together or miss them. This is a complete life.

It's okay to copy one or two songs occasionally, but I don't want to make a career out of copying songs.

I skipped through it and finished it. I felt that the writing was quite good and there were no flaws. The plot was just too over-the-top, and there was nothing exciting at all. I was just writing a diary~ The heroines were too ordinary and not that likable. Brother, you are writing a novel. It is not against the law to make the plot exaggerated and the characters sharp.

I have read more than two hundred chapters, but I don't know why the more I get to the end, the less I want to read it. Alas! ! ! ! What a pity

I have no feelings for my ex-wife. It would be nice for the protagonist to be a bit more scumbag.

After reading Chapter 85, I want to ask, is the pig's foot still so poor? ? ? This is the poorest time traveler I have ever seen.

The writing is still good, but the heroine is also wearing it, and it's very awkward. It's not interesting anymore, and what's more, it's not that exciting.

There is a characteristic of this author's books. The male protagonist is always coy and naughty. Every time he takes a step forward, the female protagonist pushes him away. This was the case in the previous book, and it is still the same in this one.

It's starting to get cliché, It's still the same sentence. Why do I remember so many lyrics? It's amazing if an ordinary person can remember a few lyrics in full.

I can't stand it anymore. Author, if you want to write about a prodigal son, then write about a prodigal son. If you want to write about a good feudal husband, then write about a good feudal husband. What the hell is this? After being reborn, you were able to get drunk and raped by a woman twice in a row. From the beginning when you were cheated by your ex-wife to the end, what kind of life did you have? Have you figured out what's cool about the rebirth story? That reincarnated stray cat is no longer so obvious, so you can't recognize it? I have never been so frustrated by reading a novel. You should really learn from Tudou. It's not that the protagonist cannot suffer setbacks, but you can't let the protagonist fall into the same pit dozens of times, let alone keep the protagonist in the dark and act like a Mongolian. The reader assumes the role of the protagonist. You have told the reader the truth, but you continue to let the protagonist be deceived. This will only make the reader unable to take the role and lose the reading experience. The protagonist in your article is disgusted with the word "literary youth". I don't know if this is your own idea, but the article you wrote really has a taste of literary youth.

The heroine should just confess her rebirth. That way the hero will be shocked and then have orgasms one after another. It will be much better than the plain water now.

I feel like the writing is broken at the end and not many people have read it, so I'd better finish it as soon as possible. I couldn't write it down from Ai Lili. I didn't like this woman in the first place, so I just helped her to avoid tragedy. But in the end, when I helped her in bed, she did a lot of bullshit. The writing of the two women is too affectionate, and the protagonist is both responsible and upright. It is uncomfortable to see the protagonist in a dilemma. It has no sense of satisfaction and is not the style of Internet novels.

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I originally planned to read this book for a long time, but when it was more than 100 chapters, the author suddenly set a goal for the protagonist to earn 100 million in two years. The moment I said this sentence was very satisfying, but as a reborn person, as long as the author dares to write the protagonist, it is like playing a single-player game with a cheat device. In fact, I prefer the cooperative method with Chen Li to rely on nature. For the part about copying songs, I originally planned to go to some exhibition to write about blue and white porcelain, but the result was inexplicable because of a bet and I wrote more than a dozen poems at once, which was too poor. , The emotional line is really contradictory. Logically speaking, one should not have such deep feelings for Sister Lily. The so-called goddess is more like a joke, but the author insists on setting it up like this. The wife of the previous generation is also very contradictory here, and the female classmate is also ambiguous. In short, in Before the 100 million bet, everything was pretty good. I guess the author felt that the first part was too bland, and the results were not good enough to show off, and the later part of the harem was so cautious at the beginning. Of course, these are just my personal opinions. Maybe others would prefer the fast pace of the harem.

The new book is about to start. Everyone, after reading every day, come here to check in. Support and supervise the author, let him write well, and we will happily read it!

I saw 157 being poisoned to death in one breath

The writing in the front of this book is quite good, and it is considered a masterpiece, but the plot in the back is nothing but a few women! I can't help but ask the author? Are you writing a romance novel?

The first few dozen chapters are wonderful! Very down to earth

The first part was good, but after reading Chapter 160, I didn't feel as good as the first part.

It's good to read. I'll read it this May Day

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