I Turned into a Golden Crow in a Strange World

How can I put it, the writing is very good, but the content is a bit easy to hit the line. In short, cherish it, it may be blocked or modified one day.

I went for a run today. Do you know how far I ran? I ran a shape that loves you 💗

The human revolution in this book is simply a joke. The nature of the world itself is darkness. So what if the only way out is transplantation? The cultured people will also eat people. Then there will be more and more cannibals, and the world will get worse and worse. They can't change the fate of the human race, they can only change their own destiny.

First of all, the writing is quite good, but it gave me the impression that it was about cultivating immortals and not evolving into alien beasts. An alien beast has always been involved with the human race.

To be honest, after reading the first few dozen chapters, it really made my eyes light up. If I want to write a dark novel, I have to be dark to the end. The only regret is that I don't eat people, but the reason given by the author is barely suitable. I don't eat it but I don't stop others from eating it. I feel that it is handled well. But later on, I feel less and less. First, the plot of this article is no different from ordinary novels. It is no longer the style of dark literature. Second, the protagonist's thoughts have changed. The most obvious point is that he wants to change. Change this world, the further you read the novel, the more you get the feeling that the author has paved the way for the protagonist's subsequent cleansing. The protagonist's so-called great disciple is fighting for the human race, and the protagonist is given a incomplete book of exercises. Strictly speaking, the human ghost cultivators that the protagonist devours are inhuman. This is the author's setting. There is no difference between the protagonist's exercises and those of orthodox immortal cultivators. The opportunities the protagonist gets from the panel are all positive. I have a premonition that the protagonist will eventually fall into the arms of the so-called justice.

It feels like it's progressing too fast, which is probably a common problem with this type of devouring novel.

Why do you still think the protagonist upgrades quickly? After so many chapters, I felt that the protagonist's leveling up was too slow.

Very well written, why is there no one here?

After reading it in one go, I still like the beginning of Devouring Evolution, and the rest of it is okay, but I'm just not that satisfied.

If you want to watch the evolution of alien beasts, you can go. This is the flow of monsters cultivating immortals.

I can learn well, but why are there so few people?

This is the first time I have seen a book that is not constantly updated. Author, you are making it difficult for me to do this.

The writing is so messy, can't the protagonist swallow up the promotion? Why did you go to practice?

I wrote too little, please update quickly

So why doesn't the protagonist strengthen a few more times and then evolve? Did I not read carefully and set some settings?

You have a bug here, saying that the divine body is rare. If the master of the protagonist can reach the Nether Heaven Realm, he can join the Holy Land. But why didn't the Holy Land directly include the master of the protagonist in the Holy Land from the beginning when she was still weak?

I feel that the protagonist upgrades too quickly. I suggest adding a plot - 50/100/200/300 years later.

It's better if you write that people have the ability to evolve, but it's boring to see animals.

In the early days, it was still a novel about strange beasts. After a few dozen chapters, it became a traditional fantasy novel like Battle to the Sky. In the end, it was about eunuchs. Hey, if it had continued at the same pace as the early chapters, it would have been quite interesting. The author's writing style is also good, but it's a pity.

It's well written, but you have to consume it before you can speak, and you can't speak until it's on the shelves.

I don't know why I put so much effort into writing these demon slaying meetings.

The writing is actually pretty good, but my grades must be quite poor. I am currently pursuing studies in the 60s or 50s.

First order support, please ask Taoist friends to test the poison. "Immortal Tribulation One" has 500,000 words, all are free, and it is for mortals. It is absolutely brainless. The protagonist has a Tao fruit that can swallow the spiritual roots of heaven and earth. On the road to find his life experience, there are twists and turns, and finally fights with the immortal half-child.

This is the update speed, just wait for it to cool down

Could it be that the author took longer to write the novel than the protagonist was invincible? Will it be over in three to five years?