Live Streaming Across the Heavens, Starting with The Legend of the Condor Heroes

So, Huang Rong was a good match; the protagonist and she had a great relationship, and it was a bit of a shame that she ended up with him.

I always see people in the group talking about how great their reader comments are, how they got scolded by readers, and I'm so envious. It's so frustrating! Why don't I get any reader comments? Even if you guys scold me, that's fine! Playing alone is so painful. I don't even know if anyone's reading, there's no feedback, and I don't know if my writing is good or not. It's so hard! 😭😭😭

I'll revise the setting for you; just the first chapter needs some changes. The setting should be that the system possesses a power that everyone can ignore, making even the most genuine livestreams feel subconsciously fake. Then, the protagonist should be told at the beginning that the system's livestreams feel entirely fake, leaving him with no choice but to resort to all sorts of deception!

If you don't want Huang Rong, just write less. Nobody's forcing you to accept her. You write so much and then don't accept her in the end. That's called giving her away, understand? If you have the ability to rebel, you deserve to die, don't you understand? No matter how many high-sounding reasons you give, they can't hide the fact that you gave your daughter away.

Doesn't the protagonist have any relatives or friends? Are the audience, platforms, and the country all idiots?

I've read up to chapter 107. Here are my thoughts (just my initial impressions, not some definitive advice): The plot of *The Legend of the Condor Heroes* is good; there are some minor logical flaws, but they don't detract from the overall experience. Overall, it's quite good. However, the later plot transitions are a bit weak, and the darker style shouldn't have come so suddenly.

It's fine that the protagonist doesn't marry Huang Rong, since Huang Rong had already interacted with Guo Jing at the beginning. But insisting on finding Li Mochou is really too much. If you're going to find her, couldn't you have arranged it before Lu Zhanyuan met her, or before Li Mochou started her killing spree? But having to do it after she's been abandoned—what's the point?

This world feels very strange to me. The system says that this world doesn't allow the existence of other world storylines, but after the system appears, the world is completely changed, making it feel like the protagonist is just a game player and the whole world is a game.

Damn it, if you want to take Li Mochou, just do it on the wall, okay? All this dawdling and beating around the bush, are you even a man? It's fine if you don't want Huang Rong, but you've waited so many years for Li Mochou, why are you being so soft-hearted now? Just grab her and make her pregnant!

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