Across the Heavens, Starting with The Great Dao Contends

This is my realm comparison table, the dog head saves life~ Those numbers are just the ages of the original protagonists that I marked, which can be ignored In the column of "Tahao", the Fund-Building Pill Yuan Ying Transformation God in the middle is just for my own convenience, and can also be ignored. Third edition

You can write less about other things and more about Tahoe and Avenue.

The threshold for entry into the Shaoqing sect is very high. Protagonist, don't fall off the cliff! 😄😄

Jumping back and forth between worlds is a headache, so it's better to write world by world. Let's focus on the form of sword riding. Many novels are about flying on swords. It feels very embarrassing. A sword cultivator steps on the flying sword that is intertwined with his soul every day. I don't know what the authors think. They were led astray by the TV series. The author must avoid the trap. In the first few chapters, I saw you stepping on the sword, but it disappeared later. It's okay, okay.

I'll go and it's over. I don't want the author's account anymore. There's no explanation at all.

My suggestion is that the setting of the Grand Avenue Contest must be changed, otherwise we will find that all this may just be a world created by Patriarch Yaohan when Big Eyes was fighting with Patriarch Yaohan. If you don't change it, you will never be able to escape from your senior brother's grasp. Without magic reform, you can't achieve true Yang. It's best to be a local who competes with others, otherwise your realm will be locked. After taking the mysterious stone, you have to fight with the innate demon. After the fight, there are still ten thousand battles. Behind Wan Que, there is Yao Han who is eyeing him, and then Tai Ming Patriarch's lineage wants the family property, and then there are all kinds of disasters that will not exist. The world of Battle of the Roads is full of pits, and you will die if you fall into them.

In fact, there can be less of everything else and more of Avenue and Tahoe.

The Great Way is too difficult to write, the upper limit is high, and the requirements for qualifications, mind, nature, and resources are too high. Moreover, you have to pay attention to etiquette and recite poems, otherwise your qualifications will be lost. Moreover, no unfavorable thoughts can arise within the scope of the True Yang. The World of Refining Gods is omniscient and omnipotent, and no secrets can be hidden. And time travel and rebirth are all child's play. There are too many people in the avenue, so it doesn't count as golden fingers.

If you have read all the books in it and still remember the content, it will probably look good. If you haven't read it, you will be confused. Unfamiliar world settings are interspersed with each other, which is too difficult to watch. I guess I haven't read Dao Dao and Tai Hao. Reading your book is just reading the Book of Heaven, and I don't even understand the state of things. The most important thing is that the division of realms between the two worlds is inherently complicated, and if you cross them with each other, it makes your head hurt just to see them.

In fact, Dao Zhengzong is really not suitable for writing about Tianwen, or the first novice world. The power system of Dao Zhengzheng can actually be said to be extremely high, and some realms are like a carrot and a pit, which is really not suitable for Zhutian. After all, those who like to watch Dao Zheng are basically here for the pure fairy flavor. Really, if the author of Dao Zhengzong writes Dao Zhengzheng into Zhu Tianwen, I don't think it looks good. Instead, it is like exploring the scenery on the cultivation road step by step, which has a different kind of refreshing feeling. , But it is indeed inappropriate to write the first world of Zhu Tian Wen with Dao Dao. After all, the world view of Dao Zhengfeng is actually very time-consuming. Unlike other immortal cultivation novels, the protagonist may have reached the top level in two or three years (just an example). Therefore, if Dao is used as the first world, the protagonist must sink for a long time, at least tens or hundreds of years.